Hi Jorge, Thank you for your reply. We have updated the references and will continue with publication shortly.
Thank you, Sandy Ginoza RFC Production Center > On Sep 19, 2025, at 5:00 AM, Jorge Rabadan (Nokia) <[email protected]> > wrote: > > Hi Sandy, > > It’s a good catch. > Those are informative references, so they don’t have any impact on the text, > but it is good to replace them with the updated RFCs indeed. > Can you do that please? > > Thank you! > Jorge > > From: Sandy Ginoza <[email protected]> > Date: Thursday, September 18, 2025 at 11:48 AM > To: Wen Lin <[email protected]> > Cc: Jorge Rabadan (Nokia) <[email protected]>, Senthil Sathappan > (Nokia) <[email protected]>, Jeffrey (Zhaohui) Zhang > <[email protected]>, Jayant Kotalwar (Nokia) <[email protected]>, > RFC Editor <[email protected]>, [email protected] > <[email protected]>, [email protected] <[email protected]>, > [email protected] <[email protected]>, Gunter van de Velde (Nokia) > <[email protected]>, [email protected] > <[email protected]> > Subject: Final question - Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9856 > <draft-ietf-bess-evpn-redundant-mcast-source-15> for your review > > > CAUTION: This is an external email. Please be very careful when clicking > links or opening attachments. See the URL nok.it/ext for additional > information. > > > > Greetings authors, > > While preparing this RFC for publication, we noticed references to a couple > of obsolete RFCs. May we update the references as follows? > > RFC 3376 obsoleted by RFC 9776 > RFC 9776 (STD 100): Internet Group Management Protocol, Version 3 > > RFC 3810 obsoleted by RFC 9777 > RFC 9777 (STD 101): Multicast Listener Discovery Version 2 (MLDv2) for IPv6 > > > As cited in the text: > > IGMP: Internet Group Management Protocol [RFC3376]. > MLD: Multicast Listener Discovery [RFC3810]. > > > The current files are available here: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9856.xml > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9856.txt > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9856.pdf > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9856.html > > > We will wait for your guidance before announcing RFC 9856. Note that a reply > from one of the authors is sufficient at this time. > > Sandy Ginoza > RFC Production Center > > > > > On Sep 5, 2025, at 6:16 AM, Sarah Tarrant <[email protected]> > > wrote: > > > > All, > > > > We have now received all necessary approvals and consider AUTH48 complete: > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9856 > > > > Thank you for your attention and guidance during the AUTH48 process. > > > > We will move this document forward in the publication process at this time. > > > > Sincerely, > > Sarah Tarrant > > RFC Production Center > > > >> On Sep 4, 2025, at 3:42 PM, Sarah Tarrant <[email protected]> > >> wrote: > >> > >> Hi Wen, > >> > >> Thank you for your reply. We have marked your approval on the AUTH48 > >> status page for this document (see > >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9856). > >> > >> Thank you, > >> Sarah Tarrant > >> RFC Production Center > >> > >>> On Sep 4, 2025, at 1:20 PM, Wen Lin <[email protected]> wrote: > >>> > >>> Thanks Jorge, Jeffrey and Sarah. > >>> The changes look good and I approve the changes. > >>> Wen > >>> > >>> Juniper Business Use Only > >>> From: Sarah Tarrant <[email protected]> > >>> Date: Thursday, September 4, 2025 at 9:11 AM > >>> To: Jorge Rabadan (Nokia) <[email protected]>, Senthil Sathappan > >>> (Nokia) <[email protected]>, Jeffrey (Zhaohui) Zhang > >>> <[email protected]> > >>> Cc: [email protected] <[email protected]>, Jayant > >>> Kotalwar (Nokia) <[email protected]>, Wen Lin <[email protected]>, > >>> [email protected] <[email protected]>, [email protected] > >>> <[email protected]>, [email protected] <[email protected]>, Gunter > >>> van de Velde (Nokia) <[email protected]>, > >>> [email protected] <[email protected]> > >>> Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9856 > >>> <draft-ietf-bess-evpn-redundant-mcast-source-15> for your review > >>> [External Email. 