RFC-editor,

thank you for preparing this RFC-to-be.

We’ll first reply to the more specific ones of your questions below.
We will respond to more general questions (that require us to scan the 
document) in the next round (marked here with TO CHECK in questions 6, 20, 21, 
22, 23).

Please note that we are also preparing a -25, with two typo/C&P fixes and one 
more technical omission fixed (PR #187 to #189 in 
https://github.com/ietf-wg-asdf/SDF/pulls).
We previously prepared a -24 with PR #186 in it (technical omissions), which 
you already picked up.
You probably need AD approval for all these.

Grüße, Carsten


On 2025-10-07, at 07:03, [email protected] wrote:
> 
> Authors,
> 
> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as necessary) 
> the following questions, which are also in the source file.
> 
> 1) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that appear in
> the title) for use on https://www.rfc-editor.org/search. -->

IoT
Device Model
Interaction Model
Affordance
Property
Action
Event


> 2) <!-- [rfced] We are having trouble understanding how the text after the 
> comma relates to the earlier part of the sentence.  Does this mean Group in 
> nested definitions also represents the SDF document?  Please clarify. 
> 
> Original (full definition included for context):
>  Group:  An entry in the main JSON map that represents the SDF
>     document, and in certain nested definitions.  A group has a Class
>     Name Keyword as its key and a map of named definition entries
>     (Definition Group) as a value.
> 
> Perhaps:
>  Group: An entry in the main JSON map and certain nested definitions 
>     that represent the SDF document.
> -->

The “that represents the SDF document” is a qualification of “JSON map”, so 
“that represent the SDF document” can’t move this way.

It also turns out that we didn’t use the term “main” with JSON maps anywhere 
else, so we should replace this with “top-level JSON map” (in the way we use 
top-level in 3.4).

Maybe:
>  Group:  An entry in the top-level JSON map that represents the SDF
>     document.  Groups also can be used in certain nested definitions.


> 3) <!-- [rfced] Some author comments are present in the XML. Please confirm 
> that no updates related to these comments are outstanding. Note that the
> comments will be deleted prior to publication.
> -->
> 

Besides comments marked [rfced] and some of your comments on references, I see 
tool-generated comments in one SVG.
These indeed can be deleted.


> 4) <!-- [rfced] The SVG figure contains duplicate ids, which generates 
> invalid HTML. We ran a utility that is supposed to create unique ids within 
> the SVG on a copy of the file, but it didn't seem to work.  xml2rfc yields 
> the following warning - please review and let us know if a correction is 
> possible. 
> 
> rfc9880.xml(480): Warning: Duplicate attribute id="link_sdfAction_sdfData" 
> found after including svg from inline:b'<svg xmlns:xlink="http://www.w3' 
> ....  This can cause problems with some browsers.
> -->

That is an interesting bug of the plantuml tool, apparently triggered by the 
fact that there are two arrows from sdfAction to sdfData.
I’m not sure why kramdown-rfc-clean-svg-ids doesn’t catch (and fix) this; I 
would say this is a bug in that tool.
But the IDs are not actually used in any IDREF, so we can work around this by 
arbitrarily changing the IDs in the two lines

   <g id="link_sdfAction_sdfData">

e.g., into

   <g id="link_sdfAction_sdfData1">
   <g id="link_sdfAction_sdfData2">


> 5) <!-- [rfced] Figure 2: The SVG includes additional information that is 
> not present in the text.  Is this as expected?  For example, we see 0+, 1, 
> and (c) in the SVG but not in the text artwork. In addition, sdfEvent and 
> sdfAction appear in a different order.  Please review. 
> -->

We originally had completely given up on providing a plaintext form of the 
illustration.
The plaintext illustration that now is in there is somewhat rudimentary.
As you notice, it doesn’t have the occurrence labels (0+, 1), and it doesn’t 
mark the boxes as compositions which looks almost like a © symbol in the 
generated SVG.

