Hi Megan, Xiao Min,
Thank you for the update. Please also record my approval for the document publication. Best Regards, Liyan From: [email protected] Date: 2025-10-28 09:16 To: [email protected] CC: [email protected] [email protected] [email protected] [email protected] [email protected] [email protected] [email protected] [email protected] [email protected] [email protected] Subject: Re: [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9884 <draft-ietf-mpls-spring-lsp-ping-path-sid-13> for your review Hi Megan, Thank you for the update. I missed one place needing a change as below. OLD: some segment lists across multiple candidate paths of an SR policy NEW: some segment lists across multiple candidate paths of an SR Policy With that change, I approve the publication of this document. Cheers, Xiao Min Original From: MeganFerguson <[email protected]> To: 肖敏10093570 Cc: RFC Editor <[email protected]>彭少富[email protected] <[email protected]>[email protected] <[email protected]>[email protected] <[email protected]>[email protected] <[email protected]>[email protected] <[email protected]>[email protected] <[email protected]>James Guichard <[email protected]>[email protected] <[email protected]> Date: 2025年10月28日 01:22 Subject: Re: [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9884 <draft-ietf-mpls-spring-lsp-ping-path-sid-13> for your review Hi Xiao Min, Thanks for having a look! We have updated the files with your requested changes and reposted (please refresh). We have also recorded Carlos’s approval on our AUTH48 status page (see below). Please review the files carefully as we do not make changes after publication. The files have been posted here (please refresh): https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9884.txt https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9884.pdf https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9884.html https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9884.xml The relevant diff files have been posted here (please refresh): https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9884-diff.html (comprehensive diff) https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9884-rfcdiff.html (comprehensive side by side) https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9884-auth48diff.html (AUTH48 changes only) https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9884-auth48rfcdiff.html (AUTH48 side by side) The AUTH48 status page for this document is available here: https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9884 Thank you. Megan FergusonRFC Production Center > On Oct 26, 2025, at 9:00 PM, [email protected] wrote:> > Hi Megan,> > Thank you for the update.> I re-reviewed the following terms throughout as you requested.> > SR path vs. SR Path> > segment-list vs. Segment List vs. segment list> > candidate path vs. Candidate Path vs. Candidate path> > I propose the following changes. The rule is that if with SR, Segment List/Candidate Path/Policy is used, if without SR, segment list/candidate path/policy is used.> > Section #1> OLD:> the initiator can use LSP Ping to verify the SR Path context (segment-list, candidate path, or SR policy) associated with the PSID> NEW:> the initiator can use LSP Ping to verify the SR path context (segment list, candidate path, or SR Policy) associated with the PSID> > Section #3> OLD:> a single segment list, some segment lists, or all segment lists in a candidate path of an SR policy> NEW:> a single segment list, some segment lists, or all segment lists in a candidate path of an SR Policy> > OLD:> all segment lists in all candidate paths of an SR policy> NEW:> all segment lists in all candidate paths of an SR Policy> > OLD:> When a PSID is used to identify some segment lists in a candidate path or an SR policy> NEW:> When a PSID is used to identify some segment lists in a candidate path or an SR Policy> > One more thing, in the IANA section, I propose a change as below.