I approve the publication. Thanks, Siva
-----Original Message----- From: Mike Koldychev <[email protected]> Sent: Friday, October 10, 2025 3:03 PM To: Kaelin Foody <[email protected]> Cc: Samuel Sidor (ssidor) <[email protected]>; Roman Danyliw <[email protected]>; [email protected]; Sivabalan, Siva <[email protected]>; [email protected]; [email protected]; [email protected]; [email protected]; Dhruv Dhody <[email protected]>; [email protected]; [email protected] Subject: [**EXTERNAL**] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9862 <draft-ietf-pce-segment-routing-policy-cp-27> for your review Hi Kaelin, I approve the publication. Thanks, Mike. On Thursday, October 9th, 2025 at 9:49 AM, Kaelin Foody <[email protected]> wrote: > > > Authors, > > This is a friendly reminder that we await some of your approvals regarding > this document’s readiness for publication. We will await approvals > from each author listed on the AUTH48 status page prior to moving this > document forward in the publication process. > > The AUTH48 status page for this document is available here: > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9862__;!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLW4CdYiQ$ > [rfc-editor[.]org] > > Upon careful review, please contact us with any further updates or with your > approval of the document in its current form. > > Please review the document carefully to ensure satisfaction as we do not make > changes once it has been published as an RFC. > > — FILES (please refresh): — > > The updated files have been posted here: > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9862.txt__;!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLUD2iauT$ > [rfc-editor[.]org] > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9862.pdf__;!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLS4fEcvY$ > [rfc-editor[.]org] > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9862.html__;!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLU3OXvQT$ > [rfc-editor[.]org] > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9862.xml__;!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLUR6Qve7$ > [rfc-editor[.]org] > > The relevant diff files have been posted here: > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9862-auth48diff.html__;!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLa64r9iz$ > [rfc-editor[.]org] (AUTH48 changes only) > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9862-auth48rfcdiff.html__;!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLStiXoII$ > [rfc-editor[.]org] (AUTH 48 changes side by side) > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9862-diff.html__;!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLWkkQJ2v$ > [rfc-editor[.]org] (all changes) > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9862-rfcdiff.html__;!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLWA0wzhO$ > [rfc-editor[.]org] (all changes side by side) > > Thank you, > > Kaelin Foody > RFC Production Center > > > On Oct 3, 2025, at 3:07 PM, Kaelin Foody [email protected] wrote: > > > > Hi Dhruv, Samuel, all, > > > > Dhruv - Thanks for your reply and request. We have condensed the two tables > > in Section 6.3 into one and removed the duplicate lead-in text. You may > > view these updates in the diff: > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9862-auth48rfcdiff.html__;!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLStiXoII$ > > [rfc-editor[.]org]. > > > > Samuel - Thanks for your approval; we have marked it on the AUTH48 status > > page for this document. > > > > We await approvals from each author listed on the AUTH48 status page prior > > to moving forward in the publication process. > > > > The AUTH48 status page for this document is available here: > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9862__;!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLW4CdYiQ$ > > [rfc-editor[.]org] > > > > — FILES (please refresh): — > > > > The updated files have been posted here: > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9862.txt__;!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLUD2iauT$ > > [rfc-editor[.]org] > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9862.pdf__;!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLS4fEcvY$ > > [rfc-editor[.]org] > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9862.html__;!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLU3OXvQT$ > > [rfc-editor[.]org] > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9862.xml__;!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLUR6Qve7$ > > [rfc-editor[.]org] > > > > The relevant diff files have been posted here: > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9862-auth48diff.html__;!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLa64r9iz$ > > [rfc-editor[.]org] (AUTH48 changes only) > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9862-auth48rfcdiff.html__;!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLStiXoII$ > > [rfc-editor[.]org] (AUTH 48 changes side by side) > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9862-diff.html__;!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLWkkQJ2v$ > > [rfc-editor[.]org] (all changes) > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9862-rfcdiff.html__;!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLWA0wzhO$ > > [rfc-editor[.]org] (all changes side by side) > > > > Thanks for your time, > > > > Kaelin Foody > > RFC Production Center > > > > > On Oct 1, 2025, at 12:15 AM, Dhruv Dhody [email protected] wrote: > > > > > > Hi, > > > > > > Just one comment on section 6.3 - > > > > > > The two tables made sense in the draft as we were giving two distinct > > > instructions to IANA - (1) to confirm existing allocations and (2) for > > > new allocations at > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-pce-segment-routing-policy-cp-27*section-6.3__;Iw!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLeNs0Nbn$ > > > [datatracker[.]ietf[.]org] > > > > > > In the published RFC, this distinction does not make sense and I suggest > > > we can have a single table now at > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9862.html*section-6.3__;Iw!