Hi Karen, 

I approve the publication of this document once the discussion about the 
segment types description is resolved. 

Best regards,
Jie

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Karen Moore <[email protected]>
> Sent: Friday, September 19, 2025 2:18 AM
> To: Hannes Gredler <[email protected]>; [email protected]; John
> Scudder <[email protected]>; Jeff Tantsura <[email protected]>; Dongjie
> (Jimmy) <[email protected]>; Ketan Talaulikar <[email protected]>
> Cc: Editor RFC <[email protected]>; [email protected]; idr-chairs
> <[email protected]>; Sue Hares <[email protected]>; Shawn Zandi via
> auth48archive <[email protected]>
> Subject: Re: [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9857 <draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-sr-policy-17>
> for your review
> 
> Hi Hannes, Jeff, Ketan, and John,
> 
> Thank you for your replies. We have noted approval of the document for
> Hannes and Jeff on the AUTH48 status page. Hannes and Jeff, we will assume
> your assent to any further changes proposed by your coauthors unless we
> hear otherwise.
> 
> We will stand by as Ketan consults with the WG per the discussion with John.
> 
> Best regards,
> 
> Karen Moore
> RPC Production Center
> 
> 
> > On Sep 16, 2025, at 12:07 PM, Hannes Gredler <[email protected]>
> wrote:
> >
> > Hi Karen,
> >
> > approved.
> >
> > thanks.
> >
> > /hannes
> >
> > On Tue, Sep 16, 2025 at 8:21 PM Karen Moore <[email protected]>
> wrote:
> > Hi Jeff and *John (AD),
> >
> > Thank you for providing your approval of the document; we have noted it
> here <https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9857>. We now await approvals
> from Hannes, Jie, and Stefano.
> >
> > *John, please review the following updates and let us know if you approve.
> The changes can be reviewed here:
> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9857-auth48diff.html>.
> >
> > 1) Update to the description of “V-Flag” in Section 5.3 (added “MUST”)
> > 2) Updates to Table 1 in Section 5.7.1.1 to match the descriptions in
> > RFCs 9256, 9830, and 9831
> > 3) Updates to Table 6 in Section 8.5 (FYI: updates will be needed to
> > the "BGP-LS SR Segment Descriptor Types” IANA registry at
> > <https://www.iana.org/assignments/bgp-ls-parameters/>)
> > 4) Updates to the titles of Sections 5.7.1.1.1 - 5.7.1.1.11 to more
> > closely match Table 6
> >
> 
> >
> > On Sep 16, 2025, at 7:56 AM, Jeff Tantsura <[email protected]>
> wrote:
> >
> > Hi Karen,
> >
> > Approved.
> > Thanks!
> >
> > Cheers,
> > Jeff
> 
> 
> >
> > —Files (please refresh)—
> >
> > Updated XML file:
> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9857.xml
> >
> > Updated output files:
> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9857.txt
> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9857.pdf
> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9857.html
> >
> > Diff files showing all changes made during AUTH48:
> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9857-auth48diff.html
> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9857-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by
> > side)
> >
> > Diff files showing only changes made during the last editing round:
> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9857-lastdiff.html
> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9857-lastrfcdiff.html
> >
> > Diff files showing all changes:
> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9857-diff.html
> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9857-rfcdiff.html (side by side)
> >
> > For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9857
> >
> > Best regards,
> >
> > Karen Moore
> > RFC Production Center
> >
> >
> > > On Sep 16, 2025, at 7:56 AM, Jeff Tantsura <[email protected]>
> wrote:
> > >
> > > Hi Karen,
> > >
> > > Approved.
> > > Thanks!
> > >
> > > Cheers,
> > > Jeff
> > >
> > >> On Sep 15, 2025, at 13:00, Karen Moore <[email protected]>
> wrote:
> > >>
> > >> Hi Ketan,
> > >>
> > >> Thank you for the clarifications. We have updated 2 instances of
> “RESERVED” as advised in Section 5.7 and have updated Table 1 to match
> the descriptions in RFCs 9256, 9830, and 9831. Please review. We have also
> noted your approval of the document.
> > >>
> > >> If any further updates are needed in Sections 5.7.1.1.1 - 5.7.1.1.11 to
> more closely match the wording/changes in Table 1, please let us know.
> > >>
> > >> Note that we await approvals of the document from all coauthors listed
> at https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9857 prior to moving forward with
> publicaiton.
> > >>
> > >> —Files (please refresh)—
> > >>
> > >> Updated XML file:
> > >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9857.xml
> > >>
> > >> Updated output files:
> > >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9857.txt
> > >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9857.pdf
> > >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9857.html
> > >>
> > >> Diff files showing all changes made during AUTH48:
> > >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9857-auth48diff.html
> > >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9857-auth48rfcdiff.html (side
> > >> by side)
> > >>
> > >> Diff files showing only changes made during the last editing round:
> > >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9857-lastdiff.html
> > >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9857-lastrfcdiff.html
> > >>
> > >> Diff files showing all changes:
> > >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9857-diff.html
> > >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9857-rfcdiff.html (side by
> > >> side)
> > >>
> > >> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
> > >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9857
> > >>
> > >> Best regards,
> > >>
> > >> Karen Moore
> > >> RFC Production Center
> > >>
> > >>
> > >>
> > >> On Sep 14, 2025, at 8:18 PM, Ketan Talaulikar <[email protected]>
> wrote:
> > >>
> > >> Hi Karen,
> > >>
> > >> Please check inline below for responses.