> OLD:> The Standards Action [RFC8126] range that requires an error message to be returned if the sub-TLV is not recognized (range 0-16383) should be used> NEW:> The Standards Action [RFC8126] range that requires an error message to be returned if the sub-TLV is not recognized (range 0-16383) has been used> > Cheers,> Xiao Min> Original> From: MeganFerguson <[email protected]> > To: 肖敏10093570 > Cc: RFC Editor <[email protected]>彭少富[email protected] <[email protected]>[email protected] <[email protected]>[email protected] <[email protected]>[email protected] <[email protected]>[email protected] <[email protected]>[email protected] <[email protected]>James Guichard <[email protected]>[email protected] <[email protected]>> Date: 2025年10月24日 23:10 > Subject: Re: [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9884 <draft-ietf-mpls-spring-lsp-ping-path-sid-13> for your review > Thanks, Xiao Min!> > We have folded in these changes as requested.> > As a few updates requested in AUTH48 have now affected the following terms, we would like to request a re-review to ensure/confirm they appear as desired throughout (e.g., perhaps they should be lowercase everywhere except in the sub-TLV or TLV names?).> > > a) We see mixed use of the following forms. Please let us know if/how these should be made consistent.> > > > SR path vs. SR Path> > segment-list vs. Segment List vs. segment list> > candidate path vs. Candidate Path vs. Candidate path> > Please review the files carefully as we do not make changes after publication.> > The files have been posted here (please refresh):> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9884.txt> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9884.pdf> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9884.html> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9884.xml> > The relevant diff files have been posted here (please refresh):> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9884-diff.html (comprehensive diff)> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9884-rfcdiff.html (comprehensive side by side)> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9884-auth48diff.html (AUTH48 changes only)> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9884-auth48rfcdiff.html (AUTH48 side by side)> > The AUTH48 status page for this document is available here:> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9884> > Thank you.> > Megan Ferguson> RFC Production Center> > > On Oct 23, 2025, at 8:23 PM, [email protected] wrote:> > > > Hi Megan,> > > > Thank you for the update. Your new text looks good to me.> > Following the text change, I propose two more editorial changes as below.> > OLD:> > When a PSID is used to identify a Segment List, the Target FEC> > > > NEW:> > When a PSID is used to identify a single segment list, the Target FEC> > > > OLD:> > When a PSID is used to identify some segment lists in a Candidate path or an SR policy, the Target FEC> > > > NEW:> > When a PSID is used to identify some segment lists in a candidate path or an SR policy, the Target FEC> > > > Cheers,> > Xiao Min> > Original> > From: MeganFerguson <[email protected]> > > To: 肖敏10093570 > > Cc: RFC Editor <[email protected]>彭少富[email protected] <[email protected]>[email protected] <[email protected]>[email protected] <[email protected]>[email protected] <[email protected]>[email protected] <[email protected]>[email protected] <[email protected]>James Guichard <[email protected]>[email protected] <[email protected]>> > Date: 2025年10月24日 00:59 > > Subject: Re: [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9884 <draft-ietf-mpls-spring-lsp-ping-path-sid-13> for your review > > Hi Xiao Min,> > > > Your list was really helpful in explaining your intent — thank you! Perhaps using something similar in the text would be most clear to readers? What do you think about using the following?> > > > Original:> > As specified in Section 2 of [RFC9545], a PSID is used to identify a> > segment list, some or all segment lists in a Candidate path or an SR> > policy, so six different Target FEC Stack sub-TLVs need to be defined> > for PSID. > > > > Current:> > > > As specified in Section 2 of [RFC9545], a PSID is used to identify> > the following:> > > > * a single segment list, some segment lists, or all segment lists in> > a candidate path of an SR policy,> > > > * some segment lists across multiple candidate paths of an SR> > policy, or> > > > * all segment lists in all candidate paths of an SR policy.> > > > Therefore, six different Target FEC Stack sub-TLVs need to be defined> > for PSID. > > > > If you’d prefer something else, please let us know. We’ve included the above in the files posted. Please review the files carefully as we do not make changes after publication.