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLTLoSiOd$ > > > [rfc-editor[.]org] and update the initial list accordingly. > > > > > > Thanks! > > > Dhruv > > > > > > On Tue, Sep 30, 2025 at 10:36 PM Samuel Sidor (ssidor) [email protected] > > > wrote: > > > Thanks a lot, Kaelin. > > > > > > Looks fine to me, so approving from my side. > > > > > > Regards, > > > Samuel > > > > > > From: Kaelin Foody [email protected] > > > Date: Tuesday, 30 September 2025 at 18:18 > > > To: Samuel Sidor (ssidor) [email protected] > > > Cc: Roman Danyliw [email protected], [email protected] > > > [email protected], [email protected] [email protected], > > > [email protected] [email protected], [email protected] > > > [email protected], [email protected] [email protected], > > > [email protected] [email protected], [email protected] > > > [email protected], [email protected] [email protected], > > > [email protected] [email protected], [email protected] > > > [email protected] > > > Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9862 > > > <draft-ietf-pce-segment-routing-policy-cp-27> for your review > > > > > > Hi Samuel, > > > > > > We have updated several instances in Sections 5.1 and 5.2.2 to > > > "EXPLICIT-NULL-LABEL-POLICY TLV" per your request. Please review and let > > > us know if any further updates are needed. > > > > > > Upon careful review, please contact us with any further updates or with > > > your approval of the document in its current form. We will await > > > approvals from each author listed on the AUTH48 status page prior to > > > moving forward in the publication process. > > > > > > The AUTH48 status page for this document is available here: > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9862__;!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLW4CdYiQ$ > > > [rfc-editor[.]org] > > > > > > Please review the document carefully to ensure satisfaction as we do not > > > make changes once it has been published as an RFC. > > > > > > — FILES (please refresh): — > > > > > > The updated files have been posted here: > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9862.txt__;!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLUD2iauT$ > > > [rfc-editor[.]org] > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9862.pdf__;!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLS4fEcvY$ > > > [rfc-editor[.]org] > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9862.html__;!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLU3OXvQT$ > > > [rfc-editor[.]org] > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9862.xml__;!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLUR6Qve7$ > > > [rfc-editor[.]org] > > > > > > The relevant diff files have been posted here: > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9862-auth48diff.html__;!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLa64r9iz$ > > > [rfc-editor[.]org] (AUTH48 changes only) > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9862-auth48rfcdiff.html__;!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLStiXoII$ > > > [rfc-editor[.]org] (AUTH 48 changes side by side) > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9862-diff.html__;!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLWkkQJ2v$ > > > [rfc-editor[.]org] (all changes) > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9862-rfcdiff.html__;!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLWA0wzhO$ > > > [rfc-editor[.]org] (all changes side by side) > > > > > > Thank you, > > > > > > Kaelin Foody > > > RFC Production Center > > > > > > > On Sep 30, 2025, at 10:23 AM, Samuel Sidor (ssidor) [email protected] > > > > wrote: > > > > > > > > Hi Kaelin, > > > > > > > > Thanks a lot for renaming "Explicit Null Label Policy TLV" to > > > > "EXPLICIT-NULL-LABEL-POLICY TLV”. > > > > > > > > It seems that there are still 3 remaining occurrences of old name: > > > > > > > > • Description of E-flag in Section 5.1 > > > > > > > > E-flag (Explicit NULL Label Policy): If set to 1 by a PCEP speaker, the > > > > E-flag indicates that the PCEP speaker supports the handling of the > > > > Explicit NULL Label Policy (ENLP) TLV for the SR Policy (Section > > > > 5.2.2). If this flag is set to 0, then the receiving PCEP speaker MUST > > > > NOT send the ENLP TLV and MUST ignore it on receipt. > > > > • “Figure 8: Explicit NULL Label Policy (ENLP) TLV Format” in Section > > > > 5.2.2 > > > > • In section 5.2.2 we are referring to ENLP TLV, but since name of that > > > > TLV was updated, we are not introducing “ENLP TLV” anywhere, so I > > > > assume that we will need to replace those 2 occurrences with complete > > > > TLV name. > > > > > > > > Can we update those as well? Besides that the document looks fine to me. > > > > > > > > Thanks a lot, > > > > Samuel > > > > > > > > From: Kaelin Foody [email protected] > > > > Date: Tuesday, 30 September 2025 at 16:02 > > > > To: Samuel Sidor (ssidor) [email protected] > > > > Cc: Roman Danyliw [email protected], [email protected] > > > > [email protected], [email protected] [email protected], > > > > [email protected] [email protected], [email protected] > > > > [email protected], [email protected] [email protected], > > > > [email protected] [email protected], [email protected] > > > > [email protected], [email protected] [email protected], > > > > [email protected] [email protected], [email protected] > > > > [email protected] > > > > Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9862 > > > > <draft-ietf-pce-segment-routing-policy-cp-27> for your review > > > > > > > > Hi all, > > > > > > > > Roman - Thank you for your reply and approval. We have marked your > > > > approval as AD on the AUTH48 status page. > > > > > > > > Samuel - Thank you for your response. We have updated 2 instances of > > > > "Explicit Null Label Policy TLV" to "EXPLICIT-NULL-LABEL-POLICY TLV” > > > > (in the title of 5.2.2 and one instance in Section 5.2.2) to match > > > > Table 2. Please review and let us know if any further changes are > > > > needed. > > > > > > > > We will await approvals from each author listed on the AUTH48 status > > > > page prior to moving forward in the publication process. > > > > > > > > The AUTH48 status page for this document is available here: > > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9862__;!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLW4CdYiQ$ > > > > [rfc-editor[.]org] > > > > > > > > Please review the document carefully to ensure satisfaction as we do > > > > not make changes once it has been published as an RFC. > > > > > > > > — FILES (please refresh): — > > > > > > > > The updated files have been posted here: > > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9862.txt__;!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLUD2iauT$ > > > > [rfc-editor[.]org] > > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9862.pdf__;!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLS4fEcvY$ > > > > [rfc-editor[.]org] > > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9862.html__;!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLU3OXvQT$ > > > > [rfc-editor[.]org] > > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9862.xml__;!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLUR6Qve7$ > > > > [rfc-editor[.]org] > > > > > > > > The relevant diff files have been posted here: > > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9862-auth48diff.html__;!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLa64r9iz$ > > > > [rfc-editor[.]org] (AUTH48 changes only) > > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9862-auth48rfcdiff.html__;!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLStiXoII$ > > > > [rfc-editor[.]org] (AUTH 48 changes side by side) > > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9862-diff.html__;!