Hi Sarah I have reviewed the draft and no further comments as the draft is ready for publication.
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Be cautious of content] > >> > >> > >> Authors, > >> > >> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as > necessary) > >> the following questions, which are also in the source file. > >> > >> 1) <!--[rfced] We note that this document uses terms such as "PCEP > Peer", > >> "TE Tunnel", and "SR Policy" with the second word capitalized. If > >> the intention is to use these terms with a specific meaning, would > >> you like to add a sentence stating where to find that definition? > >> For example: > >> > >> Perhaps: > >> This document uses the following terms: > >> > >> PCEP Peer as defined in [RFC5440] > >> SR Policy as defined in [RFC8402] > >> --> > >> > >> [VPB] Yes, these terms have a specific meaning. It should be sufficient > to add a reference at initial use. > >> • "PCEP Peer" appears only once — please add RFC 5440 immediately > after it. > >> • "TE Tunnel" appears three times, while “TE tunnel” appears four > times — RFC3209 uses both interchangeably. I would pick “TE Tunnel” and use > it everywhere. > >> • “SR Policy” and “SR policy” appear four times each; RFC9256 uses > “SR Policy”. So, I would recommend using “SR Policy” everywhere. > >> > >> 2) <!-- [rfced] In many RFCs, the text following a TLV diagram is a > definition > >> list rather than a paragraph. Would you like to update this as follows? > >> Current: > >> Type has the value 67. Length carries a value of 4. The "color" > >> field is 4 bytes long and carries the actual color value (specified > >> as an unsigned integer). A color value of zero is allowed. > >> Perhaps: > >> Type: 67 > >> Length: 4 > >> Color: 4-byte field that carries the actual color value (specified > >> as an unsigned integer). A value of zero is allowed. > >> --> > >> > >> [VPB] No objection. > >> > >> 3) <!-- [rfced] Throughout the text, the following terminology appears > to be used > >> inconsistently. 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