> > > > The files have been posted here (please refresh):> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9884.txt> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9884.pdf> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9884.html> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9884.xml> > > > The relevant diff files have been posted here (please refresh):> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9884-diff.html (comprehensive diff)> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9884-rfcdiff.html (comprehensive side by side)> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9884-auth48diff.html (AUTH48 changes only)> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9884-auth48rfcdiff.html (AUTH48 side by side)> > > > The AUTH48 status page for this document is available here:> > > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9884> > > > Thank you.> > > > Megan Ferguson> > RFC Production Center> > > > > On Oct 22, 2025, at 8:01 PM, [email protected] wrote:> > > > > > Hi Megan,> > > > > > Thank you for the prompt response.> > > Please see inline.> > > Original> > > From: MeganFerguson <[email protected]> > > > To: 肖敏10093570 > > > Cc: RFC Editor <[email protected]>彭少富[email protected] <[email protected]>[email protected] <[email protected]>[email protected] <[email protected]>[email protected] <[email protected]>[email protected] <[email protected]>[email protected] <[email protected]>[email protected] <[email protected]>[email protected] <[email protected]>> > > Date: 2025年10月23日 09:24 > > > Subject: Re: [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9884 <draft-ietf-mpls-spring-lsp-ping-path-sid-13> for your review > > > Xiao Min,> > > > > > Thanks for pointing this out. > > > > > > We have incorporated this change into the existing files. Please note that we added a further comma to the original to make a list of three (i.e., a PSID identifies 1) a segment list, 2) some or all segment lists in a Candidate path, or 3) an SR policy). Please confirm that this is your intended meaning. Please also confirm that Candidate path (and not Candidate Path) is correct here.> > > [XM]>>> If the original text is deemed not clear enough, then I propose to change the text as below.> > > OLD:> > > a PSID is used to identify a segment list, some or all segment lists in a Candidate path or an SR policy,> > > NEW:> > > a PSID is used to identify a segment list, some segment lists, or all segment lists, in a candidate path or an SR policy,> > > The intended meaning is to cover a list of five as follows:> > > * a segment list in a candidate path of an SR policy> > > * some segment lists in a candidate path of an SR policy> > > * all segment lists in a candidate path of an SR policy> > > * some segment lists across multiple candidate paths of an SR policy> > > * all segment lists in all candidate paths of an SR policy> > > Also note that in the NEW text "candidate path" is used to substitute "Candidate path".> > > > > > Cheers,> > > Xiao Min> > > > > > Please review the files carefully as we do not make changes after publication.> > > > > > The files have been posted here (please refresh):> > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9884.txt> > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9884.pdf> > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9884.html> > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9884.xml> > > > > > The relevant diff files have been posted here (please refresh):> > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9884-diff.html (comprehensive diff)> > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9884-rfcdiff.html (comprehensive side by side)> > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9884-auth48diff.html (AUTH48 changes only)> > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9884-auth48rfcdiff.html (AUTH48 side by side)> > > > > > The AUTH48 status page for this document is available here:> > > > > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9884> > > > > > Thank you.> > > > > > Megan Ferguson> > > RFC Production Center> > > > > > > On Oct 21, 2025, at 9:43 PM, [email protected] wrote:> > > > > > > > Hi Megan,> > > > > > > > Thank you for the update.> > > > Just one point I might be not clear enough in my response. Copy it here.> > > > > 5) <!--[rfced] Please review our following update and let us know any> > > > > objections.