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLWkkQJ2v$ > > > > [rfc-editor[.]org] (all changes) > > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9862-rfcdiff.html__;!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLWA0wzhO$ > > > > [rfc-editor[.]org] (all changes side by side) > > > > > > > > Thank you, > > > > > > > > Kaelin Foody > > > > RFC Production Center > > > > > > > > > On Sep 29, 2025, at 4:28 AM, Samuel Sidor (ssidor) [email protected] > > > > > wrote: > > > > > > > > > > Hi Kaelin, > > > > > > > > > > Changes looks great to me. > > > > > > > > > > One small nit/question: > > > > > > > > > > In Section 5.2.2, section is called “Explicit NULL Label Policy > > > > > (ENLP) TLV”, but in 6.2.2 we are still calling it > > > > > “EXPLICIT-NULL-LABEL-POLICY”. Is the intentional? > > > > > > > > > > Thanks a lot, > > > > > Samuel > > > > > > > > > > From: Roman Danyliw [email protected] > > > > > Date: Saturday, 27 September 2025 at 00:34 > > > > > To: Kaelin Foody [email protected], Samuel Sidor (ssidor) > > > > > [email protected] > > > > > Cc: [email protected] [email protected], > > > > > [email protected] [email protected], [email protected] > > > > > [email protected], [email protected] [email protected], > > > > > [email protected] [email protected], > > > > > [email protected] [email protected], [email protected] > > > > > [email protected], [email protected] [email protected], > > > > > [email protected] [email protected], [email protected] > > > > > [email protected] > > > > > Subject: RE: [AD] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9862 > > > > > <draft-ietf-pce-segment-routing-policy-cp-27> for your review > > > > > > > > > > Approved. > > > > > > > > > > -----Original Message----- > > > > > From: Kaelin Foody [email protected] > > > > > Sent: Friday, September 26, 2025 6:01 PM > > > > > To: Samuel Sidor (ssidor) [email protected]; Roman > > > > > Danyliw [email protected] > > > > > Cc: [email protected]; [email protected]; > > > > > [email protected]; [email protected]; [email protected]; > > > > > [email protected]; [email protected]; [email protected]; > > > > > [email protected]; Roman Danyliw [email protected]; > > > > > [email protected] > > > > > Subject: [AD] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9862 > > > > > <draft-ietf-pce-segment-routing-policy-cp-27> for your review > > > > > > > > > > Warning: External Sender - do not click links or open attachments > > > > > unless you recognize the sender and know the content is safe. > > > > > > > > > > Hi Samuel and *Roman, > > > > > > > > > > * Roman - As AD, please review the following changes in Sections 4.4, > > > > > 6.5, and 6.6 and let us know if you approve. The updates can be > > > > > viewed here: > > > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9862-auth48diff.html__;!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLa64r9iz$ > > > > > [rfc-editor[.]org]. > > > > > > > > > > a) Section 4.4 (addition of “shortest” below): > > > > > > > > > > OLD: > > > > > > > > > > An example use case is to terminate the SR Policy before reaching the > > > > > Endpoint and have decapsulated traffic be forwarded the rest of the > > > > > path to the Endpoint node using the native Interior Gateway Protocol > > > > > (IGP) path(s). > > > > > > > > > > NEW: > > > > > > > > > > An example use case is to terminate the SR Policy before reaching the > > > > > Endpoint and have decapsulated traffic be forwarded the rest of the > > > > > path to the Endpoint node using the Interior Gateway Protocol (IGP) > > > > > shortest path(s). > > > > > > > > > > b) Sections 6.5 and 6.6 (updates to the definitions in the IANA > > > > > Considerations section): > > > > > > > > > > OLD: > > > > > > > > > > D: dropping - the LSP is currently attracting traffic and actively > > > > > dropping it. > > > > > > > > > > D: drop enabled - the Drop-upon-invalid is enabled on the LSP. > > > > > > > > > > NEW: > > > > > > > > > > D: Dropping - the LSP is actively dropping traffic as a result of > > > > > Drop-Upon-Invalid behavior being activated. > > > > > > > > > > D: Drop enabled - the Candidate Path has Drop-Upon-Invalid feature > > > > > enabled. > > > > > > > > > > Samuel - Thank you for your reply; we have updated the document > > > > > accordingly. > > > > > > > > > > A few follow-up notes: > > > > > > > > > > a) > > > > > > > > > > > <!--[rfced] Section 5.2.3 vs. IANA Considerations: > > > > > > Should this text be updated to match the IANA-registered description > > > > > > of each bit (which appears in Tables 6 and 7), or is it intentional > > > > > > for Section 5.2.3 to differ? > > > > > > > > > > > > - See > > > > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.iana.org/assignments/pcep/pcep.xhtml*sr-policy-invalidatio__;Iw!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLdERpoSN$ > > > > > > [iana[.]org] > > > > > > n-operational-flags > > > > > > > > > > > > Original: > > > > > > * D: dropping - the LSP is actively dropping traffic as a result of > > > > > > Drop-upon-invalid behavior being activated. > > > > > > > > > > > > Perhaps (if it should match the IANA registry, including the > > > > > > capitalization change which we will request): > > > > > > > > > > > > * D: Dropping - the LSP is currently attracting traffic and > > > > > > actively dropping it. > > > > > > > > > > > > - See > > > > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.iana.org/assignments/pcep/pcep.xhtml*sr-policy-invalidatio__;Iw!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLdERpoSN$ > > > > > > [iana[.]org] > > > > > > n-configuration-flags > > > > > > > > > > > > Original: > > > > > > * D: drop enabled - the Candidate Path has Drop-upon-invalid feature > > > > > > enabled. > > > > > > > > > > > > Perhaps (if it should match the IANA registry, including the > > > > > > capitalization changes that we will request): > > > > > > > > > > > > * D: Drop enabled - the Drop-Upon-Invalid is enabled on the LSP. > > > > > > --> > > > > > > > > > > > > Text in section 5.2.3 was intentionally updated based on comments, > > > > > > so it would be better to do not revert it back to text from IANA > > > > > > section. Either we can keep in current way (different text in > > > > > > Section 5.2.3 and IANA considerations) or we will need to update > > > > > > IANA registry as well. > > > > > > > > > > We have left the text in Section 5.2.3 as is and have updated these > > > > > definitions in the IANA Considerations section (Sections 6.5 and 6.6) > > > > > to match how they appear in Section 5.2.3. Note that we will ask IANA > > > > > to make this update along with the other registry updates. > > > > > > > > > > b) > > > > > > > > > > > <!