Hi Dhananjaya,

Thanks for your update and letting us know. We will await your review and 
responses; let us know if we can be of any assistance in the meantime.

All best,

Kaelin Foody
RFC Production Center

> On Oct 3, 2025, at 9:43 AM, Dhananjaya Rao (dhrao) <[email protected]> wrote:
> 
> Hi Kaelin,
> 
> We are working on the comments and questions; will share the response shortly.
> 
> Regards,
> -Dhananjaya
> 
> From: Kaelin Foody <[email protected]>
> Date: Friday, October 3, 2025 at 7:09 PM
> To: [email protected] <[email protected]>
> Cc: Dhananjaya Rao (dhrao) <[email protected]>, Swadesh Agrawal (swaagraw) 
> <[email protected]>, [email protected] <[email protected]>, 
> [email protected] <[email protected]>, [email protected] <[email protected]>, 
> [email protected] <[email protected]>, [email protected] 
> <[email protected]>
> Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9871 <draft-ietf-idr-bgp-car-16> for your 
> review
> 
> Greetings,
> 
> This is a friendly reminder that this document awaits author attention.  
> Please see the document-specific questions and AUTH48 announcement in this 
> thread and let us know if we can be of assistance as you begin the AUTH48 
> review process.
> 
> The AUTH48 status page of this document is available here:
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> 
> AUTH48 FAQs are available here:
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> 
> We look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
> 
> Thank you,
> 
> Kaelin Foody
> RFC Production Center
> 
> > On Sep 25, 2025, at 6:19 PM, [email protected] wrote:
> >
> > Authors,
> >
> > While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as necessary) 
> > the following questions, which are also in the source file.
> >
> > 1) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that appear in
> > the title) for use on https://www.rfc-editor.org/search. -->
> >
> >
> > 2) <!-- [rfced] Section 1.1. Terminology: We have made the following 
> > changes in
> > this section; please review and let us know if any adjustments are needed.
> >
> > a) We have updated the text below to clarify the order of preference:
> >
> > Original:
> >  If several such paths exist, a preference scheme is used to select the best
> >  path (for example, IGP Flex-Algo preferred over SR Policy preferred over 
> > BGP CAR.
> >
> > Current:
> >  If several such paths exist, a preference scheme is used to select the best
> >  path (for example, IGP Flex-Algo is preferred over SR Policy, and SR Policy
> >  is preferred over BGP CAR).
> >
> >
> > b) We have updated "trust domain" to "trusted domain" in the text below
> > for consistency with RFC 8402.
> >
> > Original:
> >  In an SR deployment, the transport network is within a trust domain as per
> >  [RFC8402].
> >
> > Current:
> >  In an SR deployment, the transport network is within a trusted domain as 
> > per
> >  [RFC8402].
> > -->
> >
> >
> > 3) <!-- [rfced] Section 1.1. (Abbreviations): We have the following
> > questions regarding the abbreviations list in this section.
> >
> > a) We were unable to find the term "BGP-LU" or "BGP Labeled Unicast SAFI"
> > mentioned in RFC 8277. Is it the correct reference for this term?
> >
> > In addition, we also note the following different uses of this term 
> > throughout
> > this document. Please review and let us know how to update for consistency.
> >
> > BGP IP/LU
> > BGP LU
> > BGP-IP/LU(Labeled Unicast)
> > BGP LU/IP
> >
> > Original:
> >   *  BGP-LU: BGP Labeled Unicast SAFI [RFC8277].
> >
> >
> > b) We were unable to find the term "BGP-IP" or "BGP IPv4/IPv6 Unicast 
> > AFI/SAFIs"
> > in RFCs 4271 and 4760. How may we update?
> >
> > Original:
> >   *  BGP-IP: BGP IPv4/IPv6 Unicast AFI/SAFIs [RFC4271], [RFC4760].
> >
> >
> > c) FYI - We have already made the following updates to this section. Please
> > review.
> >
> > i) We have separated this list item into two separate entries for clarity 
> > and
> > have updated their definitions for consistency with RFC 4760:
> >
> > Original:
> >
> >   *  AFI/SAFI: BGP Address-Family/Sub-Address-Family Identifiers.