We do warn that this is a limited rendition, so we think we are good.


> 6) <!-- [rfced] Please review whether any of the notes in this document
> should be in the <aside> element. It is defined as "a container for 
> content that is semantically less important or tangential to the 
> content that surrounds it" 
> (https://authors.ietf.org/en/rfcxml-vocabulary#aside).
> -->

[TO CHECK]


> 7) <!-- [rfced] May we rephrase "itself" to "which is" for improved 
> readability?
> 
> Original:
>  From the outside of a specification, Given Names are usually used as
>  part of a hierarchical name that looks like a JSON pointer [RFC6901],
>  itself generally rooted in (used as the fragment identifier in) an
>  outer namespace that looks like an https:// URL (see Section 4).
> 
> Perhaps:
>  From the outside of a specification, Given Names are usually used as
>  part of a hierarchical name that looks like a JSON pointer [RFC6901],
>  which is generally rooted in (used as the fragment identifier in) an
>  outer namespace that looks like an https:// URL (see Section 4).
> -->

Oh, we need to be more careful about the syntactic reference.
It is the JSON pointer that is rooted/used as, not the entire hierarchical name.
Neither version really makes that clear.
So this indeed should be rephrased; our try:

Maybe:
 From the outside of a specification, Given Names are usually used as
 part of a hierarchical name that looks like a JSON pointer [RFC6901].
 These hierarchical names are
 generally rooted in (used as the fragment identifier in) an
 outer namespace that looks like an https:// URL (see Section 4).


> 8) <!-- [rfced] May we rephrase the text below as follows to improve 
> readability and specify "it" in the second sentence?
> 
> Original:
>  The keyword (map key) that defines an information block is "info".
>  Its value is a JSON map in turn, with a set of entries that represent
>  qualities that apply to the included definition.
> 
> Perhaps:
>  The keyword (map key) that defines an information block as "info".

This should stay “is” — not a sentence otherwise.
(This is a statement about the keyword, giving its name as “info”.)

>  In turn, the keyword's value is a JSON map with a set of entries that 
> represent
>  qualities that apply to the included definition.
> -->

We could also make use of the word “nested”:

>  The keyword's value is nested a JSON map with a set of entries that represent
>  qualities that apply to the included definition.

In any case, we need to change
OLD:
  included definition
NEW:
  included definitions

… to mirror the first paragraph of 3.1.


> 9) <!-- [rfced] We suggest rephrasing the following sentence (i.e., 
> adjusting the placement of "using"). Does the following suggestion retain 
> the sentence's original meaning?
> 
> Original:
>  This specification does not
>  give a strict definition for the format of the version string but
>  each using system or organization should define internal structure
>  and semantics to the level needed for their use. 
> 
> Perhaps: 
>  This specification does not give a strict definition for the format
>  of the version string, but each system or organization using the version
>  string should define internal structure and semantics to the level needed for
>  their use.
> -->

Much better.  Thank you.


> 10) <!-- [rfced] Should "JSON pointer" be rephrased as "a JSON pointer" or 
> "JSON pointers" to describe Figure 4?
> 
> Original: 
>  The
>  example also shows the use of JSON pointer with "sdfRef" to use a
>  pre-existing definition for the sdfProperty "currentTemperature" and
>  for the sdfOutputData produced by the sdfEvent
>  "overTemperatureEvent".
> 
> 
> Perhaps: 
>  The 
>  example also shows the use of a JSON pointer with "sdfRef" to use a
>  pre-existing definition for the sdfProperty "currentTemperature" and 
>  for the sdfOutputData produced by the sdfEvent "overTemperatureEvent".
> 
> Or: 
>  The 
>  example also shows the use of JSON pointers with "sdfRef" to use a
>  pre-existing definition for the sdfProperty "currentTemperature" and 
>  for the sdfOutputData produced by the sdfEvent "overTemperatureEvent".
> -->
> 

The latter one, as there are two JSON pointer examples in sdfRefs.
("JSON pointer" can stand for the uncountable concept, but here there truly are 
two JSON pointers of this kind [and a few more other ones as well].)