-- [rfced] Please review the following questions about > > > > > > terminology. > > > > > > > > > > > > a) We note the following different uses of the term below. Please > > > > > > review and let us know how to update for consistency. > > > > > > > > > > > > EXPLICIT-NULL-LABEL-POLICY (as seen in Table 2) Explicit NULL Label > > > > > > Policy (ENLP) TLV Explicit Null Label Policy (ENLP) TLV Explicit > > > > > > NULL > > > > > > Label Policy (E-Flag) Explicit NULL Label [RFC3032] Explicit Null > > > > > > Label Policy Explicit NULL label/s explicit null label Note that > > > > > > Explicit Null is… > > > > > > > > > > > • Term Explicit NULL is used in RFC3032, so please use “Explicit > > > > > > NULL Label Policy (ENLP) TLV” for TLV name and “Explicit NULL Label > > > > > > Policy (E-Flag)” for Flag. > > > > > > > > > > We have updated the items above accordingly. Please note that we have > > > > > also updated the terms below (all from Section 5.2.2.) as follows. > > > > > Please review and let us know if these updates are suitable: > > > > > > > > > > OLD: > > > > > > > > > > Explicit NULL Label [RFC3032] > > > > > Explicit NULL label > > > > > Explicit Null is currently only defined for… explicit null label > > > > > > > > > > NEW: > > > > > > > > > > Explicit NULL label [RFC3032] > > > > > Explicit NULL label > > > > > Explicit NULL is currently only defined for… Explicit NULL label > > > > > > > > > > Upon careful review, please contact us with any further updates or > > > > > with your approval of the document in its current form. We will await > > > > > approvals from each author listed on the AUTH48 status page prior to > > > > > moving forward in the publication process. > > > > > > > > > > The AUTH48 status page for this document is available here: > > > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9862__;!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLW4CdYiQ$ > > > > > [rfc-editor[.]org] > > > > > > > > > > Please review the document carefully to ensure satisfaction as we do > > > > > not make changes once it has been published as an RFC. > > > > > > > > > > — FILES (please refresh): — > > > > > > > > > > The updated files have been posted here: > > > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9862.txt__;!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLUD2iauT$ > > > > > [rfc-editor[.]org] > > > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9862.pdf__;!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLS4fEcvY$ > > > > > [rfc-editor[.]org] > > > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9862.html__;!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLU3OXvQT$ > > > > > [rfc-editor[.]org] > > > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9862.xml__;!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLUR6Qve7$ > > > > > [rfc-editor[.]org] > > > > > > > > > > The relevant diff files have been posted here: > > > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9862-auth48diff.html__;!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLa64r9iz$ > > > > > [rfc-editor[.]org] (AUTH48 changes only) > > > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9862-auth48rfcdiff.html__;!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLStiXoII$ > > > > > [rfc-editor[.]org] (AUTH 48 changes side by side) > > > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9862-diff.html__;!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLWkkQJ2v$ > > > > > [rfc-editor[.]org] (all changes) > > > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9862-rfcdiff.html__;!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLWA0wzhO$ > > > > > [rfc-editor[.]org] (all changes side by side) > > > > > > > > > > Thank you for your time, > > > > > > > > > > Kaelin Foody > > > > > RFC Production Center > > > > > > > > > > > On Sep 23, 2025, at 9:15 AM, Samuel Sidor (ssidor) > > > > > > [email protected] wrote: > > > > > > > > > > > > Hi RFC editor, > > > > > > > > > > > > Thanks a lot for your work! The diff looks fine to me. > > > > > > > > > > > > For inline comments from XML: > > > > > > > > > > > > • Global: > > > > > > <!-- [rfced] This document updates RFC 8231. Please review the > > > > > > errata > > > > > > reported for RFC 8231 > > > > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/rfc8231__;!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLctT8ChH$ > > > > > > [rfc-editor[.]org] > > > > > > and confirm that none are relevant to the content of this document. > > > > > > —> > > > > > > > > > > > > RFC 8281 errata checked, but I don’t see any of them being relevant > > > > > > to > > > > > > this document > > > > > > > > > > > > • Global > > > > > > > > > > > > <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that appear in > > > > > > the title) for use on > > > > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/search__;!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLQZX0Xaa$ > > > > > > [rfc-editor[.]org]. —> > > > > > > > > > > > > OLD: > > > > > > <keyword>example</keyword> > > > > > > > > > > > > NEW: > > > > > > <keyword>PCEP</keyword> > > > > > > <keyword>SR Policy</keyword> > > > > > > <keyword>Candidate-Path</keyword> > > > > > > > > > > > > • Introduction > > > > > > <!-- [rfced] FYI, we added "for" here to make the meaning of the > > > > > > parenthetical more clear. Please let us know if you prefer > > > > > > otherwise. > > > > > > > > > > > > Original: > > > > > > Also, this document updates Section 5.8.2 of [RFC8231], making the > > > > > > use of Path Computation Request (PCReq) and Path Computation Reply > > > > > > (PCRep) messages optional for LSPs setup using Path Setup Type 1 > > > > > > (Segment Routing) [RFC8664] and Path Setup Type 3 (SRv6) [RFC9603] > > > > > > with the aim of reducing the PCEP message exchanges and simplifying > > > > > > implementation. > > > > > > [...] > > > > > > > > > > > > SR Policy LSP: An LSP setup using Path Setup Type [RFC8408] 1 > > > > > > (Segment Routing) or 3 (SRv6). > > > > > > > > > > > > Current: > > > > > > Also, this document updates Section 5.8.2 of [RFC8231], making the > > > > > > use of Path Computation Request (PCReq) and Path Computation Reply > > > > > > (PCRep) messages optional for LSPs that are set up using Path Setup > > > > > > Type 1 (for Segment Routing) [RFC8664] and Path Setup Type 3 (for > > > > > > SRv6) [RFC9603] with the aim of reducing the PCEP message exchanges > > > > > > and simplifying implementation. > > > > > > [...] > > > > > > > > > > > > SR Policy LSP: An LSP setup using Path Setup Type [RFC8408] 1 (for > > > > > > Segment Routing) or 3 (for SRv6). > > > > > > —> > > > > > > I’m fine with updated text > > > > > > > > > > > > • Association Parameters > > > > > > <!