Hi Alicja,

Thank you for your reply. We have noted your approval on the AUTH48 status page 
for this document (see https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9879).

We have a couple of comments:

1) For question #2, do you prefer the original, or would like for us to update 
to the text you provided (see below)? Once this has been addressed, we will 
begin to prepare the document for publication.

> so the closest one would be:
> 
>    Unfortunately, [RFC7292]
>    mandates the use of a password-based key derivation
>    function that is specific to PKCS #12 and that PBKDF only allows for     
> change of the underlying message digest
>    function.

2) You also noted this:

> I don't know the significance of the fact that the included ASN.1 Module
> addresses one of the errata filed against the RFCs updated by this document.

When a document updates or obsoletes other RFCs, we ask the authors to review 
the errata for those RFCs to ensure that none of the errors appear in the 
current document. In the past, we have encountered instances where errata were 
not addressed or where an erratum was addressed but the erratum report itself 
had not been verified or held for document update. For this document, the issue 
reported in EID 5808 (set as verified) is not repeated in this document, so no 
further action is needed. Thank you for reviewing the errata.

Best regards,

Rebecca VanRheenen
RFC Production Center



> On Sep 12, 2025, at 9:49 AM, Alicja Kario 
> <[email protected]> wrote:
> 
> I don't know the significance of the fact that the included ASN.1 Module
> addresses one of the errata filed against the RFCs updated by this document.
> 
> I don't think the proposed changes to Introduction actually makes the text
> clearer.
> 
> All the other included changes look good to me, so I'm OK with it
> being published as-is.
> 
> On Tuesday, 9 September 2025 01:59:11 CEST, [email protected] wrote:
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>> --------------------------------------
>> RFC9879 (draft-ietf-lamps-rfc9579bis-06)
>> 
>> Title            : Use of Password-Based Message Authentication Code 1 
>> (PBMAC1) in PKCS #12 Syntax
>> Author(s)        : A. Kario
>> WG Chair(s)      : Russ Housley, Tim Hollebeek
>> Area Director(s) : Deb Cooley, Paul Wouters
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> -- 
> Regards,
> Alicja Kario
> Principal Quality Engineer, RHEL Crypto team
> Web: www.cz.redhat.com
> Red Hat Czech s.r.o., Purkyňova 115, 612 00, Brno, Czech Republic
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