Hi Med, Med - Thank you for your replies. The files have been updated accordingly. Please note that we have one follow-up question regarding one of your responses to RFC-to-be 9834:
>> 4) <!--[rfced] We note that the definitions for “Network controller" and >> "Service orchestrator" in RFC-to-be 9835 each have an additional sentence >> that does not appear in the definition in this document. Should this >> sentence be added? (Specifically, "One or multiple..." and “A service >> orchestrator may interact..." are the additional sentences.) >> >> This document (current): >> Network controller: Denotes a functional entity responsible for the >> management of the service provider network. >> ... >> Service orchestrator: Refers to a functional entity that interacts >> with the customer of a network service. >> >> A service orchestrator is typically responsible for the attachment >> circuits, the PE selection, and requesting the activation of the >> requested service to a network controller. >> >> RFC-to-be 9835: >> Network controller: Denotes a functional entity responsible for the >> management of the service provider network. One or multiple >> network controllers can be deployed in a service provider network. >> ... >> Service orchestrator: Refers to a functional entity that interacts >> with the customer of a network service. >> >> A service orchestrator is typically responsible for the attachment >> circuits, the Provider Edge (PE) selection, and requesting the >> activation of the requested services to a network controller. >> >> A service orchestrator may interact with one or more network >> controllers. >> --> > > [Med] Please add these sentences in RFC9833 as well. Thanks. ) As this document does not define “network controller” and “service orchestrator”, where would you like the following sentences to be added in the document? One or multiple network controllers can be deployed in a service provider network. … A service orchestrator may interact with one or more network controllers. --- The files have been posted here (please refresh): https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9833.xml https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9833.txt https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9833.html https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9833.pdf The relevant diff files have been posted here: https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9833-diff.html (comprehensive diff) https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9833-auth48diff.html (AUTH48 changes) https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9833-auth48rfcdiff.html (AUTH48 changes side by side) https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9833-lastdiff.html (last version to this one) https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9833-lastrfcdiff.html (rfcdiff between last version and this) We will await any further changes you may have as well as approvals from each author and Mahesh (AD) prior to moving this document forward in the publication process. Please see the AUTH48 status page for this document here: https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9833 Thank you, Alanna Paloma RFC Production Center > On Sep 2, 2025, at 12:22 AM, mohamed.boucad...@orange.com wrote: > > Re-, > > I have the following comment when reviewing the edited version: Please revert > to the OLD version and move RFC6241, RFC8040, and RFC8446 to be listed as > Informative References. These are provided as examples. > > Thank you. > > Cheers, > Med > >> -----Message d'origine----- >> De : Alanna Paloma <apal...@staff.rfc-editor.org> >> Envoyé : vendredi 29 août 2025 17:52 >> À : Wubo (lana) <lana.w...@huawei.com> >> Cc : Mahesh Jethanandani <mjethanand...@gmail.com>; BOUCADAIR >> Mohamed INNOV/NET <mohamed.boucad...@orange.com>; >> rrobe...@juniper.net; OSCAR GONZALEZ DE DIOS >> <oscar.gonzalezded...@telefonica.com>; >> samier.barguil_gira...@nokia.com; RFC Editor <rfc-editor@rfc- >> editor.org>; opsawg-...@ietf.org; opsawg-chairs <opsawg- >> cha...@ietf.org>; rro...@ciena.com; auth48archive >> <auth48archive@rfc-editor.org> >> Objet : Re: [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9833 <draft-ietf-opsawg-teas- >> common-ac-15> for your review >> >> >> Hi Bo, >> >> Thank you for your reply. 