-- [rfced] We note that Figure 1 differs slightly from the other > > > > > > TLV > > > > > > format figures in this document. Specifically, Figure 1 contains > > > > > > values for Type and Length within the figure itself. Do you want to > > > > > > remove these values from Figure 1 for consistency with the other > > > > > > figures in this document? > > > > > > > > > > > > Figure 1: > > > > > > > > > > > > +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+ > > > > > > | Type = 31 | Length = 8 or 20 | > > > > > > +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+ > > > > > > > > > > > > Figure 2: > > > > > > > > > > > > +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+ > > > > > > | Type | Length | > > > > > > +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+ > > > > > > > > > > > > FYI, we updated the first list item after Figure 1 for consistency > > > > > > with the other lists/figures. > > > > > > > > > > > > Original: > > > > > > Type: Extended Association ID TLV, type = 31 [RFC8697]. > > > > > > > > > > > > Current: > > > > > > Type: 31 for the Extended Association ID TLV [RFC8697]. > > > > > > —> > > > > > > > > > > > > Figure 1 can be aligned with other figures. > > > > > > > > > > > > OLD: > > > > > > +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+ > > > > > > | Type = 31 | Length = 8 or 20 | > > > > > > +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+ > > > > > > > > > > > > NEW: > > > > > > +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+ > > > > > > | Type | Length | > > > > > > +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+ > > > > > > > > > > > > Updated text after Figure 1 is fine. > > > > > > > > > > > > • Association Information > > > > > > > > > > > > <!--[rfced] FYI, several section titles have been updated to exactly > > > > > > match the TLV name. If you prefer the original section titles, > > > > > > please > > > > > > let us know. For example: > > > > > > > > > > > > Original: > > > > > > 4.5.1. SR Policy Name TLV > > > > > > 4.5.2. SR Policy Candidate Path Identifier TLV > > > > > > > > > > > > Current: > > > > > > 4.5.1. SRPOLICY-POL-NAME TLV > > > > > > 4.5.2. SRPOLICY-CPATH-ID TLV > > > > > > --> > > > > > > > > > > > > It makes sense to have them aligned with actual TLV names, so > > > > > > updated text is fine. > > > > > > > > > > > > • SR Policy Signaling Extensions > > > > > > <!-- [rfced] For clarity, may we update this text as follows? > > > > > > This includes adding "they" after "therefore", adding punctuation, > > > > > > and > > > > > > splitting the second sentence into two sentences. > > > > > > > > > > > > Original: > > > > > > This section introduces mechanisms described for SR Policies in > > > > > > [RFC9256] to PCEP. These extensions do not make use of the SRPA for > > > > > > signaling in PCEP therefore cannot rely on the Association > > > > > > capability > > > > > > negotiation in ASSOC-Type-List TLV and separate capability > > > > > > negotiation is required. > > > > > > > > > > > > Perhaps: > > > > > > This section introduces mechanisms described for SR Policies in > > > > > > [RFC9256] to PCEP. These extensions do not make use of the SRPA for > > > > > > signaling in PCEP; therefore, they cannot rely on the Association > > > > > > capability negotiation in the ASSOC-Type-List TLV. Instead, separate > > > > > > capability negotiation is required. > > > > > > —> > > > > > > > > > > > > I’m fine with updated text. > > > > > > > > > > > > 7. Invalidation TLV > > > > > > > > > > > > <!--[rfced] Section 5.2.3 vs. IANA Considerations: > > > > > > Should this text be updated to match the IANA-registered description > > > > > > of each bit (which appears in Tables 6 and 7), or is it intentional > > > > > > for Section 5.2.3 to differ? > > > > > > > > > > > > - See > > > > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.iana.org/assignments/pcep/pcep.xhtml*sr-policy-invalidatio__;Iw!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLdERpoSN$ > > > > > > [iana[.]org] > > > > > > n-operational-flags > > > > > > > > > > > > Original: > > > > > > * D: dropping - the LSP is actively dropping traffic as a result of > > > > > > Drop-upon-invalid behavior being activated. > > > > > > > > > > > > Perhaps (if it should match the IANA registry, including the > > > > > > capitalization change which we will request): > > > > > > > > > > > > * D: Dropping - the LSP is currently attracting traffic and > > > > > > actively dropping it. > > > > > > > > > > > > - See > > > > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.iana.org/assignments/pcep/pcep.xhtml*sr-policy-invalidatio__;Iw!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLdERpoSN$ > > > > > > [iana[.]org] > > > > > > n-configuration-flags > > > > > > > > > > > > Original: > > > > > > * D: drop enabled - the Candidate Path has Drop-upon-invalid feature > > > > > > enabled. > > > > > > > > > > > > Perhaps (if it should match the IANA registry, including the > > > > > > capitalization changes that we will request): > > > > > > > > > > > > * D: Drop enabled - the Drop-Upon-Invalid is enabled on the LSP. > > > > > > --> > > > > > > > > > > > > Text in section 5.2.3 was intentionally updated based on comments, > > > > > > so it would be better to do not revert it back to text from IANA > > > > > > section. Either we can keep in current way (different text in > > > > > > Section 5.2.3 and IANA considerations) or we will need to update > > > > > > IANA registry as well. > > > > > > > > > > > > 8. Drop-Upon-Invalid Applies to SR Policy > > > > > > > > > > > > <!--[rfced] Section 5.2.3.1: Does 'the D (dropping) flag set' refer > > > > > > to > > > > > > the D flag (Dropping) from Figure 10 or the D flag (Drop enabled) > > > > > > from > > > > > > Figure 11? > > > > > > > > > > > > Original: > > > > > > Note that only one Candidate Path > > > > > > needs to be reported to the PCE with the D (dropping) flag set. > > > > > > > > > > > > Perhaps (if from Figure 10): > > > > > > Note that only one Candidate Path > > > > > > needs to be reported to the PCE with the Dropping (D) flag set. > > > > > > --> > > > > > > > > > > > > Dropping flag is referring to “D flag (Dropping)”, so proposed text > > > > > > is fine. > > > > > > > > > > > > 9. Information and Data Models > > > > > > > > > > > > <!-- [rfced] Does "described in Section 4" refer to Section 4 of > > > > > > this > > > > > > document or Section 4 of [I-D.ietf-pce-pcep-srv6-yang]? > > > > > > > > > > > > Original: > > > > > > [I-D.ietf-pce-pcep-srv6-yang] defines YANG module with common > > > > > > building blocks for PCEP Extensions described in Section 4. > > > > > > --> > > > > > > > > > > > > This refers to section 4 of this/current document. > > > > > > > > > > > > 10. Global > > > > > > > > > > > > <!-- [rfced] Please review the following questions about > > > > > > terminology. > > > > > > > > > > > > a) We note the following different uses of the term below. Please > > > > > > review and let us know how to update for consistency. > > > > > > > > > > > > EXPLICIT-NULL-LABEL-POLICY (as seen in Table 2) Explicit NULL Label > > > > > > Policy (ENLP) TLV Explicit Null Label Policy (ENLP) TLV Explicit > > > > > > NULL > > > > > > Label Policy (E-Flag) Explicit NULL Label [RFC3032] Explicit Null > > > > > > Label Policy Explicit NULL label/s explicit null label Note that > > > > > > Explicit Null is... > > > > > > > > > > > > b) We note different capitalization for the terms below. Please > > > > > > review > > > > > > and let us know how to update for consistency. > > > > > > > > > > > > Destination vs. destination > > > > > > > > > > > > Preference vs. preference > > > > > > > > > > > > Candidate Path vs. candidate path > > > > > > —> > > > > > > > > > > > > • Term Explicit NULL is used in RFC3032, so please use “Explicit > > > > > > NULL Label Policy (ENLP) TLV” for TLV name and “Explicit NULL Label > > > > > > Policy (E-Flag)” for Flag. > > > > > > • > > > > > > • "Destination vs. destination” - all four occurrences can be used > > > > > > with lowercase > > > > > > • “Preference vs. preference" - that inconsistency seems to be > > > > > > coming from > > > > > > “https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc9256.html*name-preference-of-a-candidate-p__;Iw!