RFC Editor:

> On Oct 10, 2025, at 3:47 PM, [email protected] wrote:
> 
> Russ,
> 
> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as necessary) 
> the following questions, which are also in the source file.
> 
> 1) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that appear in
> the title) for use on https://www.rfc-editor.org/search. -->

It is wort adding PKCS#10 to the list of key words.

> 2) <!--[rfced] We updated the indefinite articles that occur before an
>     abbreviation that begins with a vowel sound to be "an" instead of
>     "a" (i.e., before ML-KEM, ML-DSA, ECDA, and ECDH).
> 
> We do see one occurrence of "ML-DSA" in RFC 9794, which used "a
> ML-DSA", so please confirm these changes.
> 
> -->

This reads fine to me.  Thanks.

> 3) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the
>     online Style Guide
>     <https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language>
>     and let us know if any changes are needed.  Updates of this
>     nature typically result in more precise language, which is
>     helpful for readers.
> 
> 
> Note that our script did not flag any words in particular, but this
> should still be reviewed as a best practice.
> -->

I do not see any words that concern me.

Russ

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