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AUTH48 status page for this document here: >> https://fra01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2F >> www.rfc- >> editor.org%2Fauth48%2Frfc9833&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40o >> range.com%7Cc10a5798bcec4aba20e508dde7141084%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc4 >> 8b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C638920795852945338%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d >> 8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOI >> joiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=xqkK%2BaKdolZkeeA8c >> 2FBPTxkPw7jEB0g8RoCUzRl4Lc%3D&reserved=0 >> >> Best regards, >> Alanna Paloma >> RFC Production Center >> >>> On Aug 29, 2025, at 12:37 AM, Wubo (lana) <lana.w...@huawei.com> >> wrote: >>> >>> Hi Alanna, >>> >>> Thanks you for the updates, they look good. >>> And please also see my reply in line with [Bo Wu]. >>> >>> Regards, >>> Bo >>> >>> -----Original Message----- >>> From: Alanna Paloma <apal...@staff.rfc-editor.org> >>> Sent: Friday, August 29, 2025 2:18 AM >>> To: Wubo (lana) <lana.w...@huawei.com>; Mahesh Jethanandani >>> <mjethanand...@gmail.com> >>> Cc: mohamed.boucadair <mohamed.boucad...@orange.com>; >>> rrobe...@juniper.net; OSCAR GONZALEZ DE DIOS >>> <oscar.gonzalezded...@telefonica.com>; >>> samier.barguil_gira...@nokia.com; RFC Editor >>> <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>; opsawg-...@ietf.org; opsawg-chairs >>> <opsawg-cha...@ietf.org>; rro...@ciena.com; auth48archive >>> <auth48archive@rfc-editor.org> >>> Subject: [AD] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9833 >>> <draft-ietf-opsawg-teas-common-ac-15> for your review >>> >>> Hi Bo and Mahesh*, >>> >>> *Mahesh - As the AD, please review and approve of the following >> reference added to the Normative References section. For context, >> this reference was only cited in the YANG module, so we have added >> a reference entry. >>> >>> [IEEE_802.1Q] >>> IEEE, "IEEE Standard for Local and Metropolitan Area >>> Networks-Bridges and Bridged Networks", IEEE Std 802.1Q- >>> 2022, DOI 10.1109/IEEESTD.2022.10004498, December 2022, >>> >> <https://fra01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2 >> Fdoi.org%2F10.1109%2FIEEESTD.2022.10004498&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed. >> boucadair%40orange.com%7Cc10a5798bcec4aba20e508dde7141084%7C90c7a2 >> 0af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C638920795852964575%7CUnknown% >> 7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJX >> aW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=oB9172 >> X8G%2F95dvqbrl8Ly4mvQVBITM0bgaZ7KVw3CDk%3D&reserved=0>. >>> >>> See this diff file for the update: >>> >> https://fra01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2F >> www. >>> rfc-editor.org%2Fauthors%2Frfc9833- >> lastdiff.html&data=05%7C02%7Cmohame >>> >> d.boucadair%40orange.com%7Cc10a5798bcec4aba20e508dde7141084%7C90c7 >> a20a >>> >> f34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C638920795852981661%7CUnknown%7C >> TWFp >>> >> bGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMi >> IsIk >>> >> FOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=JAHF0cQa5zzPkfN3 >> kHqW >>> z%2BMe3e9RgVjwcQCUO61O1nk%3D&reserved=0 >>> >>> >>> Bo - Thank you for your reply. The files have been updated >> accordingly. Please note that we have some follow-up questions. >>> >>> ) In Figure 6, is it intentional that the first item (grouping >> bgp-authentication) is indented one space less than each of the >> groupings that follow? In the original XML (and current XML), it's >> one space for grouping bgp-authentication vs. two spaces for the >> others. >>> [Bo Wu] I think this is NOT intentional. Please add one leading >> space to that line so it aligns with the rest. >>> >>> ) We ask that you review these previously sent questions and >> explicitly let us know if/what further updates are needed. >>> >>>> 6) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "type" attribute of each >> sourcecode >>>> element in the XML file to ensure correctness. 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The changes look good to me. >>>> For the remaining questions, I’m fine with the proposed changes >> unless my co-authors have any concerns. >>>> >>>> Regards, >>>> Bo >>>> >>>> -----Original Message----- >>>> From: Alanna Paloma <apal...@staff.rfc-editor.org> >>>> Sent: Wednesday, August 27, 2025 12:40 AM >>>> To: Wubo (lana) <lana.w...@huawei.com> >>>> Cc: mohamed.boucadair <mohamed.boucad...@orange.com>; >>>> rrobe...@juniper.net; OSCAR GONZALEZ DE DIOS >>>> <oscar.gonzalezded...@telefonica.com>; >>>> samier.barguil_gira...@nokia.com; Mahesh Jethanandani >>>> <mjethanand...@gmail.com>; RFC Editor <rfc-editor@rfc- >> editor.org>; >>>> opsawg-...@ietf.org; opsawg-chairs <opsawg-cha...@ietf.org>; >>>> rro...