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLZ0frfoo$ > > > > > > [rfc-editor[.]org]”. Please use “Preference” in all occurrences > > > > > > except one occurrence in section 5.2.3.1 in this statement, where > > > > > > usage of “Preference” does not make sense: > > > > > > If so, the SR Policy enters the drop > > > > > > state and "activates" the highest preference Candidate Path which > > > > > > has > > > > > > the Drop-upon-invalid enabled. > > > > > > > > > > > > • “Candidate Path vs. candidate path” - please use “Candidate Path" > > > > > > > > > > > > 11. Global > > > > > > > > > > > > <!-- [rfced] FYI - We have already updated the following terms for > > > > > > consistency within the document and to match usage in other RFCs. > > > > > > Please review: > > > > > > > > > > > > a) For the terms below, we have updated the form(s) on the left to > > > > > > the > > > > > > form on the right. > > > > > > > > > > > > association type / Association type -> Association Type (per RFC > > > > > > 8697) > > > > > > > > > > > > Association Parameters -> association parameters (per RFC 8697) > > > > > > > > > > > > ASSOCIATION Object -> ASSOCIATION object (per RFC 8697) > > > > > > > > > > > > Protocol Origin -> Protocol-Origin (per Section 2.3 of RFC 9256) > > > > > > > > > > > > Drop-upon-invalid -> Drop-Upon-Invalid (per Section 8.2 of RFC 9256) > > > > > > > > > > > > b) We note flags are stylized differently throughout (see some > > > > > > examples below). For consistency, we have updated all of these > > > > > > instances to P-flag, E-flag, etc. > > > > > > > > > > > > P-flag > > > > > > P flag > > > > > > E-Flag > > > > > > E flag > > > > > > I-Flag > > > > > > I flag > > > > > > L-Flag > > > > > > L flag > > > > > > "L-Flag" > > > > > > O-flag > > > > > > > > > > > > So, we will ask IANA to update to lowercase 'f' consistently in the > > > > > > description in this registry > > > > > > (https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.iana.org/assignments/pcep/pcep.xhtml*sr-policy-capability__;Iw!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLahEVur-$ > > > > > > [iana[.]org] > > > > > > -tlv-flag-field) unless you let us know otherwise. Specifically, for > > > > > > bits 27, 29, and 30: > > > > > > OLD: L-Flag, I-Flag, E-Flag > > > > > > NEW: L-flag, I-flag, E-flag > > > > > > > > > > > > c) FYI, "<headend, color, endpoint>" has been capitalized for > > > > > > consistency with Section 2.1 of [RFC9256]. > > > > > > > > > > > > Original: > > > > > > Per Section 2.1 of [RFC9256], an SR Policy is identified through the > > > > > > <headend, color, endpoint> tuple. > > > > > > > > > > > > The last hop of a computed SR Policy Candidate Path MAY differ from > > > > > > the Endpoint contained in the <headend, color, endpoint> tuple. > > > > > > > > > > > > Current: > > > > > > Per Section 2.1 of [RFC9256], an SR Policy is identified through the > > > > > > <Headend, Color, Endpoint> tuple. > > > > > > > > > > > > The last hop of a computed SR Policy Candidate Path MAY differ from > > > > > > the > > > > > > Endpoint contained in the <Headend, Color, Endpoint> tuple. > > > > > > —> > > > > > > > > > > > > All of those are find. Thanks a lot for updating all of those. > > > > > > > > > > > > 12. Global > > > > > > > > > > > > <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the > > > > > > online Style Guide > > > > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/*inclusive_language__;Iw!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLdfYCfBo$ > > > > > > [rfc-editor[.]org] > > > > > > and let us know if any changes are needed. 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Please review the > > > > > > errata > > > > > > reported for RFC 8231 > > > > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/rfc8231__;!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLctT8ChH$ > > > > > > [rfc-editor[.]org] > > > > > > and confirm that none are relevant to the content of this document. > > > > > > —> > > > > > > > > > > > > RFC 8281 errata checked, but I don’t see any of them being relevant > > > > > > to > > > > > > this document > > > > > > > > > > > > • Global > > > > > > > > > > > > <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that appear in > > > > > > the title) for use on > > > > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/search__;!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLQZX0Xaa$ > > > > > > [rfc-editor[.]org]. —> > > > > > > > > > > > > OLD: > > > > > > <keyword>example</keyword> > > > > > > > > > > > > NEW: > > > > > > <keyword>PCEP</keyword> > > > > > > <keyword>SR Policy</keyword> > > > > > > <keyword>Candidate-Path</keyword> > > > > > > > > > > > > • Introduction > > > > > > <!-- [rfced] FYI, we added "for" here to make the meaning of the > > > > > > parenthetical more clear. Please let us know if you prefer > > > > > > otherwise. > > > > > > > > > > > > Original: > > > > > > Also, this document updates Section 5.8.2 of [RFC8231], making the > > > > > > use of Path Computation Request (PCReq) and Path Computation Reply > > > > > > (PCRep) messages optional for LSPs setup using Path Setup Type 1 > > > > > > (Segment Routing) [RFC8664] and Path Setup Type 3 (SRv6) [RFC9603] > > > > > > with the aim of reducing the PCEP message exchanges and simplifying > > > > > > implementation. > > > > > > [...] > > > > > > > > > > > > SR Policy LSP: An LSP setup using Path Setup Type [RFC8408] 1 > > > > > > (Segment Routing) or 3 (SRv6). > > > > > > > > > > > > Current: > > > > > > Also, this document updates Section 5.8.2 of [RFC8231], making the > > > > > > use of Path Computation Request (PCReq) and Path Computation Reply > > > > > > (PCRep) messages optional for LSPs that are set up using Path Setup > > > > > > Type 1 (for Segment Routing) [RFC8664] and Path Setup Type 3 (for > > > > > > SRv6) [RFC9603] with the aim of reducing the PCEP message exchanges > > > > > > and simplifying implementation. > > > > > > [...] > > > > > > > > > > > > SR Policy LSP: An LSP setup using Path Setup Type [RFC8408] 1 (for > > > > > > Segment Routing) or 3 (for SRv6). > > > > > > —> > > > > > > I’m fine with updated text > > > > > > > > > > > > • Association Parameters > > > > > > <!