The following issue has been SUBMITTED. 
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https://www.austingroupbugs.net/view.php?id=1780 
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Reported By:                dannyniu
Assigned To:                
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Project:                    Issue 8 drafts
Issue ID:                   1780
Category:                   Rationale
Type:                       Clarification Requested
Severity:                   Editorial
Priority:                   normal
Status:                     New
Name:                       DannyNiu/NJF 
Organization:               <individual> 
User Reference:             c181.pdf 
Section:                    B.2.8 Realtime >> Message Passing 
Page Number:                3590 
Line Number:                122093-122095 
Final Accepted Text:         
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Date Submitted:             2023-10-17 02:34 UTC
Last Modified:              2023-10-17 02:34 UTC
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Summary:                    The punctuation is confusing/ambiguous
Description: 
Towards the end of the rationale for "Priotization of Messages", this is
said:

> The prioritization does add additional overhead to the message operations
in those cases it is actually used but a clever implementation can optimize
for the FIFO case to make that more efficient

It is confusing when reading towards the middle:

"... overhead to the message operations in those cases it is actually ..."

I suspect a comma is missing between "operations" and "in those cases".
Desired Action: 
Clarify this paragraph.
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Issue History 
Date Modified    Username       Field                    Change               
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2023-10-17 02:34 dannyniu       New Issue                                    
2023-10-17 02:34 dannyniu       Name                      => DannyNiu/NJF    
2023-10-17 02:34 dannyniu       Organization              => <individual>    
2023-10-17 02:34 dannyniu       User Reference            => c181.pdf        
2023-10-17 02:34 dannyniu       Section                   => B.2.8 Realtime >>
Message Passing
2023-10-17 02:34 dannyniu       Page Number               => 3590            
2023-10-17 02:34 dannyniu       Line Number               => 122093-122095   
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