Hi Konrad,

Thank you for your reply. We made the changes listed in your last email and 
also marked your approval on the AUTH48 status page for this document (see 
https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9866).

We will now await discussion and resolution of the suggestions from Ines Robles 
regarding the new normative key words.

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Thank you,

Rebecca VanRheenen
RFC Production Center



> On Sep 27, 2025, at 7:52 AM, Konrad Iwanicki <[email protected]> wrote:
> 
> Dear Rebecca,
> 
> Thank you again for your work! I reviewed the entire document. I APPROVE it, 
> but leave the following tiny suggestions to your discretion (not requiring 
> further approval):
> 
> 1.
> 
> OLD:
> Detecting a crash of a link by a node normally happens when the node has 
> sufficiently observed many forwarding failures over the link.
> 
> NEW:
> Detecting a crash of a link by a node normally happens when the node has 
> observed sufficiently many forwarding failures over the link.
> 
> OR:
> Detecting a crash of a link by a node normally happens when the node has 
> observed a sufficient number of forwarding failures over the link.
> 
> [This is because "sufficiently observed" seems vague to me.]
> 
> 2.
> 
> OLD:
> However, when a node (acting as a Sentinel) starts suspecting that the root 
> may have
> 
> NEW:
> However, when a node acting as a Sentinel starts suspecting that the root may 
> have
> 
> [This is to emphasize the need for being a Sentinel.]
> 
> 
> 3.
> 
> OLD:
> (for instance, link-layer triggers about missing hop-by-hop acknowledgments
> 
> NEW:
> (e.g., link-layer triggers about missing hop-by-hop acknowledgments
> 
> 4.
> 
> OLD:
> (for example, a significant growth in the number of Sentinels
> 
> NEW:
> (e.g., a significant growth in the number of Sentinels
> 
> [These two are for consistency with the rest of the text.]
> 
> Thank you again for doing the edits!
> 
> Best regards,
> --
> - Konrad Iwanicki.
> 
> 
> On 26/09/2025 03:54, Rebecca VanRheenen wrote:
>> Hi Konrad,
>> Thank you for responding to our questions! We updated the document 
>> accordingly. Note that we did not make any changes per question #6 as there 
>> should not be any confusion for readers and the current is consistent with 
>> RFC 6550 (thanks for pointing that out!).
>> In a separate email, we will ask the AD to approve the changes that involve 
>> 2119 keywords (we consider those changes to be “above editorial”).
>> Please review the document carefully to ensure satisfaction as we do not 
>> make changes once it has been published as an RFC. Contact us with any 
>> further updates or with your approval of the document in its current form.
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>> side)
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>> where text is moved or deleted)
>> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
>>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9866
>> Thank you,
>> Rebecca VanRheenen
>> RFC Production Center
>>> On Sep 24, 2025, at 3:19 PM, Konrad Iwanicki <[email protected]> wrote:
>>> 
>>> Dear Kaelin and Rebecca,
>>> 
>>> Thank you for your suggestions! I really appreciate how much effort they 
>>> involved. Please, find my comments inline.
>>> 
>>> On 23/09/2025 19:57, [email protected] wrote:
>>>> 1) <!-- [rfced] FYI - This document contained many non-ASCII characters 
>>>> used for
>>>> punctuation, such as smart quotes and en dashes. We updated to use the
>>>> ASCII equivalents per the Web Portion of the Style Guide (see
>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#nonascii).
>>>> To help you with your review, we created the following alt-diff file that 
>>>> does
>>>> not contain any of those changes (i.e., changes from non-ASCII punctuation 
>>>> to
>>>> ASCII equivalent):
>>>>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9866-alt-diff.html
>>>> This diff file includes all of changes:
>>>>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9866-diff.html
>>>> -->
>>> 
>>> Approved.
>>> 
>>>> 2) <!-- [rfced] Please note that the title of the document has been 
>>>> updated as
>>>> follows. We expanded abbreviations per Section 3.6 of RFC 7322 ("RFC
>>>> Style Guide") and also revised "Fast Border Router Crash Detection" to
>>>> improve readability. Let us know any concerns.