> > >>
> > >> Besides the comment below about Table 1, there is only one minor
> update needed: For the fields that were marked as RESERVED1 and 2 in the
> figures, please make the same change in the individual field descriptions
> below those figures as well.
> > >>
> > >> Once these are taken care of, please consider this email as my approval
> for publication.
> > >>
> > >>
> > >> On Sat, Sep 13, 2025 at 5:35 AM Karen Moore
> <[email protected]> wrote:
> > >> Hi Ketan,
> > >>
> > >> Thank you for your comment and close review of the
> questions/document. We have updated our files per your suggestions. Please
> note that we have a few additional questions.
> > >>
> > >> 1) Regarding the comments below, we updated the titles of Sections
> 5.7.1.1.1 - 5.7.1.1.11 accordingly. We also updated the descriptions in Table 
> 6,
> which we agree will align better with RFCs-to-be 9830 and 9831. Please
> review to ensure the changes are correct.
> > >>
> > >> KT> Ack
> > >>
> > >>> Comparing this to RFC9830/1, the Table 1 is what is listed in
> > >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9830.html#section-2.4.4.2
> > >>> and Table 6 is what is listed in
> > >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9831.html#section-3.1 - more
> > >>> specifically, I would prefer that we have alignment for the Table
> > >>> 1 column Segment Description with the other two RFCs with one
> change that we want to keep the (Type X) as a prefix in this document.
> > >>>
> > >>> KT> There is no change required for Table 1, however, we can and
> > >>> KT> perhaps should
> > >>
> > >>> change the section titles 5.7.1.1.1 through 5.7.1.1.11 to reflect
> > >>> RFC9830 sections
> > >>> 2.4.4.2.1 - 2.4.4.22 and RFC9831 sections 2.1 through 2.10.
> > >>>
> > >>> As an example: Type 1: SR-MPLS Label (Type A) -> Type 1: Segment
> > >>> Type A
> > >>>
> > >>> This will make the section headings short and align with the other
> > >>> two RFCs that specify the southbound BGP signaling while this
> document specifies its northbound reporting.
> > >>>
> > >>> The titles for figures are ok.
> > >>>
> > >>> The descriptions can then be changed along the lines of
> > >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9831.html#section-3.1
> > >>>
> > >>> As an example: (Type A) SR-MPLS Label -> Type A Segment
> > >>>
> > >>> Please let me know your views from the perspective of readability
> > >>> and alignment across RFC9256 and the 3 BGP RFCs under RFC Editor
> currently including this document.
> > >>
> > >> 2) It was mentioned that no changes were required for Table 1 - want to
> clarify if that is still the case or if any further updates are needed for
> consistency with the wording/style in Table 2 of RFC 9256.
> > >>
> > >> KT> The descriptions originate from
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc9256.html#table-2 and so, we should try to
> make things consistent with that. The same is there in
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc9830#section-2.4.4.2 and
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc9831#section-2 - therefore, the Table 1
> descriptions should be the same. The only exception is that the alphabetical
> Type is indicated in brackets to provide the necessary correlation between
> the two separate code point spaces. I hope this also covers the queries
> below.
> > >>
> > >> Thanks,
> > >> Ketan
> > >>
> > >>
> > >>
> > >> Please also consider the following.
> > >>
> > >> a) Section 5.7.1.1.6 describes the IPv4 Local & Remote Interface
> Addresses as a “pair”; is “pair" correct to add to the description of Type F 
> in
> Table 1?
> > >>
> > >> Current:
> > >>    (Type F) SR-MPLS Adjacency SID as IPv4 Local & Remote Interface
> > >> Addresses
> > >>
> > >> Perhaps A:
> > >>    (Type F) SR-MPLS Adjacency SID as pair of IPv4 Local & Remote
> > >> Interface Addresses
> > >>
> > >> Perhaps B (in attempt to follow the style of RFC 9256):
> > >>    (Type F) IPv4 Interface Addresses for SR-MPLS Adjacency SID as
> > >> Local, Remote pair
> > >>
> > >> b) Does the pair consist of one IPv6 global address and one interface ID?
> Please let us know if any clarifcation is needed. This applies to Types G
> (Section 5.7.1.1.7) and J (Section 5.7.1.1.10).
> > >>
> > >> Table 1:
> > >> Current:
> > >>    (Type G) SR-MPLS Adjacency SID as pair of IPv6 Global Address &
> Interface ID for
> > >>    Local & Remote nodes
> > >>
> > >> Perhaps A:
> > >>    (Type G) SR-MPLS Adjacency SID as pair of an IPv6 Global Address &
> > >>    Interface ID for Local & Remote Nodes
> > >>
> > >> Perhaps B (in attempt to follow the style of RFC 9256):
> > >>    (Type G) IPv6 Global Address & Interface ID for SR-MPLS Adjacency
> SID as
> > >>    Local, Remote Node pair
> > >>
> > >> Section 5.7.1.1.7
> > >> Current:
> > >>   The Segment is an SR-MPLS Adjacency SID type and is specified as a
> > >>   pair of IPv6 global address and interface ID for local and remote
> > >>   nodes.
> > >>
> > >> Perhaps:
> > >>   The Segment is an SR-MPLS Adjacency SID type and is specified as a
> > >>   pair of one IPv6 global address and one interface ID for local and
> remote
> > >>   nodes.
> > >>
> > >> --Files--
> > >> Note that it may be necessary for you to refresh your browser to view
> the most recent version. Please review the document carefully to ensure
> satisfaction as we do not make changes once it has been published as an RFC.
