Authors and *AD, [*AD - please review question 2 below.]
Thank you for your replies to our queries and sending along the further edits. We have updated accordingly, but had the following questions/issues to resolve: 1) Looking at this note: > - IMPORTANT: The "encapsulated option" definition (section 4.2) references > section 21.5 (IA_TA) which should be 21.4 (IA_NA). We see in the reply to our queries, you had suggested a related update: > 4) <!-- [rfced] The following citation may require clarification: > > Current: > A DHCP option that is usually only contained in another option. For > example, the IA Address option is contained in IA_NA options (see > Section 21.5). See Section 9 of [RFC7227] for a more complete > definition. > > Section 21.5 is about the "IA_TA" option, rather than the "IA_NA" > option. Note: Section 21.6 is about the "IA Address Option". > --> > > AUTHORS: The text should reference section 21.4. Hence: > > Perhaps: > A DHCP option that is usually only contained in another option. For > example, the IA Address option is contained in IA_NA options (see > Sections 21.6 and 21.4, respectively). See Section 9 of [RFC7227] for a > more complete > definition. Please review and let us know which section(s) should be cited (i.e., 21.6 and 21.4 or 21.4 only). 2) *AD, please review and approve the following change to Section 21.12: > - IMPORTANT: In section 21.12 Server Unicast Option we likely added "The > client SHOULD NOT request this option in the Option Request option." But I > wonder whether we should remove this as a client was NEVER supposed to > request it anyway (3315/8415). Perhaps we should say: > > OLD: > > The client SHOULD NOT request this option in the Option Request > option. The server SHOULD NOT send this option, even when requested > by clients. When any entity receives the Server Unicast option, the > option SHOULD be ignored and the message processing should continue > as usual. > > As this option was not very popular, and it typically required > special configuration by those server implementations that did support > it, clients still requesting this option in the Option Request option > are increasingly unlikely to receive it. > > NEW: > > The server SHOULD NOT send this option. When any entity receives the > Server Unicast option, the option SHOULD be ignored and the message > processing should continue as usual. > > Note: This deletes the second paragraph as it is wrong (clients don't request > in ORO) and it really doesn't add to what is already in the document. 3) Regarding: > - MAJOR: Appendix B, Table 4 ... several asterisks are in the wrong place: Apologies for these getting garbled! We have updated as requested and reviewed the other tables in the appendices to make sure they appear as in the original. 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The AUTH48 status page for this document is available here: https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9915 Thank you. RFC Editor/mf > On Dec 9, 2025, at 3:55 AM, Bernie Volz <[email protected]> wrote: > > The Authors also have the following additional comments and concerns > regarding the RFC9915 “draft” review: > > - IMPORTANT: The "encapsulated option" definition (section 4.2) references > section 21.5 (IA_TA) which should be 21.4 (IA_NA). > > - IMPORTANT: Section 21.1 references 21.5 when it no longer needs to as IA_TA > has been deprecated. So, I think we should remove it. Note: checked all other > references to 21.5 and they are appropriate. > > - MINOR: In section 4.2, we wonder if "IA option(s)" definition needs > "options"? "In this document, one or more IA_NA, IA_TA (obsoleted), and/or > IA_PD [options]. ..."? > > - IMPORTANT: In section 21.12 Server Unicast Option we likely added "The > client SHOULD NOT request this option in the Option Request option." But I > wonder whether we should remove this as a client was NEVER supposed to > request it anyway (3315/8415). Perhaps we should say: > > OLD: > > The client SHOULD NOT request this option in the Option Request > option. The server SHOULD NOT send this option, even when requested > by clients. When any entity receives the Server Unicast option, the > option SHOULD be ignored and the message processing should continue > as usual. > > As this option was not very popular, and it typically required > special configuration by those server implementations that did support > it, clients still requesting this option in the Option Request option > are increasingly unlikely to receive it. > > NEW: > > The server SHOULD NOT send this option. When any entity receives the > Server Unicast option, the option SHOULD be ignored and the message > processing should continue as usual. > > Note: This deletes the second paragraph as it is wrong (clients don't request > in ORO) and it really doesn't add to what is already in the document. > > - MINOR: At the end of Section 22(.0), the text has "and limiting the number > of messages a single client can transmit of a period of time.", which seems a > bit odd. Wonder whether we should say "in a period of time"? (Auto suggested > is "for a period of time", but we think "in" is better?) > > - MAJOR: Appendix B, Table 4 ... several asterisks are in the wrong place: > > OLD: > > > Client ID > Server ID > IA_NA > IA_PD > ORO > Pref > Elap. Time > Relay Msg. > Auth. > Solicit > * > > * > * > * > > * > > > Advert. > * > * > * > * > > * > > > > Request > * > * > * > * > * > > * > > > Confirm > * > > * > > > > * > > > Renew > * > * > * > * > * > * > * > > > Rebind > * > > * > * > * > > * > > > Decline > * > * > * > * > > > * > > > Release > * > * > * > * > > > * > > > Reply > * > * > * > * > > > > > * > Reconf > * > * > > > > > > > * > Inform. > * > (see note) > > > * > > * > > > R-forw. > > > > > > > > > * > R-repl. > > > > > > > > > * > > New: > > > Client ID > Server ID > IA_NA > IA_PD > ORO > Pref > Elap. Time > Relay Msg. > Auth. > Solicit > * > > * > * > * > > * > > > Advert. > * > * > * > * > > * > > > > Request > * > * > * > * > * > > * > > > Confirm > * > > * > > > > * > > > Renew > * > * > * > * > * > > * > > > Rebind > * > > * > * > * > > * > > > Decline > * > * > * > * > > > * > > > Release > * > * > * > * > > > * > > > Reply > * > * > * > * > > > > > * > Reconf > * > * > > > > > > > * > Inform. > * > (see note) > > > * > > * > > > R-forw. > > > > > > > > * > > R-repl. > > > > > > > > * > > > Basically, for Renew (remove Perf option), R-forw. (add Relay Msg. and remove > Auth), and R-Repl. (add Relay Msg. and remove Auth). > > Thanks much! > >> On Nov 24, 2025, at 7:55 PM, [email protected] wrote: >> >> *****IMPORTANT***** >> >> Updated 2025/11/24 >> >> RFC Author(s): >> -------------- >> >> Instructions for Completing AUTH48 >> >> Your document has now entered AUTH48. 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