>>>> Original:
>>>>   RNFD: Fast border router crash detection in RPL
>>>> Current:
>>>>   Root Node Failure Detector (RNFD): Fast Detection of Border Router 
>>>> Crashes
>>>>   in the Routing Protocol for Low-Power and Lossy Networks (RPL)
>>>> -->
>>> 
>>> Approved.
>>> 
>>>> 3) <!-- [rfced] We were unable to find the terms "control traffic", 
>>>> "Trickle
>>>> algorithm", or "DODAG" in RFC 6202. Should this citation be updated to
>>>> RFC 6206?
>>>> Original:
>>>>    Finally, switching a parent or discovering a loop can also generate
>>>>    cascaded bursts of control traffic, owing to the adaptive Trickle 
>>>> algorithm
>>>>    for exchanging DODAG information [RFC6202].
>>>> -->
>>> 
>>> Approved. Of course this should be RFC 6206.
>>> 
>>>> 4) <!-- [rfced] Is "if possible" needed here?
>>>> Original:
>>>>    Given the consequences of LBR failures, if possible, it is also worth
>>>>    considering other solutions to the problem.
>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>    Given the consequences of LBR failures, it is also worth
>>>>    considering other solutions to the problem.
>>>> -->
>>> 
>>> Approved. The proposed version makes more sense.
>>> 
>>>> 5) <!-- [rfced] Would including a reference for "generic format of RPL 
>>>> Control
>>>> Message Options" be helpful to readers?
>>>> Original:
>>>>    The format of the RNFD Option conforms to the generic format of RPL
>>>>    Control Message Options:
>>>> -->
>>> 
>>> Yes, certainly. In case you need it, it is in Section 6.7.1 of RFC 6550.
>>> 
>>>> 6) <!-- [rfced] Section 4.2: We note that "Type" appears in Figure 2, but 
>>>> that it
>>>> is defined as "Option Type" in the definition list that follows. Are any
>>>> updates needed for consistency?
>>>> -->
>>> 
>>> I put "Type" in the figure, because "Option Type = 0x0E" would not fit. 
>>> This approach is consistent with RFC 6550: compare in particular Figure 19 
>>> with Figures 20, 21, 22, and the like. However, it makes sense to make this 
>>> more explicit. What I would do, if possible, would be changing the legend 
>>> under the figure as follows.
>>> 
>>> OLD:
>>> Option Type:  0x0E
>>> 
>>> NEW:
>>> Type:  RPL Option Type = 0x0E.
>>> 
>>>> 7) <!-- [rfced] We have updated this long sentence to be two sentences to 
>>>> improve
>>>> readability. Please review to confirm these updates do not change your
>>>> intended meaning (in particular, our addition of another "MUST" in the
>>>> second sentence).
>>>> Original:
>>>>    *  for “UP” and “SUSPECTED DOWN”, the node MUST set its LORS to “UP”,
>>>>       MUST NOT modify it PositiveCFRC, but MUST add itself to
>>>>       NegativeCFRC, that is, replace its NegativeCFRC, denoted oldnc,
>>>>       with newnc = merge(oldnc, selfc), where selfc is the counter
>>>>       generated with self() when the node last added itself to its
>>>>       PositiveCFRC.
>>>> Current:
>>>>    *  For "UP" and "SUSPECTED DOWN", the node MUST set its LORS to "UP" and
>>>>       MUST NOT modify its PositiveCFRC, but it MUST add itself to
>>>>       NegativeCFRC.  That is, it MUST replace its NegativeCFRC (denoted 
>>>> oldnc)
>>>>       with newnc = merge(oldnc, selfc), where selfc is the counter
>>>>       generated with self() when the node last added itself to its
>>>>       PositiveCFRC.
>>>> -->
>>> 
>>> The split is fine, but I would leave the commas instead of the parentheses:
>>> 
>>> OLD:
>>> replace its NegativeCFRC (denoted oldnc) with
>>> 
>>> NEW:
>>> replace its NegativeCFRC, denoted oldnc, with
>>> 
>>>> 8) <!-- [rfced] We are having trouble understanding this sentence. We 
>>>> updated the
>>>> introductory clause ("Whenever...DODAG root") as follows.  Please review
>>>> to ensure the updated text accurately conveys the intended meaning.