> >
> > Current:
> >
> >   AFI:  Address Family Identifier
> >
> >   SAFI:  Subsequent Address Family Identifier
> >
> > ii) We have added list entries for the following terms so that they do
> > not need to be expanded when they appear in figures or other list items.
> >
> >   ABR:  Area Border Router
> >   ASBR:  Autonomous System Border Router
> >   RD:  Route Distinguisher
> > -->
> >
> >
> > 4) <!-- [rfced] Section 2.1: For consistency with the rest of the list 
> > items in
> > this section, what definition/content should appear for "BGP Next Hop"?
> >
> > Original:
> >   *  BGP Next Hop.
> > -->
> >
> >
> > 5) <!-- [rfced] Please clarify the last two points; we suggest making them
> > complete sentences and consistent with one another. More specifically,
> > what is the outcome of the "if" clause in the final list item below (the
> > item that begins with "Another example is:")?
> >
> > Original:
> >   *  A BGP color-aware route (E2, C1) with next hop N may be resolved
> >      over a color-aware route (N, C2): i.e., the local policy maps the
> >      resolution of C1 over a different color C2.
> >
> >      -  For example, in a domain where resource R is known to not be
> >         present, the inter-domain intent C1="low delay and avoid R" may
> >         be resolved over an intra-domain path of intent C2="low delay".
> >
> >      -  Another example is: if no (N, C1) path is available and the user has
> >         allowed resolution to fallback to a C2 path.
> >
> > Perhaps:
> >      -  For example, in a domain where resource R is known to not be
> >         present, the inter-domain intent C1="low delay and avoid R" may
> >         be resolved over an intra-domain path of intent C2="low delay".
> >
> >      -  For another example, if no (N, C1) path is available, and the user 
> > has
> >         allowed resolution to fallback to a C2 path, then ... [what outcome 
> > occurs]?
> > -->
> >
> >
> > 6) <!-- [rfced] How may we clarify how the content in parentheses relates to
> > the rest of the sentence?
> >
> > Original:
> >   For CAR route resolution, Color-EC color if present takes precedence
> >   over the route's intent color (LCM-EC if present (Section 2.9.5), or
> >   else NLRI color).
> >
> > Perhaps:
> >   If present, Color-EC color takes precedence over the route's intent color
> >   (which, if present, is LCM-EC (see Section 2.9.5) or else NLRI color) for
> >   CAR route resolution.
> > -->
> >
> >
> > 7) <!-- [rfced] What is the subject of "or appropriately incremented" in 
> > the text below?
> >
> > Original:
> >   The value set (or appropriately incremented) in the AIGP TLV
> >   corresponds to the metric associated with the underlying intent of
> >   the color. 
> >
> > Perhaps:
> >   The value that is set (or appropriately incremented) in the AIGP TLV
> >   corresponds to the metric associated with the underlying intent of
> >   the color. 
> > -->
> >
> >
> > 8) <!-- [rfced] FYI - We adjusted these list items to make them parallel
> > and consistent. Please review and let us know any further updates.
> >
> > Original:
> >   BGP CAR SRv6 SID TLV definitions provide the following benefits:
> >
> >   *  Native encoding of SIDs avoids robustness issue caused by
> >      overloading of MPLS label fields.
> >
> >   *  Simple encoding to signal Unique SIDs (non-transposition),
> >      maintaining BGP update prefix packing.
> >
> >   *  Highly efficient transposition scheme (12-14 bytes saved per
> >      NLRI), also maintaining BGP update prefix packing.
> >
> > Current:
> >   BGP CAR SRv6 SID TLV definitions provide the following benefits:
> >
> >   *  The native encoding of SIDs avoids robustness issues caused by the
> >      overloading of MPLS label fields.
> >
> >   *  The simple encoding to signal Unique SIDs (non-transposition)
> >      maintains BGP update prefix packing.
> >
> >   *  The highly efficient transposition scheme (12-14 bytes saved per
> >      NLRI) also maintains BGP update prefix packing.
> > -->
> >
> >
> > 9) <!-- [rfced] May we update the list below as follows for consistency?
