Hi, sorry, but I have some timing problems. I hope I can get the review done by end of next week.
Thank you and Best Regards Roland -----Ursprüngliche Nachricht----- Von: Alice Russo <[email protected]> Gesendet: Montag, 20. Oktober 2025 21:02 An: [email protected]; [email protected]; [email protected]; Jesske, Roland <[email protected]> Cc: [email protected]; [email protected]; [email protected]; Andrew Newton <[email protected]>; auth48archive <[email protected]>; RFC Editor <[email protected]> Betreff: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9878 <draft-ietf-sipcore-rfc7976bis-04> for your review Authors, This is a reminder that we await word from you regarding the questions below and this document's readiness for publication as an RFC. 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Alice Russo RFC Production Center > On Oct 10, 2025, at 6:23 PM, [email protected] wrote: > > Authors, > > While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as > necessary) the following questions, which are also in the source file. > > 1) <!-- [rfced] Because this document updates RFC 7315, please review > the errata reported for RFC 7315 > (https://www/ > .rfc-editor.org%2Ferrata%2Frfc7315&data=05%7C02%7CR.Jesske%40telekom.d > e%7C42921f5f545943ba56d508de100b3801%7Cbde4dffc4b604cf68b04a5eeb25f5c4 > f%7C0%7C0%7C638965837816706929%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGk > iOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyf > Q%3D%3D%7C40000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=uQp87c%2FVu2qW%2BtAuNyBySKWzv2K5daVTwvL > cHWl5oOA%3D&reserved=0) and let us know if you confirm our opinion > that none of them are relevant to the content of this document. > --> > > > 2) <!-- [rfced] Because this document obsoletes RFC 7976, please > review the errata reported for RFC 7976 > (https://www/ > .rfc-editor.org%2Ferrata%2Frfc7976&data=05%7C02%7CR.Jesske%40telekom.d > e%7C42921f5f545943ba56d508de100b3801%7Cbde4dffc4b604cf68b04a5eeb25f5c4 > f%7C0%7C0%7C638965837816716298%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGk > iOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyf > Q%3D%3D%7C40000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=AlLEFft%2F0b0ChmvlYhLU7JZw57qEULH7ceSo0 > DfUumA%3D&reserved=0) and let us know if you confirm our opinion that > none of them are relevant to the content of this document. > --> > > > 3) <!-- [rfced] While we understand the original document (RFC 7976) > was published with the text in some of the questions below, the > opportunity with the "bis" document is to make the text as clear as possible. > If you decide to make changes, you have the option to add text to > Section 7 to mention minor editorial updates. > --> > > > 4) <!--[rfced] Abstract and Introduction: Please review if the first > sentence conveys the intended meaning. Specifically, should "currently not > allowed" > be rephrased? This text is directly from RFC 7976, published in 2016. > What is the subject of "not allowed"? It can be read as the requests > and responses are not allowed. > > Based on "This specification allows some header fields to be present > in messages where they were previously not allowed" (Section 5), we > make the following suggestion. > > Original: > The Third Generation Partnership Project (3GPP) has identified cases > where different SIP private header extensions referred to as "P-" > header fields, and defined in RFC 7315, need to be included in SIP > requests and responses currently not allowed according to RFC 7315. > > Perhaps: > The Third Generation Partnership Project (3GPP) has identified cases > where different SIP private header extensions referred to as "P-" > header fields, and defined in RFC 7315, need to be included in SIP > requests and responses where they were not allowed according to RFC 7315. > --> > > > 5) <!--[rfced] Abstract and Introduction: Please clarify "when RFC > 3455 was updated and subsequently obsoleted by the publication of RFC 7315". > In the RFC series, "updated" and "obsoleted" have distinct meanings > regarding the relationships between RFCs. > > RFC 3455 has not been updated by any other RFCs, so the original > sentence is not accurate. We suggest simply "obsoleted" as follows. > Please let us know if this is acceptable. > > Original: > This document also makes updates for RFC 7315 in order to fix > misalignments that occurred when RFC 3455 was updated and > subsequently obsoleted by the publication of RFC 7315. > > Perhaps: > This document also makes updates for RFC 7315 in order to fix > misalignments that occurred when RFC 3455 was obsoleted by > RFC 7315. > > Or (if you prefer to explain "obsoleted"): > This document also makes updates for RFC 7315 in order to fix > misalignments that occurred when RFC 3455 was obsoleted by > RFC 7315, i.e., when the content of RFC 3455 was completely replaced. > > > FYI, similarly, we have updated Section 2.2 as follows for accuracy. > > Original: when [RFC3455] was updated and obsolated by [RFC7315] > Current: when [RFC3455] was obsoleted by [RFC7315] > --> > > > 6) <!-- [rfced] Would you like the note in this document to be in an > <aside> element, or remain as is? It is defined as "a container for > content that is semantically less important or tangential to the > content that surrounds it" (https://authors.ietf.org/rfcxml-vocabulary#aside). > > Original: > NOTE: In the case of the P-Called-Party-ID header field, allowing it > in PUBLISH requests was done deliberately in [RFC7315]. Therefore, > it is not considered a misalignment. > --> > > > 7) <!--[rfced] To prevent misreading this sentence (i.e., "the NPLI > needs to be stored as the location of the user"), may we add a comma as > follows? > > Original: > When an IMS session is modified, the NPLI also > needs to be stored as the location of the user at the time when the > session is modified may generate a charging event. > > Suggested: > When an IMS session is modified, the NPLI also > needs to be stored, as the location of the user at the time when the > session is modified may generate a charging event. > --> > > > 8) <!--[rfced] We suggest adding articles ('the' and 'a') as follows; > please let us know if this is acceptable. (We note that RFC 7976 did > not use articles in similar text, but 'a SIP 2xx response' appears in > other RFCs.) > > Original: ... within SIP 2xx response to the SIP INVITE request. > Perhaps: ... within the SIP 2xx response to the SIP INVITE request. > > Original: Upon reception of the SDP answer within SIP 2xx response .. > Perhaps: Upon reception of the SDP answer within a SIP 2xx response ... > --> > > > 9) <!--[rfced] non-2xx response vs. SIP non-2xx response In other > instances in this document, "SIP" does not appear before "non-2xx > response"; may it be removed here, or is it necessary? > > Original: > The P-Charging-Vector header field shall not be included in SIP ACK > requests triggered by SIP non-2xx responses. > > Perhaps (to match usage in Sections 2.3.2 and 3): > The P-Charging-Vector header field shall not be included in SIP ACK > requests triggered by non-2xx responses. > --> > > > 10) <!--[rfced] FYI, in Section 3, the quote of RFC 7315 ("Old text") > has been updated to exactly match the RFC. If you prefer to keep the > blank lines between each sentence, then please let us know and we > would suggest adding text to note that it does not match the original, > e.g., "Blank lines have been added for readability." > --> > > > 11) <!-- [rfced] FYI, we updated the 3GPP reference titles to match > the titles provided by 3GPP. We have also added URLs that point to the > specific version used in the references. Please review. > > We note the version referenced in this document is from 2016 and there > have been several updates over the years. Would you like to update > this reference to a more current version? 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