Hi Bo, Thank you for your approval. We’ve noted it on the AUTH48 status page: https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9835
Best regards, Alanna Paloma RFC Production Center > On Sep 4, 2025, at 7:27 PM, Wubo (lana) <lana.w...@huawei.com> wrote: > > Hi Alanna, > > Many thanks for your updates. I approve the publication of this document. > > Regards, > Bo > -----Original Message----- > From: Alanna Paloma <apal...@staff.rfc-editor.org> > Sent: Thursday, September 4, 2025 2:18 AM > To: mohamed.boucad...@orange.com > Cc: rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org; rrobe...@juniper.net; > oscar.gonzalezded...@telefonica.com; samier.barguil_gira...@nokia.com; Wubo > (lana) <lana.w...@huawei.com>; opsawg-...@ietf.org; opsawg-cha...@ietf.org; > kszarkow...@juniper.net; mjethanand...@gmail.com; auth48archive@rfc-editor.org > Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9835 > <draft-ietf-opsawg-ntw-attachment-circuit-16> for your review > > Hi Med, > > Thank you for your reply. We have noted your approval on the AUTH48 status > page: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9835 > > Additionally, we have updated the files per your request. > > The files have been posted here (please refresh): > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9835.xml > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9835.txt > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9835.html > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9835.pdf > > The relevant diff files have been posted here: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9835-diff.html (comprehensive diff) > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9835-auth48diff.html (AUTH48 changes) > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9835-auth48rfcdiff.html (AUTH48 changes > side by side) https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9835-lastdiff.html (last > version to this one) > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9835-lastrfcdiff.html (rfcdiff between > last version and this) > > Once we’ve received approvals from Richard, Oscar, Samier, and Bo, we will > move this document forward in the publication process. > > Thank you, > Alanna Paloma > RFC Production Center > >> On Sep 2, 2025, at 10:44 PM, mohamed.boucad...@orange.com wrote: >> >> Hi Alanna, >> >> Thank you for preparing this updated version. I have some few comments: >> >> * Please expand AC in the introduction: >> >> OLD: >> The procedure to provision a service in a service provider network >> may depend on the practices adopted by a service provider, including >> the flow put in place for the provisioning of advanced network >> services and how they are bound to an AC. >> >> NEW: >> The procedure to provision a service in a service provider network >> may depend on the practices adopted by a service provider, including >> the flow put in place for the provisioning of advanced network >> services and how they are bound to an attachment circuit (AC). >> >> * fix a naming bug in Figure 1 as we have two "CE5"! >> >> OLD: >> .--. >> |CE6| >> '-+' >> ac | .--. .--. >> | |CE5+------+------+CE2| >> .-----+-----. '--' | '--' >> | | |ac >> | | | >> .+. .+. .+. >> .-+sap+-------+sap+-. .-+sap+-------------. >> | '-' '-' | | '-' | >> | PE1 | | PE2 | >> .--. .+. | | | >> |CE1+--+sap| | | | >> '--' ac '+' | | | >> '-------------------' '-------------------' >> >> .-------------------. .-------------------. >> | | | .+. ac .--. >> | PE3 | | PE4 |sap+--+CE5| >> | | | '-' '--' >> | | | | >> | .-. | | .-. .-. .-. | >> '-------------+sap+-' '-+sap+-+sap+-+sap+-' >> '+' '+' '+' '+' >> |ac | |ac |ac >> .+-. | .+-. | >> |CE3+-----ac-----' |CE4+---' >> '--' '--' >> >> NEW: >> .--. >> |CE6| >> '-+' >> ac | .--. .--. >> | |CE5+------+------+CE2| >> .-----+-----. '--' | '--' >> | | |ac >> | | | >> .+. .+. .+. >> .-+sap+-------+sap+-. .-+sap+-------------. >> | '-' '-' | | '-' | >> | PE1 | | PE2 | >> .--. .+. | | | >> |CE1+--+sap| | | | >> '--' ac '+' | | | >> '-------------------' '-------------------' >> >> .-------------------. .-------------------. >> | | | .+. ac .--. >> | PE3 | | PE4 |sap+--+CE7| >> | | | '-' '--' >> | | | | >> | .-. | | .-. .-. .-. | >> '-------------+sap+-' '-+sap+-+sap+-+sap+-' >> '+' '+' '+' '+' >> |ac | |ac |ac >> .+-. | .+-. | >> |CE3+-----ac-----' |CE4+---' >> '--' '--' >> >> * For consistency with other documents in the cluster, change "parent AC" to >> "Parent AC" and "child AC" to "Child AC" >> >> Assuming these changes are made, I approve the publication of the document. >> >> Thank you. >> >> Cheers, >> Med >> >>> -----Message d'origine----- >>> De : Alanna Paloma <apal...@staff.rfc-editor.org> Envoyé : mercredi 3 >>> septembre 2025 00:18 À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET >>> <mohamed.boucad...@orange.com> Cc : rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org; >>> rrobe...@juniper.net; oscar.gonzalezded...@telefonica.com; >>> samier.barguil_gira...