> > >>
> > >> We will await approvals from each author prior to moving forward in the
> publication process.
> > >>
> > >> Updated XML file:
> > >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9857.xml
> > >>
> > >> Updated output files:
> > >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9857.txt
> > >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9857.pdf
> > >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9857.html
> > >>
> > >> Diff files showing all changes made during AUTH48:
> > >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9857-auth48diff.html
> > >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9857-auth48rfcdiff.html (side
> > >> by side)
> > >>
> > >> Diff files showing all changes:
> > >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9857-diff.html
> > >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9857-rfcdiff.html (side by
> > >> side)
> > >>
> > >> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
> > >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9857
> > >>
> > >> Best regards,
> > >>
> > >> Karen Moore
> > >> RFC Production Center
> > >>
> > >>
> > >>> On Sep 11, 2025, at 5:14 AM, Ketan Talaulikar <[email protected]>
> wrote:
> > >>>
> > >>> Hi Karen & Allana,
> > >>>
> > >>> Thanks for your help with this document. I realize it was challenging
> given the inconsistent use of terms within the document and across its
> related documents. Appreciate your tidying it up for publication.
> > >>>
> > >>> Please check inline below for responses.
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>> On Thu, Sep 11, 2025 at 3:39 AM <[email protected]> wrote:
> > >>> Authors,
> > >>>
> > >>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as
> necessary) the following questions, which are also in the source file.
> > >>>
> > >>> 1) <!--[rfced] May we update "PCEP protocol" to simply read "PCEP"
> > >>> to avoid redundancy? If expanded, "PCEP protocol" would read as
> > >>> "Path Computation Element Communication Protocol protocol".
> > >>>
> > >>> Original:
> > >>>  As illustrated in the figure below, the  PCC is not an LSR in the
> > >>> routing domain, thus the head-end nodes of  the SR Policies may
> > >>> not implement the PCEP protocol.
> > >>>
> > >>> Perhaps:
> > >>>  As illustrated in the figure below, the  PCC is not an LSR in the
> > >>> routing domain, thus the head-end nodes of  the SR Policies may
> > >>> not implement the PCEP.
> > >>> -->
> > >>>
> > >>> KT> Ack
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>> 2) <!--[rfced] In Section 3, should the list be formatted as a
> > >>> definition list for ease of reading and consistency with other sections?
> > >>>
> > >>> Original:
> > >>> Where:
> > >>>
> > >>>  *  Protocol-ID field specifies the component that owns the SR Policy
> > >>>     state in the advertising node.  An additional Protocol-ID
> "Segment
> > >>>     Routing" (value 9) is introduced by this document that MUST be
> > >>>     used for advertisement of SR Policies.
> > >>>
> > >>>  *  "Identifier" is an 8 octet value as defined in section 5.2 of
> > >>>     [RFC9552].
> > >>>
> > >>>  *  "Local Node Descriptor" (TLV 256) [RFC9552] is used as specified
> > >>>     further in this section.
> > >>>
> > >>>  *  The SR Policy Candidate Path Descriptor TLV is specified in
> > >>>     Section 4.
> > >>>
> > >>> Perhaps:
> > >>> Where:
> > >>>
> > >>>  *  Protocol-ID field: Specifies the component that owns the SR Policy
> > >>>     state in the advertising node. An additional Protocol-ID "Segment
> > >>>     Routing" (value 9) is introduced by this document that MUST be
> > >>>     used for the advertisement of SR Policies.
> > >>>
> > >>>  *  Identifier: 8-octet value as defined in Section 5.2 of [RFC9552].
> > >>>
> > >>>  *  Local Node Descriptors (TLV 256): Defined in [RFC9552] and used
> as
> > >>>     specified further in this section.
> > >>>
> > >>>  *  SR Policy Candidate Path Descriptor TLV: Specified in Section 4.
> > >>> -->
> > >>>
> > >>> KT> Ack
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>> 3) <!--[rfced] As shown below, we removed "Number" from
> > >>> "Autonomous System Number (TLV 512)" per RFC 9552, and we
> removed "ASN"
> > >>> following "AS Confederation Identifier" as it is not present in
> > >>> RFC 5065. Note that this change was also applied to similar text
> > >>> in Section 3.2. Please let us know of any objections.
> > >>>
> > >>> Note that "ASN" was expanded only on the first mention.
> > >>>
> > >>> Original:
> > >>>  *  Autonomous System Number (TLV 512) [RFC9552], which contains
> the
> > >>>     ASN (or AS Confederation Identifier (ASN) [RFC5065], if
> > >>>     confederations are used) of the headend node of the SR Policy.
> > >>>
> > >>> Current:
> > >>>  *  Autonomous System (TLV 512) [RFC9552], which contains the
> > >>>     Autonomous System Number (ASN) (or AS Confederation
> Identifier
> > >>>     [RFC5065], if confederations are used) of the headend node of
> > >>>     the SR Policy.
> > >>> -->
> > >>>
> > >>> KT> Ack
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>> 4) <!--[rfced] In RFC 9552, we note that "IGP Router-ID" is listed
> > >>> as both a sub-TLV and a TLV code point. As "sub-TLV" and "TLV" are
> > >>> not included in the description, how may we update "IGP Router-ID
> > >>> sub-TLV (TLV 515)" for conciseness? Would "IGP Router-ID
> > >>> (sub-TLV/TLV 515)" be correct? Note that there are two instances
> > >>> in the document.