> > > > > > > > > > Original:> > > > > As specified in Section 2 of [RFC9545], a PSID is used to identify a> > > > > segment list, some or all segment lists in a Candidate path or an SR> > > > > policy, so six different Target FEC Stack sub-TLVs need to be defined> > > > > for PSID. > > > > > > > > > > Current:> > > > > As specified in Section 2 of [RFC9545], a PSID is used to identify a> > > > > segment list and/or some or all segment lists in a Candidate path or an SR> > > > > policy, so six different Target FEC Stack sub-TLVs need to be defined> > > > > for PSID. > > > > > --> > > > > > [XM]>>> Here "a segment list" is also in a Candidate path or an SR policy, so "and/or" seems inappropriate.> > > > My thought was that I prefer to remain the original text as is.> > > > > > > > Cheers,> > > > Xiao Min> > > > Original> > > > From: MeganFerguson <[email protected]> > > > > To: 肖敏10093570 > > > > Cc: RFC Editor <[email protected]>彭少富[email protected] <[email protected]>[email protected] <[email protected]>[email protected] <[email protected]>[email protected] <[email protected]>[email protected] <[email protected]>[email protected] <[email protected]>[email protected] <[email protected]>[email protected] <[email protected]>> > > > Date: 2025年10月22日 09:44 > > > > Subject: Re: [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9884 <draft-ietf-mpls-spring-lsp-ping-path-sid-13> for your review > > > > Hi Xiao Min,> > > > > > > > Thank you for your guidance and careful review. (Thanks to James, Adrian, and Carlos for your replies as well!)> > > > > > > > We have updated accordingly.> > > > > > > > Please review the files carefully as we do not make changes after publication. > > > > > > > > The files have been posted here (please refresh):> > > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9884.txt> > > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9884.pdf> > > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9884.html> > > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9884.xml> > > > > > > > The relevant diff files have been posted here (please refresh):> > > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9884-diff.html (comprehensive diff)> > > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9884-rfcdiff.html (comprehensive side by side)> > > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9884-auth48diff.html (AUTH48 changes only)> > > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9884-auth48rfcdiff.html (AUTH48 side by side)> > > > > > > > Please contact us with any further updates/questions/comments you may have. > > > > > > > > We will await approvals from each of the parties listed on the AUTH48 status page prior to moving forward to publication. > > > > > > > > The AUTH48 status page for this document is available here:> > > > > > > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9884> > > > > > > > Thank you.> > > > > > > > RFC Editor/mf> > > > > > > > > On Oct 21, 2025, at 5:35 AM, [email protected] wrote:> > > > > > > > > > Hi Megan,> > > > > > > > > > Many thanks for your efforts.> > > > > Please see inline.> > > > > Original> > > > > From: [email protected] <[email protected]> > > > > > To: 肖敏10093570彭少富[email protected] <[email protected]>[email protected] <[email protected]>[email protected] <[email protected]> > > > > > Cc: [email protected] <[email protected]>[email protected] <[email protected]>[email protected] <[email protected]>[email protected] <[email protected]>[email protected] <[email protected]>[email protected] <[email protected]>> > > > > Date: 2025年10月21日 11:20 > > > > > Subject: Re: [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9884 <draft-ietf-mpls-spring-lsp-ping-path-sid-13> for your review > > > > > Authors and *AD,> > > > > > > > > > While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as necessary) the following questions, which are also in the source file.> > > > > > > > > > 1) <!--[rfced] Please note that we have updated the title as follows (to> > > > > include articles).> > > > > > > > > > Original Document Title:> > > > > Label Switched Path Ping for Segment Routing Path Segment Identifier> > > > > with MPLS Data Plane> > > > > > > > > > Current:> > > > > A Label Switched Path Ping for the Segment Routing Path Segment Identifier> > > > > with an MPLS Data Plane> > > > > --> > > > > > [XM]>>> I prefer to remain the original document title as is, because we already have RFCs as below.