@nokia.com; lana.w...@huawei.com; opsawg- >>> a...@ietf.org; opsawg-cha...@ietf.org; kszarkow...@juniper.net; >>> mjethanand...@gmail.com; auth48archive@rfc-editor.org Objet : Re: >>> AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9835 <draft-ietf-opsawg-ntw- >>> attachment-circuit-16> for your review >>> >>> >>> Hi Med, >>> >>> Thank you for your reply. 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>>> >>> Please see the AUTH48 status page for this document here: >>> https://fra01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2F >>> www.rfc- >>> editor.org%2Fauth48%2Frfc9835&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40o >>> range.com%7C9afbeb0e86144af1bc2008ddea6e9eda%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc4 >>> 8b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C638924483290431180%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d >>> 8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOI >>> joiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=o6EQMJqCa9%2FrZddk9 >>> VcbVyeTWNLZdPlCKe8d0%2BlS%2FAM%3D&reserved=0 >>> >>> Thank you, >>> Alanna Paloma >>> RFC Production Center >>> >>>> On Sep 2, 2025, at 1:18 AM, mohamed.boucad...@orange.com wrote: >>>> >>>> Hi Alanna, all, >>>> >>>> Please find below some comments about the edited version: >>>> >>>> * Section 1: Please revert to the original text as SAP was not >>>> expanded before >>>> >>>> CURRENT: network' model [RFC8345] and the SAP model [RFC9408] >>>> NEW: network' model [RFC8345] and the Service Attachment Point >>> (SAP) >>>> model [RFC9408] >>>> >>>> * Section 2: adding missing "VPN" mentions >>>> >>>> CURRENT: >>>> LxSM refers to both the Layer 2 Service Model (L2SM) [RFC8466] >>> and >>>> the Layer 3 Service Model (L3SM) [RFC8299]. >>>> >>>> NEW >>>> LxSM refers to both the L2VPN Service Model (L2SM) [RFC8466] >>> and >>>> the L3VPN Service Model (L3SM) [RFC8299]. >>>> >>>> * Section 2: Please revert to the original as PE was not >>> expanded yet >>>> >>>> CURRENT: the PE selection >>>> NEW: the Provider Edge (PE) selection >>>> >>>> * Section 2: fix a reference >>>> >>>> OLD: >>>> | ac-svc | ietf-ac-svc | Section 5.2 of [RFC9834] | >>>> >>>> NEW: >>>> | ac-svc | ietf-ac-svc | Section 6.2 of [RFC9834] | >>>> >>>> * Section 7 >>>> >>>> I prefer the order in the original text as the para that was >>> moved >>>> falls under the "reusable" types from other modules covered in >>> this >>>> section: >>>> >>> https://fra01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2F >>> wiki >>>> .ietf.org%2Fgroup%2Fops%2Fyang-security-guidelines%23reusable- >>> grouping >>>> s-from-other-modules- >>> section&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40orange >>>> >>> .com%7C9afbeb0e86144af1bc2008ddea6e9eda%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b925 >>> 3b6f >>>> >>> 5d20%7C0%7C0%7C638924483290446517%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0 >>> eU1h >>>> >>> cGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIl >>> dUIj >>>> >>> oyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=D%2B5KaIp9C1HRxsZ9UdD0lnDCONdvixBqei >>> Wkw% >>>> 2Bwt5UY%3D&reserved=0 >>>> >>>> * Please revert to the OLD version and move RFC4252, RFC6241, >>> RFC8040, >>>> RFC8446, RFC9000 to be listed as Informative References. These >>> are >>>> provided as examples. FWIW, please refer to the note at >>>> >>> https://fra01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2F >>> wiki >>>> .ietf.org%2Fgroup%2Fops%2Fyang-security- >>> guidelines&data=05%7C02%7Cmoha >>>> >>> med.boucadair%40orange.com%7C9afbeb0e86144af1bc2008ddea6e9eda%7C90 >>> c7a2 >>>> >>> 0af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C638924483290462328%7CUnknown% >>> 7CTW >>>> >>> FpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4z >>> MiIs >>>> >>> IkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=n%2FO8x3TjQ09w >>> 2Gzg >>>> tcRlT2XXB8BeOd70xOI3TdnCIG0%3D&reserved=0 >>>> >>>> Thank you. >>>> >>>> Cheers, >>>> Med >>>> >>>>> -----Message d'origine----- >>>>> De : rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org> >>> Envoyé : >>>>> mardi 12 août 2025 07:49 À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET >>>>> <mohamed.boucad...@orange.com>; rrobe...@juniper.net; >>>>> oscar.gonzalezded...@telefonica.com; >>>>> samier.barguil_gira...@nokia.com; lana.w...@huawei.com Cc : >>>>> rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org; opsawg-...@ietf.org; opsawg- >>>>> cha...@ietf.org; kszarkow...@juniper.net; >>> mjethanand...@gmail.com; >>>>> auth48archive@rfc-editor.org Objet : AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9835 >>>>> <draft-ietf-opsawg-ntw-attachment- >>>>> circuit-16> for your review >>>>> >>>>> *****IMPORTANT***** >>>>> >>>>> Updated 2025/08/11 >>>>> >>>>> RFC Author(s): >>>>> -------------- >>>>> >>>>> Instructions for Completing AUTH48 >>>>> >>>>> Your document has now entered AUTH48. 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