> > >>>
> > >>> Original:
> > >>>  The determination of whether the
> > >>>  IGP Router-ID sub-TLV (TLV 515) contains a 4-octet OSPF Router-ID
> > >>> or a 6-octet ISO System-ID is to be done based on the length of
> > >>> that sub-TLV since the Protocol-ID in the NLRI is always going to
> > >>> be "Segment Routing".
> > >>>
> > >>> Perhaps:
> > >>>  The determination of whether the
> > >>>  IGP Router-ID (sub-TLV/TLV 515) contains a 4-octet OSPF Router-ID
> > >>> or a 6-octet ISO System-ID is to be done based on the length of
> > >>> that sub-TLV because the Protocol-ID in the NLRI is always going
> > >>> to be "Segment Routing".
> > >>> -->
> > >>>
> > >>> KT> The reference here is to the TLV and the IANA registry is for TLV
> codepoints but they can also be used as sub-TLVs. So, I agree that your
> suggestion is better, but how about "IGP Router-ID (TLV 515)" ?
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>> 5) <!-- [rfced] We note that Section 6.2.3 of RFC 9256 uses
> > >>> "Specified-BSID-only". Given this, should "Specified BSID" be
> > >>> updated for consistency?
> > >>>
> > >>> Original:
> > >>>  The TLV MAY also optionally contain the Specified BSID value for
> > >>> reporting as described in section 6.2.3 of [RFC9256].
> > >>>
> > >>> Perhaps:
> > >>>  The TLV MAY also optionally contain the Specified-BSID-only value
> > >>> for reporting as described in Section 6.2.3 of [RFC9256].
> > >>> -->
> > >>>
> > >>> KT> This change is not appropriate. Here, the idea is to signal the
> Specified-BSID value. Whether or not the Specified-BSID-only is to be used is
> indicated by a different flag.
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>> 6) <!--[rfced] Please clarify if "BSID" should be singular (option
> > >>> A) or plural (option B) in the following:
> > >>>
> > >>> Original:
> > >>> D-Flag:  Indicates the dataplane for the BSIDs and if they are
> > >>>         16 octet SRv6 SID (when set) or are 4 octet SR/MPLS
> > >>>         label value (when clear).
> > >>>
> > >>> Perhaps A:
> > >>> D-Flag:  Indicates the data plane for the BSIDs and if a BSID is
> > >>>         a 16-octet SRv6 SID (when set) or a 4-octet SR/MPLS
> > >>>         label value (when clear).
> > >>>
> > >>> Perhaps B:
> > >>> D-Flag:  Indicates the data plane for the BSIDs and if the BSIDs
> > >>>         are 16-octet SRv6 SIDs (when set) or 4-octet SR/MPLS
> > >>>         label values (when clear).
> > >>> -->
> > >>>
> > >>> KT> A is better.
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>> 7) <!--[rfced] We note that Figures 7 and 19 use "Sub-TLVs"
> > >>> (capitalized), while Figures 11 and 18 use "sub-TLVs"
> > >>> (lowercased). Should these be consistent? If yes, which form is
> preferred?
> > >>> -->
> > >>>
> > >>> KT> Here "sub-TLVs" is appropriate as it is not referring to a specific
> sub-TLV name.
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>> 8) <!--[rfced] We note multiple instances of "MUST be set to 0 by
> > >>> the originator and MUST be ignored by a receiver". Should the one
> > >>> instance below that contains only one "MUST" be updated
> > >>> accordingly (see Section 5.3)?
> > >>>
> > >>> Original:
> > >>>  V-Flag: Indicates the candidate path has at least one valid
> > >>> SID-List  when set and indicates no valid SID-List is available or
> > >>> evaluated  when clear. When the E-Flag is clear (i.e. the
> > >>> candidate path has not  been evaluated), then this flag MUST be
> > >>> set to 0 by the originator and  ignored by the receiver.
> > >>>
> > >>> Perhaps:
> > >>>  V-Flag: Indicates that the candidate path has at least one valid
> > >>> SID-List  when set and that no valid SID-List is available or evaluated
> when clear.
> > >>>  When the E-Flag is clear (i.e., the candidate path has not been
> > >>> evaluated),  then this flag MUST be set to 0 by the originator and
> > >>> MUST be ignored by a  receiver.
> > >>> -->
> > >>>
> > >>> KT> Ack
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>> 9) <!--[rfced] Please review 2 instances of the term "NULL" in
> > >>> this document. Should "NULL terminator" be "NUL terminator" or
> > >>> "null terminator" for correctness? We ask per guidance received
> > >>> from a Gen Art reviewer. Note that RFC 9256 uses "null endpoint",
> > >>> "Explicit Null Label Policy", and "IPv6 Explicit NULL Label".
> > >>>
> > >>> Current:
> > >>> SR Policy Name:  Symbolic name for the SR Policy without a NULL
> > >>>     terminator as specified in Section 2.1 of [RFC9256].
> > >>>
> > >>> Candidate Path Name:  Symbolic name for the SR Policy candidate
> path
> > >>>     without a NULL terminator as specified in Section 2.6 of
> > >>>     [RFC9256].
> > >>> -->
> > >>>
> > >>> KT> It should be the NUL - which is what I believe it is called in 
> > >>> ASCII.
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>> 10) <!--[rfced] How may we clarify this "either" sentence. Is the
> > >>> intended meaning that the dynamic path is computed by the headend
> > >>> or delegated to a controller (option A)? Or that the dynamic path
> > >>> is computed by the headend or by delegation to a controller (option
> B)?
