On Mon, Dec 16, 2024 at 11:28:52AM -0800, Lynne Bartholomew wrote:
Dear all,
> Please note that this document awaits your review and approval. Please
> review via the links below, and let us know whether you approve this document
> for publication in its current form or additional changes are needed.
I have read the latest version and believe it to be OK and ready.
I have two observations and one editorial request:
1) The statement under 4.2 Completeness of the Response
At the time this document was published, there are 13 root server
operators operating a total of more than 1500 root server instances.
is factually incorrect, since we usually acknowledge the fact that there
are only twelve. I understand where this is coming from given the desire
to mention 'instances' and haven't checked the archives, so I won't block
on this one, but I think it's an avoidable mistake.
2) In that same sentence (and a few other occurences) I'd just note that the
mix of past and present tense, very recently introduced, looks very
confusing to me.
Obviously, as the only non-native speaker I'll just take this as a lesson.
3) Finally, my postal address is outdated, but I'd like to follow
Paul's and Matt's example and change this:
OLD:
Peter Koch
DENIC eG
Kaiserstrasse 75-77
60329 Frankfurt
Germany
Phone: +49 69 27235 0
Email: [email protected]
NEW:
Peter Koch
DENIC eG
Email: [email protected]
Kind regards and a Happy New Year
Peter
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