On Thu, Apr 17, 2025 at 11:55:01AM -0700, Lynne Bartholomew wrote:
> Thank you very much for the updated XML file and the clarifications!  
> Everything looks good!

Thank you for the update.

I'm submitting two more changes for issues I spotted while reading the
document again. One clarifies the meaning of the sentence where
"broadcast interleaved mode" was changed to "interleaved broadcast
mode". The other removes an incorrect space in "client/ server" due to
a line break.

Section  1. Introduction 

OLD: An NTPv4 implementation that supports the client/server and
interleaved broadcast modes interoperates with NTPv4 implementations
without this capability.

NEW: An NTPv4 implementation that supports the interleaved client/server and
interleaved broadcast modes interoperates with NTPv4 implementations
without this capability.

Section  2. Interleaved Client/Server Mode

OLD: The interleaved client/server mode is similar to the basic
client/ server mode.

NEW: The interleaved client/server mode is similar to the basic
client/server mode.

-- 
Miroslav Lichvar

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