> > >>>
> > >>> Original:
> > >>>  The constraints are generally applied to a dynamic candidate path
> > >>> which is  computed either by the headend or may be delegated to a
> controller.
> > >>>
> > >>> Perhaps A:
> > >>>  The constraints are generally applied to a dynamic candidate path
> > >>> that is  either computed by the headend or delegated to a controller.
> > >>>
> > >>> Perhaps B:
> > >>>  The constraints are generally applied to a dynamic candidate path
> > >>> that is  computed by either the headend or delegation to a controller.
> > >>> -->
> > >>>
> > >>> KT> A is correct.
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>> 11) <!--[rfced] We note that Figure 15 uses "Request-Flags" and
> "Status-Flags"
> > >>> (hyphenated), while the definitions of these fields use "Request Flags"
> > >>> and "Status Flags" (unhyphenated). To make these consistent, which
> > >>> form is preferred?
> > >>> -->
> > >>>
> > >>> KT> the unhyphenated please
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>> 12) <!-- [rfced] For consistency, should "Association Object" be
> > >>> updated to "ASSOCIATION object" per use in Section 6.1 of
> > >>> [RFC8697]? Note that there are four instances.
> > >>> -->
> > >>>
> > >>> KT> Ack
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>> 13) <!--[rfced] How may we rephrase the text in Section 5.6.6 for
> clarity?
> > >>>
> > >>> KT> I think a copy/paste error from my side in section 5.6.6 with
> referencine Table 1 has caused a confusion between metric types and
> segment types.
> > >>>
> > >>> In the first sentence, we note that Table 1 (Section 5.7.1.1) does
> > >>> not list references for the types. Should the term "reference" be
> > >>> replaced with "Segment Descriptor" or other for conciseness? And
> > >>> may we rephrase the second sentence as shown below for clarity and
> > >>> to make it parallel?
> > >>>
> > >>> We also note that Tables 1 and 6 contain the same information.
> > >>> Should Table 1 be removed and references to Table 1 (in Sections
> > >>> 5.6.6 and
> > >>> 5.7.1.1) be updated to point to Table 6?
> > >>>
> > >>> KT> The two tables have different purposes. The Table 1 provides
> > >>> KT> the mapping between the
> > >>> segment types (A to K) defined in RFC 9256 with the code points of
> > >>> the types defined in this document. While table 6 represents the
> > >>> initial allocations for the codepoints for the segment types for
> > >>> IANA. Comparing this to RFC9830/1, the Table 1 is what is listed
> > >>> in https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9830.html#section-2.4.4.2
> > >>> and Table 6 is what is listed in
> > >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9831.html#section-3.1 - more
> > >>> specifically, I would prefer that we have alignment for the Table
> > >>> 1 column Segment Description with the other two RFCs with one
> change that we want to keep the (Type X) as a prefix in this document.
> > >>>
> > >>> KT> There is no change required for Table 1, however, we can and
> > >>> KT> perhaps should
> > >>> change the section titles 5.7.1.1.1 through 5.7.1.1.11 to reflect
> > >>> RFC9830 sections
> > >>> 2.4.4.2.1 - 2.4.4.22 and RFC9831 sections 2.1 through 2.10.
> > >>>
> > >>> As an example: Type 1: SR-MPLS Label (Type A) -> Type 1: Segment
> > >>> Type A
> > >>>
> > >>> This will make the section headings short and align with the other
> > >>> two RFCs that specify the southbound BGP signaling while this
> document specifies its northbound reporting.
> > >>>
> > >>> The titles for figures are ok.
> > >>>
> > >>> The descriptions can then be changed along the lines of
> > >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9831.html#section-3.1
> > >>>
> > >>> As an example: (Type A) SR-MPLS Label -> Type A Segment
> > >>>
> > >>> Please let me know your views from the perspective of readability
> > >>> and alignment across RFC9256 and the 3 BGP RFCs under RFC Editor
> currently including this document.
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>> Original (Section 5.6.6):
> > >>>  The Table 1 below lists the metric types introduced by this
> > >>> document  along with reference for each. Where the references are
> > >>> for IS-IS  and OSPF specifications, those metric types are defined
> > >>> for a link  while in the SR Policy context those relate to the
> > >>> candidate path  or the segment list.
> > >>>
> > >>> Perhaps:
> > >>>  Table 6 lists the metric types introduced by this document along
> > >>> with a Segment Descriptor for each. Where the Segment Descriptors
> > >>> relate to IS-IS and OSPF specifications, the metric types are
> > >>> defined  for a link. Where the Segment Descriptors relate to the
> > >>> SR Policy,  the metric types are defined for a candidate path or a
> segment list.
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>> KT> Can you please fix/update this blob as below?
> > >>>
> > >>>     Below is a list of metric types introduced by this document
> > >>>     along with references for each.  Where the references are for IS-IS
> > >>>     and OSPF specifications, those metric types are defined for a link
> > >>>     while in the SR Policy context those relate to the candidate path
> > >>>     or the segment list.
> > >>>
> > >>> The "list" is actually right after the paragraph with this text
> > >>> and the reference to Table 1 was an error. I hope this clarifies.
> > >>>
> > >>> ...
> > >>> Original (Section 5.7.1.1)
> > >>>  The following types are currently defined and their mapping to
> > >>> the  respective segment types defined in [RFC9256]:
> > >>>
> > >>> Perhaps:
> > >>>  See Table 6 for the type definitions and their mappings to the
> > >>> respective segment types defined in [RFC9256].