>>>> Original:
>>>>    Whenever having its LORS set to “UP” RNFD concludes — based on either
>>>>    external or internal inputs — that there may be problems with the
>>>>    link with the DODAG root, it MUST set its LORS to either “SUSPECTED
>>>>    DOWN” or, as an optimization, to “LOCALLY DOWN”.
>>>> Updated:
>>>>    Whenever its LORS is set to "UP" and RNFD concludes (based on either
>>>>    external or internal inputs) that there may be problems with the
>>>>    link with the DODAG root, it MUST set its LORS either to "SUSPECTED
>>>>    DOWN" or, as an optimization, to "LOCALLY DOWN".
>>>> -->
>>> 
>>> The updated clause sounds somewhat weird to me, especially the combination 
>>> of "its ... and RNFD ...". How about putting commas around "having its LORS 
>>> set to “UP”":
>>> 
>>> OLD:
>>> Whenever its LORS is set to "UP" and RNFD concludes (based on either
>>> external or internal inputs) that there may be problems with the
>>> link with the DODAG root, it MUST set its LORS either to "SUSPECTED
>>> DOWN" or, as an optimization, to "LOCALLY DOWN".
>>> 
>>> NEW:
>>> Whenever, having its LORS set to “UP”, RNFD concludes (based on either
>>> external or internal inputs) that there may be problems with the
>>> link with the DODAG root, it MUST set its LORS to either “SUSPECTED
>>> DOWN” or, as an optimization, to “LOCALLY DOWN”.
>>> 
>>> 
>>>> 9) <!-- [rfced] Would updating "previous conditions 2–4" as following make 
>>>> this
>>>> text easier for readers to follow?
>>>> Original:
>>>>    In such a case, it SHOULD set its LORS back to
>>>>    “UP” but MUST NOT do this before the previous conditions 2–4
>>>>    necessary for a node to change its role from Acceptor to Sentinel all
>>>>    hold (see Section 5.1).
>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>    In such a case, it SHOULD set its LORS back to
>>>>    "UP" but MUST NOT do this before conditions 2-4 in Section 5.1, which 
>>>> are
>>>>    necessary for a node to change its role from Acceptor to Sentinel, all
>>>>    hold.
>>>> -->
>>> 
>>> Approved.
>>> 
>>>> 10) <!-- [rfced] Is "again" needed in these sentences?
>>>> Original:
>>>>    By symmetry, if there is a transition from “LOCALLY
>>>>    DOWN” to “UP”, the node MUST add itself to its PositiveCFRC, again,
>>>>    as explained previously.
>>>>    ...
>>>>    In addition, if its LORS is “LOCALLY
>>>>    DOWN”, then it MUST also add itself to its NegativeCFRC, again, as
>>>>    explained previously.
>>>>    ...
>>>>    In this way, again, a sufficient bit length can be
>>>>    dynamically discovered or the root can conclude that a given bit
>>>>    length is excessive for (some) nodes and resort to the previous
>>>>    solution.
>>>> Perhaps (remove "again"):
>>>>    By symmetry, if there is a transition from "LOCALLY
>>>>    DOWN" to "UP", the node MUST add itself to its PositiveCFRC,
>>>>    as explained previously.
>>>>    ...
>>>>    In addition, if its LORS is "LOCALLY
>>>>    DOWN", then it MUST also add itself to its NegativeCFRC, as
>>>>    explained previously.
>>>>    ...
>>>>    In this way, a sufficient bit length can be
>>>>    dynamically discovered or the root can conclude that a given bit
>>>>    length is excessive for (some) nodes and resort to the previous
>>>>    solution.
>>>> -->
>>> 
>>> Approved.
>>> 
>>>> 11) <!-- [rfced] We split this long sentence into two sentences and 
>>>> updated "for
>>>> example, replying" to "For example, it MAY reply". Please review
>>>> (especially our addition of another "MAY") and let us know any objections.
>>>> Original:
>>>>    In particular, it MAY reset its Trickle timer to this end but also MAY 
>>>> use
>>>>    some reactive mechanisms, for example, replying with a unicast DIO or 
>>>> DIS
>>>>    containing the RNFD Option with no CFRCs to a message from a neighbor 
>>>> that
>>>>    contains the option with some CFRCs, as such a neighbor appears not to 
>>>> have
>>>>    learned about the deactivation of RNFD.