> > Is it intentional that the first "must" is lowercase, or should it be the
> > all-caps requirement keyword "MUST" (which is used in the other bullet 
> > point)?
> >
> > Original:
> >   Given NLRI length and Key length MUST be valid, failures in following
> >   checks result in 'AFI/SAFI disable' or 'session reset':
> >
> >   *  Minimum NLRI length (must be atleast 2, as key length and NLRI
> >      type are required fields).
> >
> >   *  Key Length MUST be at least two less than NLRI Length.
> >
> > Perhaps:
> >   Given the NLRI length and Key length MUST be valid, failures in the 
> > following
> >   checks result in 'AFI/SAFI disable' or 'session reset':
> >
> >   *  The minimum NLRI length MUST be at least 2, as key length and NLRI
> >      type are required fields.
> >
> >   *  The Key Length MUST be at least 2 less than NLRI Length.
> > -->
> >
> >
> > 10) <!-- [rfced] FYI, for clarity, we added the word 'steering' twice
> > and changed 'path' to 'paths'. Please review whether this conveys
> > this intended meaning.
> >
> > Original:
> >   All the steering variations described in [RFC9256] are applicable to BGP
> >   CAR color-aware path: on-demand steering, per- destination, per-flow,
> >   color-only steering.
> >
> > Current:
> >   All the steering variations described in [RFC9256] are applicable to BGP
> >   CAR color-aware paths: on-demand steering, per-destination steering,
> >   per-flow steering, and color-only steering.
> > -->
> >
> >
> > 11) <!-- [rfced] What is the subject of "may be shared" in the text below?
> >
> > Original:
> >      -  If MPLS/SR-MPLS transport, the route will carry label/prefix-
> >         SID allocated by the next hop, may be shared.
> > -->
> >
> >
> > 12) <!--[rfced] Will it be clear to the reader what "color CP" and "color 
> > CPT"
> > mean here? If not, please provide text to explain. We note that some other
> > examples use "color C1" and "color C2".
> >
> > Current:
> >   *  Provider publishes to customer that intent 'low-delay' is mapped
> >      to color CP on its inbound peering links.
> >
> >   *  Within its infrastructure, provider maps intent 'low-delay' to
> >      color CPT.
> > -->
> >
> >
> > 13) <!-- [rfced] FYI - Section 9: We have updated this artwork (containing
> > numbered items) to to an ordered list. Please review. If you prefer to
> > have the "[(V, CC)" portions aligned vertically, we can insert line
> > breaks (as shown in 'Perhaps' below). For example (showing only two items):
> >
> > Original:
> >   1.   CE2 sends to PE2     : [(V, CC), Label L1] via CE2 with LCM-EC (CP)
> >                                            as per peering agreement
> >   2.   PE2 installs in VRF A: [(V, CC), L1]       via CE2
> >                                            which resolves on (CE2, CP)
> >                                            or connected OIF
> >
> > Current:
> >   1.  CE2 sends to PE2: [(V, CC), Label L1] via CE2 with LCM-EC (CP) as
> >       per peering agreement.
> >
> >   2.  PE2 installs in VRF A: [(V, CC), L1] via CE2, which resolves on
> >       (CE2, CP) or connected Outgoing Interface (OIF).
> >
> > Perhaps:
> >   1.  CE2 sends to PE2:
> >       [(V, CC), Label L1] via CE2 with LCM-EC (CP) as per peering
> >       agreement.
> >
> >   2.  PE2 installs in VRF A:
> >       [(V, CC), L1] via CE2, which resolves on (CE2, CP) or connected
> >       Outgoing Interface (OIF).
> > -->
> >
> >
> > 14) <!-- [rfced] Is citing Section 9 of RFC 4364 correct here? We note 
> > "L3VPN"
> > does not appear in RFC 4364. ("L3" appears only once in Section 14;
> > zero instances of "layer 3".)
> >
> > Original:
> >   Example use-cases are intent-aware L3VPN CsC ([RFC4364] Section 9) and 
> > SRv6
> >   over a provider network.