> > >>> -->
> > >>>
> > >>> KT> The above change is now not necessary.
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>> 14) <!--[rfced] For clarity, should the registry that the metric
> > >>> types are taken from be listed here instead of only the registry
> > >>> that they are not listed in?
> > >>>
> > >>> Original:
> > >>>  Note that the metric type in this field is not taken from the
> > >>> "IGP  Metric Type" registry from IANA "IGP Parameters" and is a
> > >>> separate  registry that includes IGP Metric Types as well as
> > >>> metric types  specific to SR Policy path computation.
> > >>>
> > >>> Perhaps:
> > >>>  Note that the metric types in this field are taken from the
> > >>> "BGP-LS SR Policy Metric Types" IANA registry, which includes  IGP
> > >>> Metric Types as well as metric types specific to SR Policy  path
> > >>> computation (i.e., the metric types are not from the  "IGP
> > >>> Metric-Type" registry).
> > >>> -->
> > >>>
> > >>> KT> Ack
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>> 15) <!--[rfced] In Section 5.6.6, we updated "Average" to "Avg" to
> > >>> match use in Table 7 and the "BGP-LS SR Policy Metric Types"
> > >>> registry. If you prefer to update the registry to reflect
> > >>> "Average" instead of "Avg", please let us know.
> > >>>
> > >>> Link to registry:
> > >>> https://www.iana.org/assignments/bgp-ls-parameters/
> > >>> bgp-ls-parameters.xhtml#bgp-ls-sr-segment-descriptor-types>.
> > >>>
> > >>> Original:
> > >>>  Type 6: Average Unidirectional Delay:
> > >>>
> > >>> Current:
> > >>>  Type 6: Avg Unidirectional Delay:
> > >>> -->
> > >>>
> > >>> KT> Ack
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>> 16) <!--[rfced] We note that Figure 18 contains two "RESERVED" fields.
> > >>> As these are two distinctly different fields, should they be
> > >>> updated as "RESERVED1" and "RESERVED2", which would reflect Figure
> 11?
> > >>> -->
> > >>>
> > >>> KT> Yes, please do the same for Figure 11
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>> 17) <!--[rfced] Table 6 (Section 8.5) specifies the SRv6 SID as an
> > >>> "IPv6 address", but Section 5.7.1.1.2 specifies it as an "SRv6 SID
> address".
> > >>> Is an update needed in Section 5.7.1.1.2 for consistency with Table 6?
> > >>>
> > >>> Original:
> > >>>  The Segment is SRv6 type and is specified simply as the SRv6 SID
> address.
> > >>>
> > >>> Perhaps:
> > >>>  The Segment is an SRv6 type and is specified simply as the IPv6
> address.
> > >>> -->
> > >>>
> > >>> KT> It should just say "SRv6 SID" in 7.7.1.1.2 and in Table 6. But 
> > >>> please
> refer to the previous suggestion on Table 6.
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>> 18) <!--[rfced] In Section 5.7.1.1.6, should "interface" be added
> > >>> to more closely match Table 6 (the "BGP-LS SR Segment Descriptor
> Types"
> > >>> registry)?
> > >>>
> > >>> Link to registry:
> > >>> https://www.iana.org/assignments/bgp-ls-parameters/
> > >>> bgp-ls-parameters.xhtml#bgp-ls-sr-segment-descriptor-types
> > >>>
> > >>> Original:
> > >>> IPv4 Local Address:
> > >>> IPv4 Remote Address:
> > >>>
> > >>> Perhaps:
> > >>> IPv4 Local Interface Address:
> > >>> IPv4 Remote Interface Address:
> > >>>
> > >>> ...
> > >>> Original (Figure 25):
> > >>> IPv4 Local Address (4 octets)
> > >>> IPv4 Remote Address (4 octets)
> > >>>
> > >>> Perhaps:
> > >>> IPv4 Local Interface Address (4 octets)
> > >>> IPv4 Remote Interface Address (4 octets)
> > >>> -->
> > >>>
> > >>> KT> Ack for both
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>> 19) <!--[rfced] In Sections 5.7.1.1.8 and 5.7.1.1.11, should the
> > >>> following be updated for consistency with the descriptions in
> > >>> Table 6 (the "BGP-LS SR Segment Descriptor Types" registry)?
> > >>>
> > >>> Link to registry:
> > >>> https://www.iana.org/assignments/bgp-ls-parameters/
> > >>> bgp-ls-parameters.xhtml#bgp-ls-sr-segment-descriptor-types?
> > >>>
> > >>> Original:
> > >>> IPv6 Local Address:
> > >>> IPv6 Remote Address:
> > >>>
> > >>> Perhaps:
> > >>> IPv6 Local Global Address:
> > >>> IPv6 Remote Global Address:
> > >>>
> > >>> ...
> > >>> Original (Figures 27 and 30):
> > >>>  Global IPv6 Local Interface Address (16 octets)  Global IPv6
> > >>> Remote Interface Address (16 octets)
> > >>>
> > >>> Perhaps:
> > >>>  IPv6 Local Interface Global Address (16 octets)
> > >>>  IPv6 Remote Interface Global Address (16 octets)
> > >>> -->
> > >>>
> > >>> KT> Ack for both.
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>> 20) <!-- [rfced] Section 4 of this document as well as RFC 9256
> > >>> uses "Protocol-Origin" rather than "Protocol Origin". Are any
> > >>> updates needed to the "SR Policy Protocol Origin" registry name,
> > >>> two instances of "SR Protocol Origin", or "Protocol Origin field"?