-- [rfced] We note that Figure 1 differs slightly from the other > > > > > > TLV > > > > > > format figures in this document. Specifically, Figure 1 contains > > > > > > values for Type and Length within the figure itself. Do you want to > > > > > > remove these values from Figure 1 for consistency with the other > > > > > > figures in this document? > > > > > > > > > > > > Figure 1: > > > > > > > > > > > > +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+ > > > > > > | Type = 31 | Length = 8 or 20 | > > > > > > +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+ > > > > > > > > > > > > Figure 2: > > > > > > > > > > > > +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+ > > > > > > | Type | Length | > > > > > > +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+ > > > > > > > > > > > > FYI, we updated the first list item after Figure 1 for consistency > > > > > > with the other lists/figures. > > > > > > > > > > > > Original: > > > > > > Type: Extended Association ID TLV, type = 31 [RFC8697]. > > > > > > > > > > > > Current: > > > > > > Type: 31 for the Extended Association ID TLV [RFC8697]. > > > > > > —> > > > > > > > > > > > > Figure 1 can be aligned with other figures. > > > > > > > > > > > > OLD: > > > > > > +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+ > > > > > > | Type = 31 | Length = 8 or 20 | > > > > > > +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+ > > > > > > > > > > > > NEW: > > > > > > +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+ > > > > > > | Type | Length | > > > > > > +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+ > > > > > > > > > > > > Updated text after Figure 1 is fine. > > > > > > > > > > > > • Association Information > > > > > > > > > > > > <!--[rfced] FYI, several section titles have been updated to exactly > > > > > > match the TLV name. If you prefer the original section titles, > > > > > > please > > > > > > let us know. For example: > > > > > > > > > > > > Original: > > > > > > 4.5.1. SR Policy Name TLV > > > > > > 4.5.2. SR Policy Candidate Path Identifier TLV > > > > > > > > > > > > Current: > > > > > > 4.5.1. SRPOLICY-POL-NAME TLV > > > > > > 4.5.2. SRPOLICY-CPATH-ID TLV > > > > > > --> > > > > > > > > > > > > It makes sense to have them aligned with actual TLV names, so > > > > > > updated text is fine. > > > > > > > > > > > > • SR Policy Signaling Extensions > > > > > > <!-- [rfced] For clarity, may we update this text as follows? > > > > > > This includes adding "they" after "therefore", adding punctuation, > > > > > > and > > > > > > splitting the second sentence into two sentences. > > > > > > > > > > > > Original: > > > > > > This section introduces mechanisms described for SR Policies in > > > > > > [RFC9256] to PCEP. These extensions do not make use of the SRPA for > > > > > > signaling in PCEP therefore cannot rely on the Association > > > > > > capability > > > > > > negotiation in ASSOC-Type-List TLV and separate capability > > > > > > negotiation is required. > > > > > > > > > > > > Perhaps: > > > > > > This section introduces mechanisms described for SR Policies in > > > > > > [RFC9256] to PCEP. These extensions do not make use of the SRPA for > > > > > > signaling in PCEP; therefore, they cannot rely on the Association > > > > > > capability negotiation in the ASSOC-Type-List TLV. Instead, separate > > > > > > capability negotiation is required. > > > > > > —> > > > > > > > > > > > > I’m fine with updated text. > > > > > > > > > > > > 7. Invalidation TLV > > > > > > > > > > > > <!--[rfced] Section 5.2.3 vs. IANA Considerations: > > > > > > Should this text be updated to match the IANA-registered description > > > > > > of each bit (which appears in Tables 6 and 7), or is it intentional > > > > > > for Section 5.2.3 to differ? > > > > > > > > > > > > - See > > > > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.iana.org/assignments/pcep/pcep.xhtml*sr-policy-invalidatio__;Iw!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLdERpoSN$ > > > > > > [iana[.]org] > > > > > > n-operational-flags > > > > > > > > > > > > Original: > > > > > > * D: dropping - the LSP is actively dropping traffic as a result of > > > > > > Drop-upon-invalid behavior being activated. > > > > > > > > > > > > Perhaps (if it should match the IANA registry, including the > > > > > > capitalization change which we will request): > > > > > > > > > > > > * D: Dropping - the LSP is currently attracting traffic and > > > > > > actively dropping it. > > > > > > > > > > > > - See > > > > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.iana.org/assignments/pcep/pcep.xhtml*sr-policy-invalidatio__;Iw!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLdERpoSN$ > > > > > > [iana[.]org] > > > > > > n-configuration-flags > > > > > > > > > > > > Original: > > > > > > * D: drop enabled - the Candidate Path has Drop-upon-invalid feature > > > > > > enabled. > > > > > > > > > > > > Perhaps (if it should match the IANA registry, including the > > > > > > capitalization changes that we will request): > > > > > > > > > > > > * D: Drop enabled - the Drop-Upon-Invalid is enabled on the LSP. > > > > > > --> > > > > > > > > > > > > Text in section 5.2.3 was intentionally updated based on comments, > > > > > > so it would be better to do not revert it back to text from IANA > > > > > > section. Either we can keep in current way (different text in > > > > > > Section 5.2.3 and IANA considerations) or we will need to update > > > > > > IANA registry as well. > > > > > > > > > > > > 8. Drop-Upon-Invalid Applies to SR Policy > > > > > > > > > > > > <!--[rfced] Section 5.2.3.1: Does 'the D (dropping) flag set' refer > > > > > > to > > > > > > the D flag (Dropping) from Figure 10 or the D flag (Drop enabled) > > > > > > from > > > > > > Figure 11? > > > > > > > > > > > > Original: > > > > > > Note that only one Candidate Path > > > > > > needs to be reported to the PCE with the D (dropping) flag set. > > > > > > > > > > > > Perhaps (if from Figure 10): > > > > > > Note that only one Candidate Path > > > > > > needs to be reported to the PCE with the Dropping (D) flag set. > > > > > > --> > > > > > > > > > > > > Dropping flag is referring to “D flag (Dropping)”, so proposed text > > > > > > is fine. > > > > > > > > > > > > 9. Information and Data Models > > > > > > > > > > > > <!-- [rfced] Does "described in Section 4" refer to Section 4 of > > > > > > this > > > > > > document or Section 4 of [I-D.ietf-pce-pcep-srv6-yang]? > > > > > > > > > > > > Original: > > > > > > [I-D.ietf-pce-pcep-srv6-yang] defines YANG module with common > > > > > > building blocks for PCEP Extensions described in Section 4. > > > > > > --> > > > > > > > > > > > > This refers to section 4 of this/current document. > > > > > > > > > > > > 10. Global > > > > > > > > > > > > <!