> >
> > Current:
> >   Example use cases are intent-aware L3VPN Carriers' Carriers (Section 9 of
> >   [RFC4364]) and SRv6 over a provider network.
> > -->
> >
> >
> > 15) <!-- [rfced] Appendix A.7: Is there text missing in the example below? 
> > For
> > instance, what does "nearest" refer to?
> >
> > Original:
> >   Example-1: Anycast with forwarding to nearest
> > -->
> >
> >
> > 16) <!-- [rfced] Appendix D: We have made several updates for clarity and
> > readability. Please carefully review and let us know if any additional
> > updates are needed.
> >
> > a) FYI, we made this sentence into a list. May we change "4k bytes"
> > to "4000 bytes" for clarity?  (It seems fine for other instances of
> > '4k' to remain in this document, as they are not followed by the word
> > 'bytes'.)
> >
> > Original:
> >   Scenarios considered are ideal packing (maximum number of routes
> >   packed to update message limit of 4k bytes), practical deployment
> >   case with average packing (5 routes share set of BGP path attributes
> >   and hence packed in single update message) and worst-case of no
> >   packing (each route in separate update message).
> >
> > Current:
> >
> > The packing scenarios considered are as follows:
> >
> >   *  the ideal case (where the maximum number of routes are packed to
> >      the update message limit of 4k bytes),
> >
> >   *  the practical case of average packing (where 5 routes share a set
> >      of BGP path attributes, and hence are packed in a single update
> >      message), and
> >
> >   *  the worst case of no packing (where each route is in a separate
> >      update message).
> >
> >
> > b) Table 5: FYI, we updated the title and made other slight adjustments to
> > the table.
> >
> > Original:
> >  Figure 18: Summary of ideal, practical and no-packing BGP data in
> >                              each case
> >
> > Current:
> >        Table 5: Summary of the Ideal, Practical, and Worst Cases of
> >                              Packing BGP Data
> >
> >
> > c) To avoid using an RFC number as an adjective, may we update the
> > various instances of "[RFC8277] style" as follows?
> >
> > Original:
> >
> >   It compares total BGP
> >   data on the wire for CAR SAFI and [RFC8277] style encoding in MPLS
> >   label (CASE A), SR extension with MPLS (per-prefix label index in
> >   Prefix-SID attribute) [RFC8669] (CASE B) and SRv6 SID (CASE C) cases.
> >
> >   |RFC-8277 style  |
> >   |    NLRI        |
> >
> >
> >   No degradation from RFC8277 like encoding
> >
> >   CAR SAFI encoding more efficient by 88% in best case and 71% in average
> >   case over RFC8277 style encoding
> >
> >   SAFI 128 8277 style encoding with label in NLRI
> >
> > Perhaps:
> >
> >   It compares total BGP data on the wire for CAR SAFI and encoding as 
> > specified
> >   in [RFC8277] in the following: an MPLS label (CASE A), an SR extension 
> > with MPLS
> >   (per-prefix label index in Prefix-SID attribute; see [RFC8669]) (CASE B), 
> > and
> >   an SRv6 SID (CASE C).
> >
> >   | NLRI as      |
> >   | per RFC 8277 |
> >
> >   No degradation from encoding as specified in [RFC8277].
> >
> >   CAR SAFI encoding is more efficient by 88% in the best case and 71% in the
> >   average case over the encoding as specified in [RFC8277] (which precludes
> >   packing).
> >
> >   SAFI 128 encoded per RFC 8277 with label in NLRI
> > -->
> >
> >
> > 17) <!--[rfced] Appendix D: We suggest adding a space between the
> > number and the units throughout the descriptions of Cases A, B, and C.
> > Please let us know if this update is acceptable. A few examples:
> >
> > Original:  ~86MB
> >         ~27.5MB  
> >          ~339MB
> >
> > Suggested: ~86 MB
> >         ~27.5 MB
> >          ~339 MB
> > -->
> >
> >
> > 18) <!-- [rfced] Formatting:
> >
> > a) FYI, we add line breaks in the artwork so it fits within 72-character 
> > line
> > limit. Specifically, please review the artworks in Appendices C.1, C.2, and
> > C.3 titled "Packet Forwarding" and let us know if the line breaks should be
> > changed.
