Hi,

Please find attached my responses to the questions asked in the draft and some 
changes that came in after we sent the document to the RFC Editors.

Thanks,
Tom


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> RFC9754 (draft-ietf-nfsv4-delstid-08)
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> Title            : Extending the Opening of Files in NFSv4.2
> Author(s)        : T. Haynes, T. Myklebust
> WG Chair(s)      : Brian Pawlowski, Christopher Inacio
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> Area Director(s) : Zaheduzzaman Sarker, Francesca Palombini
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