> 11) <!-- [rfced] FYI - In the XML, we have removed the links from "SenML 
> Units" and "Secondary Units" since those links do not point to the correct
> section (and the correct section pointers follow shortly
> thereafter). Please let us know any objections.

I’m not happy with not having those fragment identifiers as links.
I understand that IANA wants to keep the ability to change their format, but 
that has been outstanding for a long time now.
The worst that can happen is that the fragment identifier part of the link does 
not work and the link points to the file as a whole.

> Original XML:
>          <t>The unit name <bcp14>SHOULD</bcp14> be as                         
>           
> per the <xref section="SenML Units" relative="#senml-units" 
> sectionFormat="bare"           
> target="RFC8428"/> registry                                                   
>              
> or the <xref section="Secondary Units" relative="#secondary-units" 
> sectionFormat="bare"    
> target="RFC8798"/> registry in <xref target="IANA.senml"/>                    
>              
> as specified by                                                               
>              
> Sections <xref target="RFC8428" section="4.5.1" sectionFormat="bare"/> and 
> <xref           
> target="RFC8428" section="12.1" sectionFormat="bare"/> of <xref 
> target="RFC8428"/> and     
> <xref section="3" sectionFormat="of" target="RFC8798"/>, respectively.  </t>
> -->
> 
> 
> 12) <!-- [rfced] The IANA registry includes "(note 1)" as part of the 
> description for unix-time, but there is no note included in the registry.  
> Should the notes be included in the registry

Yes, please.

> or perhaps "(note 1)" should 
> be removed from the description? 
> 
> Original (text):
>  | unix-time   | A point in  | number | POSIX time     | Section    |
>  |             | civil time  |        |                | 3.4.2 of   |
>  |             | (note 1)    |        |                | RFC 8949   |
>  |             |             |        |                | [STD94]    |
> 
> See the IANA registry:
> https://www.iana.org/assignments/sdf/sdf.xhtml#sdftype-values
> -->
> 
> 
> 13) <!-- [rfced] IANA provided the following notes to the RFC Production 
> Center.  We believe the document has been updated accordingly.  Please 
> review and let us know if any updates are needed.  
> 
> NOTE 1: The authors have notified us that "4.5.1" (Names) needs to be 
> changed to "4.5.2" (Units) both in the "Repository" field in Section 7.3 
> and in Note 1 to Table 4 in Section 4.7.  

That is correct, so s/4.5.1/4.5.2/ in both places.

> NOTE 2: With author permission, we've prepended "SDF" to the three new 
> registry names that didn't already refer to SDF.  
> -->

Thank you!


> 14) <!-- [rfced] We have updated this text to remove the use of relative 
> references.  Please review. 
> 
> Original:
>  Repository:  combining the symbol values from the SenML Units
>     registry and the Secondary Units registry in [IANA.senml] as
>     specified by Sections 4.5.1 and 12.1 of [RFC8428] and Section 3 of
>     [RFC8798], respectively (which by the registration policy are
>     guaranteed to be non-overlapping).
> 
> Current:
>  Repository:  Combining the symbol values from the "SenML Units"
>     registry and the "Secondary Units" registry in the "Sensor
>     Measurement Lists (SenML)" registry group [IANA.senml] as
>     specified by Sections 4.5.2 and 12.1 of [RFC8428] and Section 3 of
>     [RFC8798], respectively (which, by the registration policy, are
>     guaranteed to be non-overlapping).
> -->
> 

(I can’t see the change in the plaintext here…)
Please see my comment about relative references into IANA registries above in 
question 11.


