On Wed, Apr 16, 2025 at 6:10 PM Kaelin Foody <kfo...@staff.rfc-editor.org>
wrote:

> Hi Alan, Paul (as AD),
>
> Paul, this is a friendly reminder to please review and let us know if you
> approve the new text (as shown in the diff files) in:
>
> - Section 1 (updated text in paragraph 3 per the reply to #4),
> - Section 3.3.2 (added text per the reply to #10), and
> - Section 5.2 (added text per the reply to #13).
>

APPROVED.

Paul


>
> Alan, thanks for your suggestion. Please see the updated files below and
> let us know if all of these changes are approved. Additionally, please note
> that we await your response to question #3:
>
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> The revised files are here (please refresh):
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9765.html
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9765.txt
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9765.pdf
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9765.xml
>
> This diff file shows all changes from the approved I-D:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9765-diff.html
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9765-rfcdiff.html (side by side)
>
> This diff file shows the changes made during AUTH48 thus far:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9765-auth48diff.html
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9765-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by
> side)
>
> Thank you.
> RFC Editor/kf
>
> > On Apr 9, 2025, at 3:28 PM, Alan DeKok <aland=
> 40freeradius....@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:
> >
> > On Apr 4, 2025, at 6:02 PM, Alice Russo <aru...@staff.rfc-editor.org>
> wrote:
> >> Alan, thank you for your reply. Please see the follow-up below. The
> revised files are here (please refresh):
> >
> >  Those look fine, thanks.
> >
> >> Re: #13, re:
> >>> Perhaps also add a note:
> >>> Further issues related to Message-Authenticator are discussed in
> [draft-ietf-radext-deprecating-radius].
> >>
> >> Is it correct that we should add this sentence to the end of Section
> 5.2 as its own paragraph, and add draft-ietf-radext-deprecating-radius as
> an informative reference, with anchor "DEPRECATE-RADIUS"?
> >
> >  Yes.
> >
> >  Alan DeKok.
> >
>
>
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