>>>> Current:
>>>>    In particular, it MAY reset its Trickle timer to this end but MAY also 
>>>> use
>>>>    some reactive mechanisms.  For example, it MAY reply with a unicast DIO 
>>>> or
>>>>    DIS containing the RNFD Option with no CFRCs to a message from a 
>>>> neighbor
>>>>    that contains the option with some CFRCs, as such a neighbor appears 
>>>> not to
>>>>    have learned about the deactivation of RNFD.
>>>> -->
>>> 
>>> Approved.
>>> 
>>>> 12) <!-- [rfced] May we rephrase these as follows to form complete 
>>>> sentences?
>>>> Original:
>>>>    In general, the higher the value the longer the detection period but the
>>>>    lower the risk of false positives.
>>>>    The higher the value the longer the duration of detecting true crashes
>>>>    but the lower the risk of increased traffic due to verifying false
>>>>    suspicions.
>>>>    The higher the value
>>>>    is, the higher the probability of bit collisions, and hence the
>>>>    more erratic the results of function value(c) may be.
>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>    In general, when the value is higher, the detection period is longer, 
>>>> but
>>>>    the risk of false positives is lower.
>>>>    When the value is higher, the duration of detecting true crashes is 
>>>> longer,
>>>>    but the risk of increased traffic due to verifying false
>>>>    suspicions is lower.
>>>>    When the value is higher, the probability of bit collisions is higher, 
>>>> and
>>>>    the results of function value(c) may thus be more erratic.
>>>> -->
>>> 
>>> Approved.
>>> 
>>>> 13) <!-- [rfced] Will readers understand what is being connected with the 
>>>> second
>>>> "and" in this sentence?
>>>> Original:
>>>>    One approach to node role and CFRC size selection is to manually
>>>>    designate specific nodes as Sentinels in RNFD, assuming that they
>>>>    will have chances to satisfy the necessary conditions for attaining
>>>>    this role (see Section 5.1), and fixing the CFRC bit length to
>>>>    accommodate these nodes.
>>>> Perhaps (to designate...and...to fix):
>>>>    One approach to node role and CFRC size selection is to manually
>>>>    designate specific nodes as Sentinels in RNFD, assuming that they
>>>>    will have chances to satisfy the necessary conditions for attaining
>>>>    this role (see Section 5.1), and to fix the CFRC bit length to
>>>>    accommodate these nodes.
>>>> Or (for attaining...and...for fixing):
>>>>    One approach to node role and CFRC size selection is to manually
>>>>    designate specific nodes as Sentinels in RNFD, assuming that they
>>>>    will have chances to satisfy the necessary conditions for attaining
>>>>    this role (see Section 5.1) and for fixing the CFRC bit length to
>>>>    accommodate these nodes.
>>>> -->
>>> 
>>> Approved the version after "Perhaps". The one after "Or" is wrong. The 
>>> original statement was also incorrectly constructed.
>>> 
>>>> 14) <!-- [rfced] Section 5.8 appears to describe three thresholds. Should 
>>>> the text
>>>> below be updated accordingly?
>>>> Original:
>>>>    This SHOULD be taken into account in the policies for node
>>>>    role assignment, CFRC size selection, and, possibly, the setting of
>>>>    the two thresholds (Section 5.8).
>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>    This SHOULD be taken into account in the policies for node role 
>>>> assignment,
>>>>    CFRC size selection, and, possibly, the setting of the three thresholds
>>>>    (Section 5.8).
>>>> -->
>>> 
>>> Approved.
>>> 
>>>> 15) <!-- [rfced] We updated this text as follows to form a complete
>>>> sentence. However, due to context (see text prior to this sentence),
>>>> should this read "This information SHOULD be" rather than the current
>>>> "This information is"?
>>>> Original:
>>>>    accompanied by the recommended monitoring parameters provided by RPL
>>>>    itself [RFC6550], notably the DODAG Version number and the Rank.
>>>> Current:
>>>>    This information is accompanied by the recommended monitoring parameters
>>>>    provided by RPL
>>>>    itself [RFC6550], notably the DODAG Version number and the Rank.