> 15) <!-- [rfced] Please review the text below. We note that "sub-delims" is 
> not mentioned in Section 2.3 of RFC 3986 [STD66]. The term is defined in
> Section 2.2 of RFC 3986 [STD66]. Should Section 2.3 be updated to Section
> 2.2?
> 
> Original:
>  Index value:  Percent-encoding (Section 2.1 of RFC 3986 [STD66]) is
>     required of any characters in unit names except for the set
>     "unreserved" (Section 2.3 of RFC 3986 [STD66]), the set "sub-
>     delims" (Section 2.3 of RFC 3986 [STD66]), ":" or "@" (i.e., the
>     result must match the ABNF rule "pchar" in Section 3.3 of RFC 3986
>     [STD66]).
> -->

Good catch; sub-delims is 2.2, unreserved is 2.3.

So:
OLD:
    delims" (Section 2.3 of RFC 3986 [STD66]), ":" or "@" (i.e., the
NEW:
    delims" (Section 2.2 of RFC 3986 [STD66]), ":" or "@" (i.e., the
_______________________^


> 16) <!-- [rfced] What is "these" referring to in the sentence below?
> 
> Current:
>  In applications that dynamically acquire models and obtain modules
>  from module references in these, the security considerations of
>  dereferenceable identifiers apply (see [DEREFERENCEABLE-ID-PATTERN]
>  for a more extensive discussion of dereferenceable identifiers).
> 
> Perhaps:
>  In applications that dynamically acquire models and obtain modules
>  from module references in these applications, the security 
>  considerations of dereferenceable identifiers apply (see 
>  [DEREF-ID-PATTERN] for a more extensive discussion of 
>  dereferenceable identifiers).
> -->

“these” is about the models dynamically acquired.

OLD:
 from module references in these, the security considerations of
NEW:
 from module references in these models, the security considerations of

(The alliteration of module and model is unfortunate, but apparently 
unavoidable here.)


> 17) <!-- [rfced] References
> 
> a) Please review the following reference.  The original URL for this 
> reference - 
> http://www.openmobilealliance.org/wp/omna/lwm2m/lwm2mregistry.html -
> redirects to the following URL:
> https://www.openmobilealliance.org/specifications with the title "OMA
> Specifications".
> 
> We could not find a page with the original title for this reference "OMA
> LightweightM2M (LwM2M) Object and Resource Registry". We did find the
> following page: https://www.openmobilealliance.org/specifications/registries, 
> which contains separate links to the LwM2M Objects and 
> Resources registries.
> 
> Would you like to update this reference to point to this new URL? 
> 
> Current:
>  [OMA]      Open Mobile Alliance, "OMA LightweightM2M (LwM2M) Object
>             and Resource Registry",
>             <http://www.openmobilealliance.org/wp/omna/lwm2m/
>             lwm2mregistry.html>.

Right, so the URL and the title would need to be updated.
The actual HTML page title is awkward, though.

Title: openmobilealliance.org/specifications/registries/objects/

Maybe we can use the <h1> title instead of the document.title (which I don’t 
find in the page source, by the way):

NEW:
Title: LwM2M OBJECTS
Link: https://www.openmobilealliance.org/specifications/registries/objects

This link is slightly more specific than what we referenced before, but fits 
the site of the citation (which is about objects, not about resources) even 
better.

(With my browser, the page briefly indicates that it is embarrassed about 
itself and then switches back to what we want here; this may need some 
additional debugging.)


> b) The information for this reference appears to be from the 2020 version 
> of ECMA Standard ECMA-262. However, the URL provided points to the 2024 
> edition.
> 
> We've updated this reference to use the information from the URL - that is,
> the 2024 edition. Please let us know if you have any objections.  
> 
> Current:
>  [ECMA-262] Ecma International, "ECMAScript 2024 Language
>             Specification", 15th Edition, ECMA Standard ECMA-262, June
>             2024, <https://www.ecma-international.org/wp-
>             content/uploads/ECMA-262.pdf>.
> -->

By now, that would be 
title: ECMA-262, 16th edition, June 2025
link: 
https://ecma-international.org/wp-content/uploads/ECMA-262_16th_edition_june_2025.pdf

Of course, the intention is not to point just to this specific revision.
I don’t think we have a general guideline how to deal with documents that are 
on a regular update schedule, so simply going to the 2025 revision might be the 
right thing to do.