> > >>>
> > >>> Original:
> > >>>  Per this document, IANA has created and maintains a new registry
> > >>> called "SR Policy Protocol Origin" under the "Segment Routing"
> > >>>  registry group with the allocation policy of Expert Review
> > >>> [RFC8126]  using the guidelines for designated experts as
> > >>> specified in  [RFC9256]. This registry contains the code points
> > >>> allocated to the  "Protocol Origin" field defined in Section 4.
> > >>> -->
> > >>>
> > >>> KT> Lets use "Protocol-Origin" to be consistent with RFC9256
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>> 21) <!--[rfced] Under the "Segment Descriptor" column in the
> > >>> "BGP-LS SR Segment Descriptor Types" registry, should the
> > >>> following changes be made to the code point descriptions?  That
> > >>> is, add articles, make names following "pair" plural, and
> > >>> capitalize instances of "address" and "node", accordingly.
> > >>>
> > >>> The form to the right of the arrow is suggested. If changes are
> > >>> made, we will update the running text accordingly (namely the
> > >>> subsections under Section 5.7.1.1) as well as the IANA registry.
> > >>>
> > >>> Link to registry:
> > >>> <https://www.iana.org/assignments/bgp-ls-parameters/
> > >>> bgp-ls-parameters.xhtml#bgp-ls-sr-segment-descriptor-types>
> > >>>
> > >>> (Type B) SRv6 SID as IPv6 address -> (Type B) SRv6 SID as an IPv6
> > >>> Address
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>> (Type C) SR-MPLS Prefix SID as IPv4 Node Address ->
> > >>>    (Type C) SR-MPLS Prefix SID as an IPv4 Node Address
> > >>>
> > >>> (Type D) SR-MPLS Prefix SID as IPv6 Node Global Address ->
> > >>>    (Type D) SR-MPLS Prefix SID as an IPv6 Node Global Address
> > >>>
> > >>> (Type E) SR-MPLS Adjacency SID as IPv4 Node Address & Local Interface
> ID ->
> > >>>    (Type E) SR-MPLS Adjacency SID as an IPv4 Node Address & a
> > >>> Local Interface ID
> > >>>
> > >>> (Note: Section 5.7.1.1.6 describes Type F as a "pair"; is that
> > >>> correct to add?) (Type F) SR-MPLS Adjacency SID as IPv4 Local &
> Remote Interface Addresses ->
> > >>>    (Type F) SR-MPLS Adjacency SID as a pair of IPv4 Local & Remote
> > >>>    Interface Addresses
> > >>>
> > >>> (Type G) SR-MPLS Adjacency SID as pair of IPv6 Global Address &
> Interface ID for
> > >>> Local & Remote nodes ->
> > >>>    (Type G) SR-MPLS Adjacency SID as a pair of IPv6 Global Addresses
> &
> > >>>    Interface IDs for Local & Remote Nodes
> > >>>
> > >>> (Type H) SR-MPLS Adjacency SID as pair of IPv6 Global Addresses
> > >>> for the Local & Remote Interface ->
> > >>>    (Type H) SR-MPLS Adjacency SID as a pair of IPv6 Global Addresses
> for
> > >>>     Local & Remote Interface Addresses
> > >>>
> > >>> (Type I) SRv6 END SID as IPv6 Node Global Address ->
> > >>>    (Type I) SRv6 END SID as an IPv6 Node Global Address
> > >>>
> > >>> (Type J) SRv6 END.X SID as pair of IPv6 Global Address & Interface
> > >>> ID for Local & Remote nodes ->
> > >>>     (Type J) SRv6 END.X SID as a pair of IPv6 Global Addresses &
> Interface IDs
> > >>>     for Local & Remote Nodes
> > >>>
> > >>> (Type K) SRv6 END.X SID as pair of IPv6 Global Addresses for the
> > >>> Local & Remote Interface ->
> > >>>     (Type K) SRv6 END.X SID as a pair of IPv6 Global Addresses for
> Local &
> > >>>     Remote Interface Addresses
> > >>> -->
> > >>>
> > >>> KT> Please refer to my response to your point 13 that impacts
> > >>> KT> this. With that in mind, I would think
> > >>> that these queries are no longer relevant?
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>> 22) <!--[rfced] FYI: In the Contributors section, we updated the
> > >>> lead-in text as follows to indicate that the individuals listed
> > >>> are coauthors.
> > >>>
> > >>> Original:
> > >>>  The following people have substantially contributed to the
> > >>> editing of  this document:
> > >>>
> > >>> Current:
> > >>>  The following people have contributed substantially to the
> > >>> content of this document and should be considered coauthors:
> > >>> -->
> > >>>
> > >>> KT> Ack
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>> 23) <!-- [rfced] Terminology
> > >>>
> > >>> a) Throughout the text, the following terminology appears to be
> > >>> used inconsistently. Please review these occurrences and let us
> > >>> know if/how they may be made consistent.