> >
> > In addition, please consider whether any artwork elements should be tagged 
> > as
> > sourcecode or a different element.
> >
> >
> > b) Please review whether any of the notes in this document
> > should be in the <aside> element. It is defined as "a container for
> > content that is semantically less important or tangential to the
> > content that surrounds it" 
> > (https://authors.ietf.org/en/rfcxml-vocabulary#aside).
> > -->
> >
> >
> > 19) <!-- [rfced] FYI, we added expansions for abbreviations upon first use
> > per Section 3.6 of RFC 7322 ("RFC Style Guide"). Please review each
> > expansion in the document carefully to ensure correctness.
> >
> > Autonomous Systems (ASes)
> > VPN Routing and Forwarding (VRF)
> > Provider Edge (PE)
> > Customer Edge (CE)
> > Segment Routing over MPLS (SR-MPLS)
> > Label Switched Paths (LSPs)
> > Network Layer Reachability Information (NLRI)
> > Network Function Virtualization (NFV)
> > Segment Routing Global Block (SRGB)
> > Outgoing Interface (OIF)
> > end-to-end (E2E)
> > Longest Prefix Match (LPM)
> > pseudowire (PW)
> > Penultimate Segment Pop (PSP)
> > -->
> >
> >
> > 20) <!-- [rfced] Terminology: Please review the following questions we have 
> > regarding
> > the terminology used in this document.
> >
> > a) We note different capitalization of the terms below. Please review and 
> > let
> > us know each term should appear for consistency.
> >
> > Label Index vs. label index
> >
> > Label vs. label
> >
> > Color value vs. color value
> >
> > NLRI Type vs. NLRI type
> >
> > NLRI Length vs. NLRI length
> >
> > Key Length vs. Key length vs. key length
> >
> >
> > b) "Flex Algo" appears in various forms. Please review and let us know
> > how to update for consistency:
> >
> > Flex-Algo vs. Flex Algo vs. FlexAlgo
> >
> > Flex Algo 128 vs. Flex-Algo 128 vs. Flex-Algo FA128 vs. FA 128 vs. FA128
> >
> >
> > c) How should "prefix" be capitalized in the different instances below?
> >
> > BGP CAR IP Prefix routes vs. BGP CAR IP prefix route
> >
> > CAR IP prefix route vs. CAR IP Prefix route
> >
> > IP Prefix vs. IP prefix
> >
> >
> > d) We note different use of hyphens and quotation marks in the instances
> > below. How would you like these items to be stylized for consistency?
> >
> > low-delay vs. 'low-delay' vs. "low-delay" vs. "low delay"
> >
> > low-cost vs. low cost
> > -->
> >
> >
> > 21) <!-- [rfced] Terminology: We have already updated (or plan to update) 
> > the
> > terms below for consistency. Please review and let us know any objections.
> >
> > a) We note different uses of the terms below. For consistency, we plan to
> > update the item on the left of the arrow to the term on the right.
> >
> > Non-Key TLVs -> non-key TLVs
> >
> > multi-protocol -> multiprotocol (for consistency with RFC 4760)
> >
> > Label Index TLV -> Label-Index TLV (for consistency with RFC 8669)
> >
> > data-plane -> data plane
> >
> > control-plane -> control plane
> >
> > SR policy, SR-policy, SR-Policy -> SR Policy (for consistency with RFC 9256)
> >
> >
> > b) The terms "border router" and "transport RR" appear throughout the 
> > document
> > after their abbreviations "BR" and "TRR" are introduced. For consistency, 
> > may
> > we update to use the abbreviations (after they are first introduced)?
> >
> >
> > c) We note "Extended Community" and "Local Color Mapping" are hyphenated
> > differently throughout this document (some examples below). For consistency
> > with RFCs 9012 and 9256, may we update these instances to "Extended 
> > Community"
> > and "Local Color Mapping" (no hyphens)?