(This is based on the belief that the new functionality in 16th edition 
relative to 11th edition does not extend the pattern language resulting from 
applying the suggested limitations in Appendix C.2 to the referenced edition.  
Updating these links does need some care…)


> 18) <!-- [rfced] Should "their complements" be placed on a separate bullet 
> to follow the original pattern of this list?
> 
> Original:
>  *  characters;
>  *  character classes in square brackets, including ranges; their
>     complements;
>  *  simple quantifiers *, +, ?, and range quantifiers {n}, {n,m}, and
>     {n,};
>  *  grouping parentheses;
>  *  the choice operator |;
>  *  and anchors (beginning-of-input ^ and end-of-input $).
> 
> Perhaps:
>  *  characters;
>  *  character classes in square brackets, including ranges; 
>  *  their complements;
>  *  simple quantifiers *, +, ?, and range quantifiers {n}, {n,m}, and
>     {n,};
>  *  grouping parentheses;
>  *  the choice operator |;
>  *  and anchors (beginning-of-input ^ and end-of-input $).
> -->

Complements are specific to character classes (the complement of [abc] would be 
[^abc]), so we think this is easier to understand as part of the same bullet 
item.


> 19) <!-- [rfced] Does "earlier drafts" refer to earlier drafts of the I-D 
> that became this RFC or earlier versions of SDF (defined elsewhere)?  Perhaps 
> this can be clarified?
> 
> Current: 
> Appendix E. Some Changes From Earlier Drafts 
> -->

The first (real) paragraph of Appendix E is actually intended to clarify this.
To answer the question: All the published draft specs have been 
Internet-Drafts, see timeline on
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-asdf-sdf/

“Earlier drafts” of course is a bit confusing as the RFC-to-be no longer is a 
draft.
Maybe “from drafts of this specification”?


> 20) <!-- [rfced] Please review each artwork element and let us know if any 
> should be marked as sourcecode (or another element) instead.
> 
> We updated Figure 5 from artwork to sourcecode. Please confirm that this is
> correct.

When does a snippet (like the one about warning/danger in 2.3.2, which is 
marked as artwork) become sourcecode?
Figure 5 is not really parsable per se, it needs to be integrated into context 
to *really* be sourcecode.
Despite this, marking it as JSON sourcecode probably is OK (even if 
kramdown-rfc would complain that it isn’t really JSON, because it is a snippet, 
or actually two of them in one figure).

> In addition, please consider whether the "type" attribute of any sourcecode
> element should be set and/or has been set correctly.

[TO CHECK]

> The current list of preferred values for "type" is available at
> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=sourcecode-types>.
> If the current list does not contain an applicable type, feel free to
> suggest additions for consideration. Note that it is also acceptable
> to leave the "type" attribute not set.

We haven’t really discussed so far whether there should be a sourcecode type 
specifically for SDF.
By default, application/sdf+json is one (usually leaving out application/, so 
just “sdf+json”).
We do have precedent for using structured syntax suffixes in 
yang-instance-data+json, so nothing appears to speak against use that.
(There are 25 instances where this needs to be checked.)

> -->



> 21) <!-- [rfced] We note that these terms appear both with and without <tt> 
> tags.  Please review each instance of the terms below and ensure that they 
> appear in the document as desired. If these terms should be formatted 
> consistently or follow a specific pattern, please let us know.  

[TO CHECK]

Generally, when the sourcecode construct is meant, we use the typewriter font; 
when the concept is meant (“an array of string values”…), we don’t, and we then 
use the English capitalization (“Boolean”).