> > >>>
> > >>> -Flag vs. -flag
> > >>>  (e.g., "D-Flag" vs. "A-flag" in the running text)
> > >>>
> > >>> KT> -flag
> > >>>
> > >>> Metric Type field vs. "metric type" field
> > >>>  (Note: the companion document uses "metric type field" with no
> > >>> quote marks)
> > >>>
> > >>> KT> metric type field - without the quotes
> > >>>
> > >>> Segment Descriptor vs. Segment descriptor
> > >>>
> > >>> KT> segment descriptor (except when used in titles where
> > >>> KT> capitalization is used)
> > >>>
> > >>> Segment List vs. segment list
> > >>>
> > >>> KT> 2nd
> > >>>
> > >>> SID-List vs. SID-list vs. SID-LIST vs. SID List
> > >>>
> > >>> KT> SID list to be consistent with a single usage in RFC9256
> > >>>
> > >>> SR Policy Candidate Path NLRI Type vs. SR Policy Candidate Path
> > >>> NLRI type
> > >>>
> > >>> KT> 2nd
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>> SR Policy Candidate Path vs. SR Policy Candidate path vs. SR
> > >>> Policy candidate path
> > >>>
> > >>> KT> Capitalization when used in name (1st) and otherwise (3rd)
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>> b) We updated the following terms for consistency. Please let us know
> of any objections.
> > >>>
> > >>> codepoint -> code point (per IANA registries) dataplane -> data
> > >>> plane drop upon invalid -> Drop-Upon-Invalid (per RFC 9256) Global
> > >>> address -> global address (2 instances in the running text)
> > >>> head-end -> headend nexthop -> next hop traffic engineering ->
> > >>> Traffic Engineering (per RFC 9552 and the companion document)
> > >>>
> > >>> KT> Ack
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>> c) FYI: We made "Constraints" in the following sub-TLV names
> > >>> singular for consistency with Table 4.
> > >>>
> > >>> SR Affinity Constraints Sub-TLV -> SR Affinity Constraint Sub-TLV
> > >>> (Figure 12) SR Bandwidth Constraints Sub-TLV -> SR Bandwidth
> > >>> Constraint Sub-TLV (Figure 14)
> > >>>
> > >>> SR Bidirectional Group Constraints Sub-TLV ->
> > >>>   SR Bidirectional Group Constraint Sub-TLV (Figure 16)
> > >>>
> > >>> SR Disjoint Group Constraints Sub-TLV -> SR Disjoint Group
> > >>> Constraint Sub-TLV (Figure 15) SR Metric Constraints Sub-TLV -> SR
> > >>> Metric Constraint Sub-TLV (Figure 17 and Section 5.7.2) SR SRLG
> > >>> Constraints Sub-TLV -> SR SRLG Constraint Sub-TLV (Figure 13)
> > >>>
> > >>> KT> Ack
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>> d) FYI: We updated 7 instances of "Descriptor" to "Descriptors"
> > >>> for TLV 256 per RFC 9552.
> > >>>
> > >>> Local Node Descriptor (TLV 256) -> Local Node Descriptors (TLV
> > >>> 256)
> > >>> -->
> > >>>
> > >>> KT> Ack
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>> 24) <!-- [rfced] Abbreviations
> > >>>
> > >>> a) FYI - We have added expansions for the following abbreviations
> > >>> per Section 3.6 of RFC 7322 ("RFC Style Guide"). Please review
> > >>> each expansion in the document carefully to ensure correctness.
> > >>>
> > >>> Autonomous System Number (ASN)
> > >>> Bidirectional Forwarding Detection (BFD) External BGP (EBGP) Label
> > >>> Edge Routers (LERs) Label Switched Path (LSP) Label Switching
> > >>> Router (LSR) Network Layer Reachability Information (NLRI) Path
> > >>> Computation Element Communication Protocol (PCEP)
> > >>>
> > >>> KT> Ack
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>> b) To reflect more common usage in previously published RFCs, may
> > >>> we update the expansion of "BGP-LS" from "BGP Link-State" to "BGP
> > >>> - Link State"? If yes, note that the title of this document would also 
> > >>> be
> updated accordingly.
> > >>>
> > >>> Original:
> > >>>  Advertisement of Segment Routing Policies using BGP Link-State
> > >>> ...
> > >>>  This document describes a mechanism to collect the Segment
> > >>> Routing  Policy information that is locally available in a node
> > >>> and advertise  it into BGP Link-State (BGP-LS) updates.
> > >>>
> > >>> Perhaps:
> > >>>  Advertisement of Segment Routing Policies using BGP - Link State
> > >>> ...
> > >>>  This document describes a mechanism to collect the Segment
> > >>> Routing  Policy information that is locally available in a node and
> advertise
> > >>>  it into BGP - Link State (BGP-LS) updates.
> > >>> -->
> > >>>
> > >>> KT> ack
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>> 25) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of
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> > >>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language>
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> > >>>
> > >>> Note that our script did not flag any words in particular, but
> > >>> this should still be reviewed as a best practice.
> > >>> -->
> > >>>
> > >>> KT> Looks good to me.
> > >>>
> > >>> Thanks,
> > >>> Ketan
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>> Thank you.
> > >>>
> > >>> Karen Moore and Alanna Paloma
> > >>> RFC Production Center
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>> On Sep 10, 2025, at 3:08 PM, [email protected] wrote:
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> > >>> Title            : Advertisement of Segment Routing Policies using
> BGP Link-State
> > >>> Author(s)        : S. Previdi, K. Talaulikar, Ed., J. Dong, H. Gredler, 
> > >>> J.
> Tantsura
> > >>> WG Chair(s)      : Susan Hares, Keyur Patel, Jeffrey Haas
> > >>>
> > >>> Area Director(s) : Jim Guichard, Ketan Talaulikar, Gunter Van de
> > >>> Velde
> > >>>
> > >>>
> > >>
> > >>
> >
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