@ciena.com; auth48archive <auth48archive@rfc-editor.org> >>>> Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9833 >>>> <draft-ietf-opsawg-teas-common-ac-15> for your review >>>> >>>> Hi Bo, >>>> >>>> Thank you for your reply. 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align >> its use of “Network Slice Service” with RFC 9543, as shown below: >>>>> >>>>> OLD: >>>>> (e.g., Network Slice Service [YANG-NSS])) >>>>> >>>>> NEW: >>>>> (e.g., RFC 9543 Network Slice Service [NSSM])) >>>>> >>>>> Thanks, >>>>> Bo >>>>> >>>>> -----Original Message----- >>>>> From: Alanna Paloma <apal...@staff.rfc-editor.org> >>>>> Sent: Friday, August 22, 2025 12:31 AM >>>>> To: mohamed.boucadair <mohamed.boucad...@orange.com>; >>>>> rrobe...@juniper.net; OSCAR GONZALEZ DE DIOS >>>>> <oscar.gonzalezded...@telefonica.com>; >>>>> samier.barguil_gira...@nokia.com; Wubo (lana) >> <lana.w...@huawei.com> >>>>> Cc: Mahesh Jethanandani <mjethanand...@gmail.com>; RFC Editor >>>>> <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>; opsawg-...@ietf.org; opsawg- >> chairs >>>>> <opsawg-cha...@ietf.org>; rro...@ciena.com; auth48archive >>>>> <auth48archive@rfc-editor.org> >>>>> Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9833 >>>>> <draft-ietf-opsawg-teas-common-ac-15> for your review >>>>> >>>>> Authors, >>>>> >>>>> This is a friendly reminder that we await your response to our >> previously sent questions. >>>>> >>>>> We will wait to hear from you before continuing with the >> publication process. >>>>> >>>>> The AUTH48 status page for this document is located here: >>>>> >> https://fra01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2F >> ww >>>>> w.rfc- >> editor.org%2Fauth48%2Frfc9833&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.boucadair >>>>> >> %40orange.com%7Cc10a5798bcec4aba20e508dde7141084%7C90c7a20af34b40b >> fb >>>>> >> c48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C638920795853331972%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb >> 3d >>>>> >> 8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOI >> jo >>>>> >> iTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=pWKcfm1h5t0uWmUpRWrq5 >> le >>>>> U9waNBkz%2FY6V%2BzlbmyhQ%3D&reserved=0 >>>>> >>>>> Thank you, >>>>> Alanna Paloma >>>>> RFC Production Center >>>>> >>>>>> On Aug 14, 2025, at 11:46 AM, Alanna Paloma >> <apal...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: >>>>>> >>>>>> Hi Mahesh, >>>>>> >>>>>> Thank you for confirming. We’ve noted your approval: >>>>>> >> https://fra01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2F >> w >>>>>> ww.rfc- >> editor.org%2Fauth48%2Frfc9833&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.boucada >>>>>> >> ir%40orange.com%7Cc10a5798bcec4aba20e508dde7141084%7C90c7a20af34b4 >> 0 >>>>>> >> bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C638920795853345549%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbG >> Z >>>>>> >> sb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsI >> k >>>>>> >> FOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=CYSlfHpzsL3Q1gtz >> O >>>>>> tNjxM6fuBfQ1cCIq3jY735yYos%3D&reserved=0 >>>>>> >>>>>> Alanna Paloma >>>>>> RFC Production Center >>>>>> >>>>>>> On Aug 14, 2025, at 11:22 AM, Mahesh Jethanandani >> <mjethanand...@gmail.com> wrote: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Hi Alanna, >>>>>>> >>>>>>> The changes look good to me. Thanks. >>>>>>> >>>>>>>> On Aug 14, 2025, at 9:35 AM, Alanna Paloma >> <apal...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> Hi Mahesh, >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> Thank you for your reply. 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Jethanandani >> <mjethanand...@gmail.com> wrote: >>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>> Hi, >>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>> On Aug 11, 2025, at 10:46 PM, rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org >> wrote: >>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>> Authors, AD, >>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>> * Mahesh (as AD), please reply to #5. >>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please >> resolve (as necessary) the following questions, which are also in >> the XML file. >>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>> 1) <!