> > > > > RFC 8287: Label Switched Path (LSP) Ping/Traceroute for Segment Routing (SR) IGP-Prefix and IGP-Adjacency Segment Identifiers (SIDs) with MPLS Data Planes> > > > > RFC 9703: Label Switched Path (LSP) Ping/Traceroute for Segment Routing (SR) Egress Peer Engineering (EPE) Segment Identifiers (SIDs) with MPLS Data Plane> > > > > > > > > > 2) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that appear in> > > > > the title) for use on https://www.rfc-editor.org/search. --> > > > > > [XM]>>> Target FEC Stack, PSID.> > > > > > > > > > 3) <!--[rfced] Please review the use of the two citations in the sentence> > > > > below. RFC 8029 is "Detecting Multiprotocol Label Switched> > > > > (MPLS) Data-Plane Failures" while RFC 8287 is "Label Switched> > > > > Path (LSP) Ping/Traceroute for Segment Routing (SR) IGP-Prefix> > > > > and IGP-Adjacency Segment Identifiers (SIDs) with MPLS Data> > > > > Planes".> > > > > > > > > > Original:> > > > > Procedure for LSP Ping [RFC8029] as defined in Section 7.4 of> > > > > [RFC8287] is also applicable to PSID, and this document appends> > > > > existing step 4a with a new step 4b specific to PSID.> > > > > --> > > > > > [XM]>>> That39s fine. RFC 8029 is the base spec for LSP Ping, which is extended by both RFC 8287 and this document for SR scenarios.> > > > > > > > > > 4) <!--[rfced] *ADs - Please confirm that no "Updates" relationship to> > > > > RFC 8287 should be indicated in the header/Abstract/metadata of the> > > > > document with the following text (and all of Section 4.1) in> > > > > mind:> > > > > > > > > > Original:> > > > > Procedure for LSP Ping [RFC8029] as defined in Section 7.4 of> > > > > [RFC8287] is also applicable to PSID, and this document appends> > > > > existing step 4a with a new step 4b specific to PSID.> > > > > --> > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > 5) <!--[rfced] Please review our following update and let us know any> > > > > objections.> > > > > > > > > > Original:> > > > > As specified in Section 2 of [RFC9545], a PSID is used to identify a> > > > > segment list, some or all segment lists in a Candidate path or an SR> > > > > policy, so six different Target FEC Stack sub-TLVs need to be defined> > > > > for PSID. > > > > > > > > > > Current:> > > > > As specified in Section 2 of [RFC9545], a PSID is used to identify a> > > > > segment list and/or some or all segment lists in a Candidate path or an SR> > > > > policy, so six different Target FEC Stack sub-TLVs need to be defined> > > > > for PSID. > > > > > --> > > > > > [XM]>>> Here "a segment list" is also in a Candidate path or an SR policy, so "and/or" seems inappropriate.> > > > > > > > > > 6) <!--[rfced] Please review the following uses of "PSID FEC Stack> > > > > sub-TLV" and "malformed FEC Stack sub-TLV". Other uses of "FEC> > > > > Stack sub-TLV" begin with "Target".> > > > > > > > > > Original:> > > > > ....validity checks on the content of the PSID FEC Stack sub-TLV.> > > > > > > > > > and> > > > > > > > > > If a malformed FEC Stack sub-TLV is received...> > > > > > > > > > Perhaps:> > > > > ....validity checks on the content of the PSID Target FEC Stack sub-TLV.> > > > > > > > > > and> > > > > > > > > > If a malformed Target FEC Stack sub-TLV is received...> > > > > [XM]>>> OK.> > > > > --> > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > 7) <!--[rfced] Please confirm that the following are the general concepts> > > > > and not field names (note that these are examples, more instances> > > > > occur):> > > > > > > > > > Original:> > > > > * Validate that the signaled or provisioned headend, color,> > > > > and endpoint, for the PSID, matches with the corresponding> > > > > fields in the received SR Policy Associated PSID - IPv4 sub-> > > > > TLV.> > > > > > > > > > Perhaps:> > > > > * Validate that the signaled or provisioned Headend, Color,> > > > > and Endpoint fields for the PSID match with the corresponding> > > > > fields in the received SR Policy Associated PSID - IPv4 sub-TLV.> > > > > > > > > > > > > > > Original:> > > > > * Validate that the signaled or provisioned headend, color,> > > > > endpoint, originator, and discriminator, for the PSID,> > > > > matches with the corresponding fields in the received SR> > > > > Candidate Path Associated PSID - IPv4 sub-TLV.