Hi Sarah, Answers in line.
Phil [email protected] > On Oct 28, 2025, at 6:36 AM, Sarah Tarrant <[email protected]> > wrote: > > Hello all, > > I've updated our files to version -15. > > We are still awaiting answers to the intake form -- so I've pasted them here > for ease of access. > > Thank you, > Sarah Tarrant > RFC Production Center > > ------ > 1) As there may have been multiple updates made to the document during Last > Call, > please review the current version of the document: > > * Is the text in the Abstract still accurate? > * Are the Authors' Addresses, Contributors, and Acknowledgments > sections current? <PH> Yes. > > > 2) Please share any style information that could help us with editing your > document. For example: > > * Is your document's format or its terminology based on another document? > If so, please provide a pointer to that document (e.g., this document's > terminology should match DNS terminology in RFC 9499). > * Is there a pattern of capitalization or formatting of terms? (e.g., field > names > should have initial capitalization; parameter names should be in double > quotes; > <tt/> should be used for token names; etc.) <PH> In draft 15, most <tt/> values where swapped out for quotations to keep the txt version of the draft clear. The draft indicates where there is case-sensitivity for URNs, values, or parameters. The draft builds on principles established in RFC7643, RFC7644, RFC8417. In particular, per RFC8417, events are not to be perceived as commands issued by a publisher to a receiver. Rather they are intended to be informative. It is up to the receiver to decide how to use the information provided based on local context. This is explained, but this type of inversion of control may not be obvious enough to the reader. In this sense, with the exception of SCIM Asynchronous requests, SCIM Events are just intended to be event type definitions only. > > > 3) Please review the entries in the References section carefully with > the following in mind. Note that we will update as follows unless we > hear otherwise at this time: > > * References to obsoleted RFCs will be updated to point to the current > RFC on the topic in accordance with Section 4.8.6 of RFC 7322 > (RFC Style Guide). > > * References to I-Ds that have been replaced by another I-D will be > updated to point to the replacement I-D. > > * References to documents from other organizations that have been > superseded will be updated to their superseding version. > > Note: To check for outdated RFC and I-D references, you can use > idnits <https://author-tools.ietf.org/idnits>. You can also help the > IETF Tools Team by testing idnits3 <https://author-tools.ietf.org/idnits3/> > with your document and reporting any issues to them. <PH> The draft should be current for references. The idnits tool reports only inconsequential line length issues on some figures. > > > 4) Is there any text that should be handled extra cautiously? For example, > are > there any sections that were contentious when the document was drafted? <PH> I don’t think there is anything left. We ended up cutting out a section on “signals” which was seen to be duplicative with Open Id Foundation Shared Signals specs. I think we have any last remnants removed. > > > 5) Is there anything else that the RPC should be aware of while editing this > document? <PH> The appendix contains non-normative explanation about how various events can be used to accomplish a couple forms of replication. This is offered to demonstrate events are used in practice in an inversion of control scenario. > > > 6) This document uses one or more of the following text styles. > Are these elements used consistently? > > * fixed width font (<tt/> or `) > * italics (<em/> or *) > * bold (<strong/> or **) > <PH> These elements were avoided to keep the normative .txt version clearer. Draft 15 removed all but one <tt/>, italics and bold are not used. > > 7) This document contains sourcecode in Section 7.3: > > * Does the sourcecode validate? > * Some sourcecode types (e.g., YANG) require certain references and/or text > in the Security Considerations section. Is this information correct? > * Is the sourcecode type indicated in the XML? <PH> I am not aware of any source code. We just have JSON structures. Section 7.3 is the IANA Events URI Sub-registry. > > > 8) This document contains SVG. What tool did you use to make the svg? > > The RPC cannot update SVG diagrams, so please ensure that: > > * the SVG figures match the ASCII art used in the text output as closely as > possible, and > * the figures fit on the pages of the PDF output. <PH> AFAIK, the SVG diagrams have been removed or can be removed in favor of the supplied ASCII art. > > > 9) Because this document updates RFCs 7643 and 7644, please review > the reported errata and confirm whether they have been addressed in this > document or are not relevant: > > * RFC 7643 (https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/rfc7643) > * RFC 7644 (https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/rfc7644) > <PH> I am in the process now. However these errata won’t be relevant because SCIM Events represents new functionality. The only intersection is SCIM Events often represent SCIM create, update, patch, delete messages in SET form. > 10) Would you like to participate in the RPC Pilot Test for editing in > kramdown-rfc? > If so, please let us know and provide a self-contained kramdown-rfc file. For > more > information about this experiment, see: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=pilot_test_kramdown_rfc. <PH> The current drafts are not based on kramdown format so we should probably stick with RFCXML. > >> On Oct 23, 2025, at 11:05 AM, Deb Cooley <[email protected]> wrote: >> >> yell at me if you need me to do it (and send me the .xml file). We are in >> the I-D cutoff time. >> >> Deb >> >> On Thu, Oct 23, 2025 at 11:33 AM Phillip Hunt <[email protected]> >> wrote: >> Hi Sarah, >> >> I can make the changes. Just submit 15 as normal then? >> >> Phil >> >>> On Oct 23, 2025, at 7:13 AM, Sarah Tarrant <[email protected]> >>> wrote: >>> >>> Hi Phil, >>> >>> You are correct about the <tt> tags not having any effect on the .txt >>> output. Perhaps using quotation marks in place of or in addition to the >>> <tt> tags would help with the .txt output? That would also affect the .html >>> and .pdf outputs, but then all outputs could be consistent. >>> >>> If you do decide to make these changes, we suggest submitting a new version >>> to the datatracker with those updates so that it is clear where that change >>> originated. >>> >>> Sincerely, >>> Sarah Tarrant >>> RFC Production Center >>> >>>> On Oct 21, 2025, at 5:07 PM, Phillip Hunt <[email protected]> >>>> wrote: >>>> >>>> Hi Sarah, >>>> >>>> Thanks for the note. >>>> >>>> The biggest issue will be consistent use of <tt> for code values. >>>> >>>> I was finding it was causing confusion in the .txt version as there is no >>>> font change, bolding, or quotations. >>>> >>>> What is the current recommendation? I can revise based on usage >>>> recommendations. >>>> >>>> As for errata, these are not part of the document and should be dealt with >>>> separately. 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