-- [rfced] Please review the following questions about > > > > > > terminology. > > > > > > > > > > > > a) We note the following different uses of the term below. Please > > > > > > review and let us know how to update for consistency. > > > > > > > > > > > > EXPLICIT-NULL-LABEL-POLICY (as seen in Table 2) Explicit NULL Label > > > > > > Policy (ENLP) TLV Explicit Null Label Policy (ENLP) TLV Explicit > > > > > > NULL > > > > > > Label Policy (E-Flag) Explicit NULL Label [RFC3032] Explicit Null > > > > > > Label Policy Explicit NULL label/s explicit null label Note that > > > > > > Explicit Null is... > > > > > > > > > > > > b) We note different capitalization for the terms below. Please > > > > > > review > > > > > > and let us know how to update for consistency. > > > > > > > > > > > > Destination vs. destination > > > > > > > > > > > > Preference vs. preference > > > > > > > > > > > > Candidate Path vs. candidate path > > > > > > —> > > > > > > > > > > > > • Term Explicit NULL is used in RFC3032, so please use “Explicit > > > > > > NULL Label Policy (ENLP) TLV” for TLV name and “Explicit NULL Label > > > > > > Policy (E-Flag)” for Flag. > > > > > > • > > > > > > • "Destination vs. destination” - all four occurrences can be used > > > > > > with lowercase > > > > > > • “Preference vs. preference" - that inconsistency seems to be > > > > > > coming from > > > > > > “https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc9256.html*name-preference-of-a-candidate-p__;Iw!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLZ0frfoo$ > > > > > > [rfc-editor[.]org]”. Please use “Preference” in all occurrences > > > > > > except one occurrence in section 5.2.3.1 in this statement, where > > > > > > usage of “Preference” does not make sense: > > > > > > If so, the SR Policy enters the drop > > > > > > state and "activates" the highest preference Candidate Path which > > > > > > has > > > > > > the Drop-upon-invalid enabled. > > > > > > > > > > > > • “Candidate Path vs. candidate path” - please use “Candidate Path" > > > > > > > > > > > > 11. Global > > > > > > > > > > > > <!-- [rfced] FYI - We have already updated the following terms for > > > > > > consistency within the document and to match usage in other RFCs. > > > > > > Please review: > > > > > > > > > > > > a) For the terms below, we have updated the form(s) on the left to > > > > > > the > > > > > > form on the right. > > > > > > > > > > > > association type / Association type -> Association Type (per RFC > > > > > > 8697) > > > > > > > > > > > > Association Parameters -> association parameters (per RFC 8697) > > > > > > > > > > > > ASSOCIATION Object -> ASSOCIATION object (per RFC 8697) > > > > > > > > > > > > Protocol Origin -> Protocol-Origin (per Section 2.3 of RFC 9256) > > > > > > > > > > > > Drop-upon-invalid -> Drop-Upon-Invalid (per Section 8.2 of RFC 9256) > > > > > > > > > > > > b) We note flags are stylized differently throughout (see some > > > > > > examples below). For consistency, we have updated all of these > > > > > > instances to P-flag, E-flag, etc. > > > > > > > > > > > > P-flag > > > > > > P flag > > > > > > E-Flag > > > > > > E flag > > > > > > I-Flag > > > > > > I flag > > > > > > L-Flag > > > > > > L flag > > > > > > "L-Flag" > > > > > > O-flag > > > > > > > > > > > > So, we will ask IANA to update to lowercase 'f' consistently in the > > > > > > description in this registry > > > > > > (https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.iana.org/assignments/pcep/pcep.xhtml*sr-policy-capability__;Iw!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLahEVur-$ > > > > > > [iana[.]org] > > > > > > -tlv-flag-field) unless you let us know otherwise. Specifically, for > > > > > > bits 27, 29, and 30: > > > > > > OLD: L-Flag, I-Flag, E-Flag > > > > > > NEW: L-flag, I-flag, E-flag > > > > > > > > > > > > c) FYI, "<headend, color, endpoint>" has been capitalized for > > > > > > consistency with Section 2.1 of [RFC9256]. > > > > > > > > > > > > Original: > > > > > > Per Section 2.1 of [RFC9256], an SR Policy is identified through the > > > > > > <headend, color, endpoint> tuple. > > > > > > > > > > > > The last hop of a computed SR Policy Candidate Path MAY differ from > > > > > > the Endpoint contained in the <headend, color, endpoint> tuple. > > > > > > > > > > > > Current: > > > > > > Per Section 2.1 of [RFC9256], an SR Policy is identified through the > > > > > > <Headend, Color, Endpoint> tuple. > > > > > > > > > > > > The last hop of a computed SR Policy Candidate Path MAY differ from > > > > > > the > > > > > > Endpoint contained in the <Headend, Color, Endpoint> tuple. > > > > > > —> > > > > > > > > > > > > All of those are find. Thanks a lot for updating all of those. > > > > > > > > > > > > 12. Global > > > > > > > > > > > > <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the > > > > > > online Style Guide > > > > > > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/*inclusive_language__;Iw!!OSsGDw!NlhESSVXrTKw5qvdb1_8kSDDztDW2OQGBvNehPQ-BQiIg069gAuTF_eNSPgoGak-OYgHZC0SLdfYCfBo$ > > > > > > [rfc-editor[.]org] > > > > > > and let us know if any changes are needed. Updates of this nature > > > > > > typically result in more precise language, which is helpful for > > > > > > readers. > > > > > > > > > > > > For example, please consider whether "native" should be updated in > > > > > > the text below: > > > > > > > > > > > > An example use case is to terminate the SR Policy before reaching > > > > > > the > > > > > > Endpoint and have decapsulated traffic be forwarded the rest of the > > > > > > path to the Endpoint node using the native Interior Gateway Protocol > > > > > > (IGP) path(s). > > > > > > —> > > > > > > > > > > > > OLD: > > > > > > An example use case is to terminate the SR Policy before reaching > > > > > > the > > > > > > Endpoint and have decapsulated traffic be forwarded the rest of the > > > > > > path to the Endpoint node using the native Interior Gateway Protocol > > > > > > (IGP) path(s). > > > > > > > > > > > > NEW: > > > > > > An example use case is to terminate the SR Policy before reaching > > > > > > the > > > > > > Endpoint and have decapsulated traffic be forwarded the rest of the > > > > > > path to the Endpoint node using the Interior Gateway Protocol > > > > > > (IGP) shortest path(s). > > > > > > > > > > > > Thanks a lot, > > > > > > Samuel > > > > > > > > > > > > From: [email protected] [email protected] > > > > > > Date: Friday, 19 September 2025 at 07:49 > > > > > > To: [email protected] [email protected], [email protected] > > > > > > [email protected], Samuel Sidor (ssidor) [email protected], > > > > > > [email protected] [email protected], [email protected] > > > > > > [email protected], [email protected] > > > > > > [email protected] > > > > > > Cc: [email protected] [email protected], > > > > > > [email protected] [email protected], [email protected] > > > > > > [email protected], [email protected] [email protected], > > > > > > [email protected] [email protected], [email protected] > > > > > > [email protected] > > > > > > Subject: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9862 > > > > > > <draft-ietf-pce-segment-routing-policy-cp-27> for your review > > > > > > > > > > > > IMPORTANT > > > > > > > > > > > > Updated 2025/09/18 > > > > > > > > > > > > RFC Author(s): > > > > > > -------------- > > > > > > > > > > > > Instructions for Completing AUTH48 > > > > > > > > > > > > Your document has now entered AUTH48. 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