> <tt>absolute-URI</tt>
> <tt>array</tt>
> <tt>boolean</tt>
> <tt>curie</tt>
> <tt>date-time</tt> (also appears in quotes)
> <tt>defaultNamespace</tt>
> <tt>description</tt>
> <tt>enum</tt>
> <tt>false</tt>
> <tt>features</tt> (also appears in quotes)
> <tt>format</tt>
> <tt>info</tt>
> <tt>integer</tt>
> <tt>items</tt>
> <tt>json-schema.org</tt>
> <tt>label</tt>
> <tt>length</tt>
> <tt>named-sdq</tt>
> <tt>namespace</tt>
> <tt>null</tt>
> <tt>number</tt>
> <tt>object</tt> (also appears in quotes)
> <tt>pattern</tt> (also appears in quotes)
> <tt>properties</tt> (also appears in quotes)
> <tt>referenceable-name</tt> (also appears in quotes)   
> <tt>required</tt>
> <tt>sdfAction</tt>
> <tt>sdfChoice</tt>
> <tt>sdfData</tt>
> <tt>sdfEvent</tt>
> <tt>sdfObject</tt>
> <tt>sdfOutputData</tt>
> <tt>sdfProperty</tt>
> <tt>sdfRef</tt>
> <tt>sdfRequired</tt> (also appears in quotes)
> <tt>sdfThing</tt>
> <tt>sdf</tt>
> <tt>sdfType</tt>
> <tt>string</tt>
> <tt>toggle</tt> (also appears in quotes)
> <tt>true</tt>
> <tt>type</tt>
> <tt>unit(s)</tt>
> <tt>value</tt>
> -->
> 
> 
> 22) <!-- [rfced] Please review the following terms and let us know if/how 
> we should update for consistency.
> 
> a) Capitalization
> affordance vs. Affordance

We generally capitalize new terms in the definition of terms (section 1.2) but 
tried to avoid drowning in capitalized words all over the text.

   Terms introduced in this section are capitalized when used in this
   section.  To maintain readability, capitalization is only used when
   needed where they are used in the body of this document.

It seems the capitalization of Affordance is consistent with this.

> boolean vs. Boolean

Concept (Boolean, after George Boole) vs. the name of the type in the SDF 
document (boolean, in that spelling).

> CURIE vs. curie

Generally, CURIE is the concept (and this needs to be fixed in a few places).
Lowercase “curie” is the name of the production in W3C.NOTE-curie-20101216

> JSON pointer vs. JSON Pointer

This is indeed inconsistent.
RFC 6901 uses JSON Pointer consistently, but we don’t have to follow their 
style.
But since JSON already is all-caps, maybe it doesn’t hurt to do so.

Continue here later… [TO CHECK]

> Properties vs. properties
> quality names vs. Quality Names
> SDF model vs. SDF Model
> 
> b) Spacing
> data qualities vs. dataqualities
> data quality vs. data quality

?

> c) Other
> base SDF vs. SDF base
> -->
> 
> 
> 23) <!-- [rfced] FYI - We have added expansions for abbreviations upon 
> first use per Section 3.6 of RFC 7322 ("RFC Style Guide"). Please review 
> each expansion in the document carefully to ensure correctness.
> -->

We’ll get to this in the diff reading phase.
[TO CHECK]

> 24) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the 
> online Style Guide 
> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language>
> and let us know if any changes are needed.  Updates of this nature 
> typically result in more precise language, which is helpful for readers.
> 
> Note that our script did not flag any words in particular, but this should 
> still be reviewed as a best practice. -->

We wrote the text with this style objective in mind and are not aware of any 
further changes needed.

> Thank you.

Thank you!

> Madison Church and Sandy Ginoza 
> RFC Production Center
> 
> 
> 
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> RFC 9880 (draft-ietf-asdf-sdf-24)
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> Title            : Semantic Definition Format (SDF) for Data and Interactions 
> of Things
> Author(s)        : M. Koster, Ed., C. Bormann, Ed., A. Keränen
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