> > > > > > > > > > Perhaps:> > > > > * Validate that the signaled or provisioned Headend, Color,> > > > > Endpoint, Originator, and Discriminator fields for the PSID> > > > > match with the corresponding fields in the received SR> > > > > Candidate Path Associated PSID - IPv4 sub-TLV.> > > > > [XM]>>> They are the general concepts and not field names, so no changes needed.> > > > > --> > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > 8) <!--[rfced] Please note that we have updated the reference to> > > > > draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-sr-policy-17 to point to the RFC-to-be: as> > > > > this I-D is currently in AUTH48 (with nearly all approvals> > > > > complete), we assume it will move to publication prior to the> > > > > publication of this document.> > > > > > > > > > Please let us know how you would like to proceed if RFC-to-be 9857 is> > > > > not published before this document (i.e., return to the I-D form of> > > > > the reference or wait for the publication of 9857). --> > > > > > [XM]>>> Return to the I-D form of the reference.> > > > > > > > > > 9) <!--[rfced] We had the following questions/comments related to> > > > > abbreviation use throughout the document:> > > > > > > > > > a) Please note that abbreviations have been expanded upon first use. Please review and confirm all expansions inserted appear as desired.> > > > > [XM]>>> OK.> > > > > b) Please note that we will update to use the following abbreviations, instead of their expanded forms, after the first use in accordance with https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#exp_abbrev:> > > > > SR> > > > > PSID> > > > > [XM]>>> OK.> > > > > --> > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > 10) <!--[rfced] We had the following questions related to terminology used throughout the document:> > > > > > > > > > a) We see mixed use of the following forms. Please let us know if/how these should be made consistent.> > > > > > > > > > SR path vs. SR Path> > > > > segment-list vs. Segment List vs. segment list> > > > > candidate path vs. Candidate Path vs. Candidate path> > > > > [XM]>>> In my opinion it39s not necessary to make them consistent, because the contexts are different.> > > > > > > > > > b) Is Return Subcode <RSC> the same as "return code"? Please review> > > > > and advise if these should be made uniform.> > > > > [XM]>>> No, they39re different. Both of them are defined in RFC 8029.> > > > > --> > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > 11) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the> > > > > online Style Guide> > > > > <https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language> > > > > > and let us know if any changes are needed. Updates of this> > > > > nature typically result in more precise language, which is> > > > > helpful for readers.> > > > > > > > > > Note that our script did not flag any words in particular, but this> > > > > should still be reviewed as a best practice.> > > > > --> > > > > > [XM]>>> No issues found.> > > > > > > > > > [XM]>>> I propose five editorial changes as below.> > > > > > > > > > Section #2.2> > > > > > > > > > OLD:> > > > > (Section 5.2 of [PCE-MULTIPATH])> > > > > > > > > > NEW:> > > > > (Section 4.2 of [PCE-MULTIPATH])> > > > > > > > > > Section #3.4> > > > > > > > > > OLD:> > > > > as an SR Policy Associated PSID - IPv6 Sub-TLV> > > > > > > > > > NEW:> > > > > as an SR Policy Associated PSID - IPv6 sub-TLV> > > > > > > > > > Section #4> > > > > > > > > > OLD:> > > > > receive an echo request and sends an echo reply> > > > > > > > > > NEW:> > > > > receive an echo request and send an echo reply> > > > > > > > > > Section #4.1> > > > > > > > > > OLD:> > > > > (the notation <RSC> refers to the Return Subcode)> > > > > > > > > > COMMENT:> > > > > the same text appears twice, please delete the second one> > > > > > > > > > Section #4.1> > > > > > > > > > OLD:> > > > > and segment-list-id, for the PSID> > > > > > > > > > NEW:> > > > > and segment-list-id for the PSID> > > > > > > > > > Cheers,> > > > > Xiao Min> > > > > > > > > > > > > > > Thank you.> > > > > > > > > > Megan Ferguson> > > > > RFC Production Center> > > > > > > > > > *****IMPORTANT*****> > > > > > > > > > Updated 2025/10/20> > > > > > > > > > RFC Author(s):> > > > > --------------> > > > > > > > > > Instructions for Completing AUTH48> > > > > > > > > > Your document has now entered AUTH48. 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