1) Thank you for pointing this out. With the initial AUTH48 email, we sent out
the following query:
6) <!-- [rfced] FYI, in the YANG tree, this line was followed by a
floating question mark, which we moved up to the preceding line.
This line exceeds the character limit (69 chars for <sourcecode>)
by 3 characters. For updating it, which option do you prefer?
Original:
| | | {certificate-expiration-notification}
?
Current:
| | | {certificate-expiration-notification}?
Option A (using the "\" line wrapping notation as used in Appendix A.1
and adding the note about line wrapping for formatting only):
| | | {certificate-expiration-notificati\
on}?
Option B (moving it 3 spaces to the left):
| | | {certificate-expiration-notification}?
-->
This was due to the "{certificate-expiration-notification}?" line exceeding the
character limit. With this in mind, should this change remain as is?
[JMC] I suggested option A since that is established with what other modules do
(and there is tooling to unwrap). If Mahesh strongly prefers B, I’m okay with
that.
> The third comment has to do with the description of the example in Section
> 6.1. It currently reads as:
>
> This example shows enabling console logging of syslogs of severity critical.
>
> The statement structure seems awkward. How about “This example shows how the
> console logging of syslog of severity critical can be enabled.”?
>
> Finally, a similar sentence restructuring for the description in Section 6.2
> also.
2) We have updated the sentence in Section 6.2 as follows. Please let us know
if any updates are needed. Additionally, should "severity error" be plural in
this sentence?
Current:
This example shows how the remote logging of syslogs to UDP destination
foo.example.com for facility auth and severity error can be enabled.
Perhaps:
This example shows how the remote logging of syslogs to UDP destination
foo.example.com for facility auth and severity errors can be enabled.
[JMC] I think the current text is more accurate. The severity name (from the
enumeration) is “error”.
Joe
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