>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>    This information SHOULD be accompanied by the recommended monitoring
>>>>    parameters provided by RPL
>>>>    itself [RFC6550], notably the DODAG Version number and the Rank.
>>>> -->
>>> 
>>> Neither. Instead, see my proposal below. The rationale is that one cannot 
>>> interpret the new bits of information without the information from RPL.
>>> 
>>> OLD:
>>> This information is accompanied by the recommended monitoring parameters 
>>> provided by RPL itself [RFC6550], notably the DODAG Version number and the 
>>> Rank.
>>> 
>>> NEW:
>>> This information MUST be accompanied by the recommended monitoring 
>>> parameters provided by RPL itself [RFC6550], notably the DODAG Version 
>>> number and the Rank.
>>> 
>>> 
>>>> 16) <!-- [rfced] Note that we removed several instances of "in turn" to 
>>>> improve
>>>> readability of the text. Please review those in the diff file and let us
>>>> know any concerns.
>>>> -->
>>> 
>>> Approved, with the following remarks:
>>> 
>>> OLD:
>>> They are also used by nodes to periodically report their connectivity 
>>> upward to the LBR, which allows for directing packets downward from the LBR 
>>> to these nodes (for instance, by means of source routing [RFC6554]).
>>> 
>>> NEW:
>>> They are also used by nodes to periodically report their connectivity 
>>> upward to the LBR, which allows for directing packets downward from the LBR 
>>> to these nodes (e.g., by means of source routing [RFC6554]).
>>> 
>>> OLD:
>>> Internally, it is RECOMMENDED that RNFD take action whenever there is a 
>>> change to its
>>> NEW:
>>> Internally, in turn, it is RECOMMENDED that RNFD take action whenever there 
>>> is a change to its
>>> 
>>> OLD:
>>> During a switch from "UP" or "SUSPECTED DOWN" to "LOCALLY DOWN", the node 
>>> MUST add itself to its NegativeCFRC, as explained previously.
>>> 
>>> NEW:
>>> In contrast, during a switch from "UP" or "SUSPECTED DOWN" to "LOCALLY 
>>> DOWN", the node MUST add itself to its NegativeCFRC, as explained 
>>> previously.
>>> 
>>> OLD:
>>> Those that pass undetected are likely not to have major negative
>>> 
>>> NEW:
>>> Those that do pass undetected are likely not to have major negative
>>> 
>>>> 17) <!-- [rfced] We note that the terms below appear both capitalized and
>>>> lowercase in this document. Should these be uniform? If so, please let us
>>>> know which form is preferred.
>>>> DODAG Version v. DODAG version
>>>>   Note: RFC 6550 uses the capitalized form.
>>>> Rank v. rank
>>>> -->
>>> 
>>> They can (and probably should) be made uniform. The capitalized form is 
>>> preferred as in RFC 6550.
>>> 
>>>> 18) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the 
>>>> online
>>>> Style Guide 
>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language>
>>>> and let us know if any changes are needed.  Updates of this nature 
>>>> typically
>>>> result in more precise language, which is helpful for readers.
>>>> Note that our script did not flag any words in particular, but this should
>>>> still be reviewed as a best practice.
>>>> -->
>>> 
>>> I did not find any violations, but if necessary, I will try to read more 
>>> carefully during a next revision.
>>> 
>>>> Thank you.
>>> 
>>> Thank you again!
>>> 
>>> Best regards,
>>> -- 
>>> - Konrad Iwanicki.
>>> 
>>> 
>>>> Kaelin Foody and Rebecca VanRheenen
>>>> RFC Production Center
>>>> On Sep 23, 2025, at 10:50 AM, [email protected] wrote:
>>>> *****IMPORTANT*****
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>>>> --------------------------------------
>>>> RFC9866 (draft-ietf-roll-rnfd-07)
>>>> Title            : RNFD: Fast border router crash detection in RPL
>>>> Author(s)        : K. Iwanicki
>>>> WG Chair(s)      : Ines Robles, Remous-Aris Koutsiamanis
>>>> Area Director(s) : Jim Guichard, Ketan Talaulikar, Gunter Van de Velde
>>> 
> 
> -- 
> - Konrad Iwanicki.

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