--[rfced] To avoid back-to-back use of "For >> example", may >>>>>>>>>> we update the second occurrence as follows? >>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>> Original: >>>>>>>>>> For example, a >>>>>>>>>> server can be a network controller or a router in a >> provider >>>>>>>>>> network. >>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>> For example, a bearer request is first created using a >> name >>>>>>>>>> which is assigned by the client, but if this feature is >>>>>>>>>> supported, the request will also include a server- >> generated reference. >>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>> Perhaps: >>>>>>>>>> For example, a >>>>>>>>>> server can be a network controller or a router in a >> provider >>>>>>>>>> network. >>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>> As another example, a bearer request is first created >> using a >>>>>>>>>> name that is assigned by the client, but if this feature >> is >>>>>>>>>> supported, the request will also include a server- >> generated reference. >>>>>>>>>> --> >>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>> 2) <!--[rfced] To improve readability, may we update "to" >> to "for"? >>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>> Original: >>>>>>>>>> * 'bw-per-site': The bandwidth is to all ACs that >> belong to >>>>>>>>>> the same site. >>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>> Perhaps: >>>>>>>>>> 'bw-per-site': The bandwidth is for all ACs that belong >> to the >>>>>>>>>> same site. >>>>>>>>>> --> >>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>> 3) <!-- [rfced] We note that the following reference is >> cited >>>>>>>>>> only in the YANG module. In order to have a 1:1 matchup >> between >>>>>>>>>> the references section and the text, may we add the >> following >>>>>>>>>> reference entry to the Normative References and add it to >> the >>>>>>>>>> list of citations preceding the YANG module? >>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>> Original: >>>>>>>>>> This module uses types defined in [RFC6991], [RFC8177], >> and >>>>>>>>>> [RFC9181]. >>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>> Perhaps: >>>>>>>>>> This module uses types defined in [RFC6991], [RFC8177], >>>>>>>>>> [RFC9181], and [IEEE_802.1Q]. >>>>>>>>>> ... >>>>>>>>>> [IEEE_802.1Q] >>>>>>>>>> IEEE, "IEEE Standard for Local and Metropolitan >> Area >>>>>>>>>> Networks-Bridges and Bridged Networks", IEEE Std >> 802.1Q- >>>>>>>>>> 2022, DOI 10.1109/IEEESTD.2022.10004498, December >> 2022, >>>>>>>>>> >> <https://fra01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2 >> Fdoi.org%2F10.1109%2FIEEESTD.2022.10004498&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed. >> boucadair%40orange.com%7Cc10a5798bcec4aba20e508dde7141084%7C90c7a2 >> 0af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C638920795853473751%7CUnknown% >> 7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJX >> aW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=2YYDKT >> PT%2ByqiW1IMbY8YxGeoFzBhKaybfTM9X6wwWko%3D&reserved=0>. >>>>>>>>>> --> >>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>> 4) <!--[rfced] FYI, the YANG module has been updated per >> the >>>>>>>>>> formatting option of pyang. Please let us know any >> concerns. >>>>>>>>>> --> >>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>> 5) <!--[rfced] *AD - We note that there is some text in >> the >>>>>>>>>> Security Considerations that differs from the template on >>>>>>>>>> >> <https://fra01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2 >> Fwiki.ietf.org%2Fgroup%2Fops%2Fyang-security- >> guidelines&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40orange.com%7Cc10a579 >> 8bcec4aba20e508dde7141084%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7 >> C0%7C638920795853489164%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOn >> RydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoy >> fQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=2kTFzyutojGJ7u9APUNak4BYRQylTvhYhf0uK7 >> 1%2Fb4U%3D&reserved=0>. >>>>>>>>>> Please review and let us know if the text is acceptable. >> Specifically: >>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>> - Paragraph 5 matches the template except for the last >> sentence >>>>>>>>>> is an addition. Paragraph 6 does not seem to correspond >> to the template. >>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>> - This sentence is not present, although the template >> says to include it. >>>>>>>>>> "There are no particularly sensitive RPC or action >> operations." >>>>>>>>>> If it should be added, should it be at the end of the >> section? >>>>>>>>>> --> >>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>> The security considerations in this draft are truly >> unique. As such, the template mostly does not apply. >>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>> Please remove the first sentence in the Security >> Considerations section that goes like “This section is modeled >> after the template …”. Only the second and third paragraphs do, >> and even then, it is just a cut-and-paste. 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