> >
> > Local-Color-Mapping Extended-Community (LCM-EC)
> > Local Color Mapping (LCM) Extended Community
> > Local Color Mapping Extended-Community
> >
> > Route Target (RT) Extended-Communities
> > Transitive Opaque Extended-Community
> > BGP Extended-Community
> >
> >
> > d) FYI - We have already updated the terms below as follows for consistency
> > with their relevant RFCs.
> >
> > RT-Constrain -> RT Constrain (per RFC 4684)
> > Prefix-SID Attribute -> Prefix-SID attribute (per RFC 8669)
> > BGP Prefix-SID Attribute -> BGP Prefix-SID attribute (per RFC 8669)
> > SRv6 service SID -> SRv6 Service SID (per RFC 9252)
> > SR Domain -> SR domain (per RFC 8402)
> > END behavior -> End behavior (per RFC 8986)
> > Route Target (RT) Extended-Communities -> Route Target (RT) Extended 
> > Communities (per RFC 4360)
> > AIGP Attribute -> AIGP attribute (per RFC 7311)
> >
> > e) Is the term  "CAR color-aware path" (3 instances) necessary, or should
> > it simply be "CAR path" (10 instances)?
> >
> > Section 1.2
> >      -  V/v is steered on BGP CAR color-aware path
> >      -  V/v is steered on a BGP CAR color-aware path that is itself ...
> >
> > Section 3:
> >    All the steering variations described in [RFC9256] are
> >    applicable to BGP CAR color-aware paths: on-demand steering, ...
> > -->
> >
> >
> > 22) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the 
> > online
> > Style Guide 
> > <https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language>
> > and let us know if any changes are needed.  Updates of this nature typically
> > result in more precise language, which is helpful for readers.
> >
> > a) For example, please consider whether "native" should be updated in the
> > instances below:
> >
> >   Section 2.7.  Native MultiPath Capability
> >
> >   Native support for multiple transport encapsulations (e.g., MPLS, SR, 
> > SRv6, IP)
> >
> >   Native encoding of SIDs avoids robustness issue...
> >
> >   Service traffic encapsulated with SRv6 Service SID B:C11:2:DT4:: is 
> > natively
> >   steered hop by hop along IPv6 routed path...
> >
> >   Encapsulated service traffic is natively steered along IPv6 routed path...
> >
> >
> > b) In addition, please consider whether "traditional" should be updated for 
> > clarity. 
> > While the NIST website
> > <https://web.archive.org/web/20250214092458/https://www.nist.gov/nist-research-library/nist-technical-series-publications-author-instructions#table1>
> > indicates that this term is potentially biased, it is also ambiguous. 
> > "Tradition" is a subjective term, as it is not the same for everyone.
> > There are 4 instances currently:
> >
> >         If a color-aware path is not
> >         available, local policy may map to a traditional routing/TE
> >         path (e.g., BGP LU, RSVP-TE, IGP/LDP).
> >
> >      Intra-domain resolution:
> >         BGP CAR route maps to an intra-domain color-aware path (e.g.,
> >         SR Policy, IGP Flex-Algo, BGP CAR) or a traditional routing/TE
> >         path (e.g., RSVP-TE, IGP/LDP, BGP-LU).
> >
> >   *  Local policy may map the CAR route to traditional mechanisms that
> >      are unaware of color or that provide best-effort, such as RSVP-TE,
> >      IGP/LDP, BGP LU/IP (e.g., Appendix A.3.2) for brownfield
> >      scenarios.
> >
> >   However, to be compatible
> >   with traditional operational usage, the CAR IP Prefix route is
> >   allowed to be without color for best-effort.
> > -->
> >
> >
> > Thank you.
> >
> > Kaelin Foody and Alice Russo
> > RFC Production Center
> >
> >
> > On Sep 25, 2025, [email protected] wrote:
> >
> > *****IMPORTANT*****
> >
> > Updated 2025/09/25
> >
> > RFC Author(s):
> > --------------
> >
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> > --------------------------------------
> > RFC9871 (draft-ietf-idr-bgp-car-16)
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> > Title            : BGP Color-Aware Routing (CAR)
> > Author(s)        : D. Rao, Ed., S. Agrawal, Ed.
> > WG Chair(s)      : Susan Hares, Keyur Patel, Jeffrey Haas
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