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Intra-Subnet IP Multicast Forwarding > >>>>> > >>>>> ... > >>>>> Procedures for Model (b) are specified in [RFC9251]. > >>>>> > >>>>> [RFC9572] should also be added here: > >>>>> > >>>>> Procedures for Model (b) are specified in [RFC9251] and [RFC9572]. > >>>>> > >>>>> For the following: > >>>>> > >>>>> An SFG can be represented as (*,G) if any source transmitting > >>>>> multicast traffic to group G is considered a redundant G-source. > >>>>> Alternatively, this document allows an SFG to be represented as > >>>>> (S,G), where the source IP address S is a prefix of variable length. > >>>>> In this case, a source is deemed a redundant G-source for the SFG if > >>>>> its address falls within the specified prefix. > >>>>> > >>>>> In the alternative case, we'd need (S,G) state but in some places of > >>>>> the document only talks about (*G). We can add one sentence to clarify: > >>>>> > >>>>> ... In the remainder of this document, some examples use (*,G) state > >>>>> for brevity. Wherever an SFG is represented as (*,G), it should be > >>>>> understood as interchangeable with (S,G).” > >>>>> > >>>>> In the following (and the remainder of the document): > >>>>> > >>>>> ... In this > >>>>> solution, all upstream PEs connected to redundant G-sources for an > >>>>> SFG (*,G) or (S,G) elect a "Single Forwarder (SF)" among themselves. > >>>>> After the Single Forwarder is elected, the upstream PEs apply Reverse > >>>>> Path Forwarding checks to the multicast state for the SFG: > >>>>> > >>>>> * Non-Single Forwarder Behavior: A non-Single Forwarder upstream PE > >>>>> discards all (*,G) or (S,G) packets received over its local AC. > >>>>> > >>>>> The wording "Non-Single Forwarder" is better replaced with "Non-SF". > >>>>> > >>>>> For the following warm-standby procedure: > >>>>> > >>>>> - Route Targets (RTs): The Supplementary Broadcast Domain > >>>>> Route Target (SBD-RT), if applicable, and the Broadcast > >>>>> Domain Route Target (BD-RT) of the Broadcast Domain > >>>>> receiving the traffic. The SBD-RT is needed so that the > >>>>> route is imported by all PEs attached to the tenant domain > >>>>> in an OISM solution. > >>>>> > >>>>> We should flip the order of SBD-RT and BD-RT, as follows: > >>>>> > >>>>> - Route Targets (RTs): The Broadcast > >>>>> Domain Route Target (BD-RT) of the Broadcast Domain > >>>>> receiving the traffic, and, if applicable the Supplementary > >>>>> Broadcast Domain Route Target (SBD-RT), which is needed so > >>>>> that the > >>>>> route is imported by all PEs attached to the tenant domain > >>>>> in an OISM solution. > >>>>> > >>>>> Thanks. > >>>>> Jeffrey > >>>>> > >>>>> > >>>>> Juniper Business Use Only > >>>>> -----Original Message----- > >>>>> From: Sarah Tarrant <[email protected]> > >>>>> Sent: Friday, August 29, 2025 9:12 AM > >>>>> To: Jorge Rabadan (Nokia) <[email protected]> > >>>>> Cc: [email protected]; Jayant Kotalwar (Nokia) > >>>>> <[email protected]>; Senthil Sathappan (Nokia) > >>>>> <[email protected]>; Jeffrey (Zhaohui) Zhang > >>>>> <[email protected]>; Wen Lin <[email protected]>; [email protected]; > >>>>> [email protected]; [email protected]; Gunter van de Velde (Nokia) > >>>>> <[email protected]>; [email protected] > >>>>> Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9856 > >>>>> <draft-ietf-bess-evpn-redundant-mcast-source-15> for your review > >>>>> > >>>>> [External Email. 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> >>>>>>> <[email protected]>, [email protected]<[email protected]>, > >>>>>>> Gunter van de Velde (Nokia) <[email protected]>, > >>>>>>> [email protected] <[email protected]> > >>>>>>> Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9856 > >>>>>>> <draft-ietf-bess-evpn-redundant-mcast-source-15> for your review > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> CAUTION: This is an external email. Please be very careful when > >>>>>>> clicking links or opening attachments. See the URL > >>>>>>> nok.it/extforadditional information. > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> Authors, > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as > >>>>>>> necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML file. > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> 1) <!-- [rfced] Would you like the references to be alphabetized or > >>>>>>> left in their current order? > >>>>>>> --> > >>>>>>> [jorge] yes, please > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> 2) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that appear > >>>>>>> in the title) for use on > >>>>>>> https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Furldefense.com%2Fv3%2F__https%3A%2F%2Feur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com%2F%3Furl%3Dhttps*3A*2F*2Furldefense.com*2Fv3*2F__https*3A*2F*2Fwww.rfc-editor.org*2Fsearch__*3B!!NE%26data%3D05*7C02*7Cjorge.rabadan*40nokia.com*7Cc8bf0e164b9a40a0189108ddeb1b09ea*7C5d4717519675428d917b70f44f9630b0*7C0*7C0*7C638925224022193198*7CUnknown*7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ*3D*3D*7C0*7C*7C*7C%26sdata%3DYD8FUL7L6VD2ztC7NpxcPBQ*2Fpbl8OP75yGzJMLf*2BbXg*3D%26reserved%3D0__%3BJSUlJSUlJSUlJSUlJSUlJSUlJSUlJSUlJSUlJSU!!NEt6yMaO-gk!GRHVlH4vuHvuGrSOIQWhNEx5TQfx_GehOtyjMEH9RVaWFhJsRCkH5SugmBO7-dx--03SuUtdhHAYaQ7c6TKR-alv%24&data=05%7C02%7Cjorge.rabadan%40nokia.com%7C18a4d6ed2331406178b808ddf6e3e7e1%7C5d4717519675428d917b70f44f9630b0%7C0%7C0%7C638938181247314412%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=Kqzw0pxuCDYnV62tXPrtLJqGL%2BZs0mgIN8HW7isuQqo%3D&reserved=0 > >>>>>>> t6yMaO-gk!GvcdQU1qwnLEAD-VOlPPWPvjiUomNVrv_97acvcxa0N4d6yIGx8yietKEz > >>>>>>> 4V3RNrN6jcbTIWfp8jt3_EqADKNjS4J8Y$ . --> [jorge] Warm standby, hot > >>>>>>> standby, OISM, redundant G-source, SFG, Single Flow Group > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> 3) <!-- [rfced] We have removed "(IP DA)" as the abbreviation does > >>>>>>> not seem to be used in this document. DA (by itself) also does not > >>>>>>> appear. > >>>>>>> Elsewhere, the text refers to "destination IP address". Are these > >>>>>>> the same? Should the definition for G-traffic be updated for > >>>>>>> consistency? > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> Original: > >>>>>>> * G-traffic: any frame with an IP payload whose IP Destination > >>>>>>> Address (IP DA) is a multicast group G. > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> Perhaps: > >>>>>>> G-traffic: Any frame with an IP payload whose destination IP address > >>>>>>> is a multicast group G. > >>>>>>> [jorge] your suggestion is good > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> --> > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> 4) <!-- [rfced] Should "destinated" be "destined? > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> Original: > >>>>>>> In these scenarios, the upstream PE pushes > >>>>>>> the S-ESI labels on packets not only destinated for PEs > >>>>>>> sharing the ES but also for all PEs within the tenant > >>>>>>> domain. > >>>>>>> --> > >>>>>>> [jorge] yes, it should be “destined” > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> 5) <!-- [rfced] Since RFC 9573 uses the term "Context-Specific Label > >>>>>>> Space ID Extended Community" rather than "Context Label Space ID > >>>>>>> Extended Community", may we update to match? Note this would also > >>>>>>> update the following terms to the term on the right: > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> context label spaces > context-specific label spaces > >>>>>>> context label space ID > context-specific label space ID > >>>>>>> --> > >>>>>>> [jorge] yes, I agree it should match > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> 6) <!-- [rfced] Should "Flag" be part of the name? The other > >>>>>>> registered values do not include "Flag". It seems redundant, since > >>>>>>> it is a registry of flags. If "Flag" is to be removed, we will ask > >>>>>>> IANA to update their registry accordingly. > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> Original Table 2: > >>>>>>> +=====+==============+===============+ > >>>>>>> | Bit | Name | Reference | > >>>>>>> +=====+==============+===============+ > >>>>>>> | 5 | ESI-DCB Flag | This Document | > >>>>>>> --> > >>>>>>> [jorge] yes, it is redundant, it can be suppressed if you want. > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> 7) <!-- [rfced] Throughout the text, several abbreviations are > >>>>>>> introduced but not used or are repeatedly defined. Please consider > >>>>>>> whether the abbreviated form should be used in most cases once the > >>>>>>> term has been introduced. > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> For example: > >>>>>>> Attachment Circuit (AC) > >>>>>>> Assisted Replication (AR) > >>>>>>> Bit Indexed Explicit Replication (BIER) > >>>>>>> Domain-wide Common Block (DCB) > >>>>>>> Designated Forwarder (DF) > >>>>>>> Ethernet Segment (ES) > >>>>>>> Ethernet Segment Identifier (ESI) > >>>>>>> Inclusive Multicast Ethernet Tag (IMET) > >>>>>>> Ingress Replication (IR) > >>>>>>> Supplementary Broadcast Domain (SBD) > >>>>>>> Supplementary Broadcast Domain Route Target (SBD-RT) > >>>>>>> Selective Multicast Ethernet Tag (SMET) > >>>>>>> --> > >>>>>>> [jorge] yes, once introduced, the abbreviated form can be used > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> 8) <!-- [rfced] Throughout the text, the following terminology > >>>>>>> appears to be capitalized inconsistently. 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