Sarah,
Please find replies inline @ [RP] below.

Thanks,
Rishabh

From: Sarah Tarrant <[email protected]>
Date: Tuesday, October 7, 2025 at 8:35 AM
To: Rishabh Parekh <[email protected]>, [email protected] <[email protected]>, 
[email protected] <[email protected]>, [email protected] 
<[email protected]>, [email protected] <[email protected]>
Cc: [email protected] <[email protected]>, [email protected] 
<[email protected]>, [email protected] 
<[email protected]>, [email protected] 
<[email protected]>
Subject: Re: Document intake questions about <draft-ietf-pim-sr-p2mp-policy-22>

Hi Authors,

This is a friendly reminder that we await answers to the questions below.

Thank you,
Sarah Tarrant
RFC Production Center

> On Sep 25, 2025, at 4:48 PM, Sarah Tarrant <[email protected]> 
> wrote:
>
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> 1) As there may have been multiple updates made to the document during Last 
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> * Is the text in the Abstract still accurate?
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> sections current?
>
[RP] Yes, they are.
>
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[RP] Some terminology refers to RFC 9524 and RFC 9256

> * Is there a pattern of capitalization or formatting of terms? (e.g., field 
> names
> should have initial capitalization; parameter names should be in double 
> quotes;
> <tt/> should be used for token names; etc.)
>

[RP] No. But we have tried to make some terms consistent with how they are 
spelled in  RFC 9524 and RFC 9256.

>
> 3) Is there any text that should be handled extra cautiously? For example, are
> there any sections that were contentious when the document was drafted?
>

[RP] No.

>
> 4) Is there anything else that the RPC should be aware of while editing this
> document?
>

[RP] No.

>
> 5) This document is part of Cluster 556.
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> * To help the reader understand the content of the cluster, is there a
> document in the cluster that should be read first? Next? If so, please provide
> the order and we will provide RFC numbers for the documents accordingly.
> If order is not important, please let us know.

[RP] Yes. draft-ietf-pim-sr-p2mp-policy-22 is the basis of 
draft-ietf-pim-p2mp-policy-ping-24 and should be read first and assigned an RFC 
number first.

> * Is there any text that has been repeated within the cluster document that
> should be edited in the same way (for instance, parallel introductory text or
> Security Considerations)?

[RP] No.

>
>
>> On Sep 25, 2025, at 4:34 PM, [email protected] wrote:
>>
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