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While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as necessary) the
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1) <!--[rfced] Regarding the title, even though "PCEPS" is explained in the
abstract, please consider updating the title so that at least "PCEP" is
expanded.
Original:
Updates for PCEPS: TLS Connection Establishment Restrictions
Perhaps:
Updates to the Usage of TLS to Provide a Secure Transport for the
Path Computation Element Communication Protocol (PCEP)
Or:
TLS Connection Establishment Restrictions for the Secure Transport of
the Path Computation Element Communication Protocol (PCEP)
For comparison, here's the title of RFC 8253:
PCEPS: Usage of TLS to Provide a Secure Transport for the
Path Computation Element Communication Protocol (PCEP)
-->
2) <!--[rfced] May we clarify the citation to RFC 9325 by adding "TLS/DTLS
recommendations" to the sentence below?
Original:
The Security Considerations of PCEP [RFC5440], [RFC8231], [RFC8253],
[RFC8281], and [RFC8283]; TLS 1.2 [RFC5246]; TLS 1.3
[I-D.ietf-tls-rfc8446bis], and; [RFC9325] apply here as well.
Perhaps:
The security considerations of PCEP [RFC5440] [RFC8231] [RFC8253]
[RFC8281] [RFC8283], TLS 1.2 [RFC5246], TLS 1.3 [RFC9846],
and TLS/DTLS recommendations [RFC9325] apply here as well.
-->
3) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the online
Style Guide <https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language>
and let us know if any changes are needed. Updates of this nature typically
result in more precise language, which is helpful for readers.
Note that our script did not flag any words in particular, but this should
still be reviewed as a best practice.
-->
Thank you.
Alanna Paloma and Alice Russo
RFC Production Center
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RFC9916 (draft-ietf-pce-pceps-tls13-04)
Title : Updates for PCEPS: TLS Connection Establishment Restrictions
Author(s) : D. Dhody, S. Turner, R. Housley
WG Chair(s) : Julien Meuric, Dhruv Dhody
Area Director(s) : Jim Guichard, Ketan Talaulikar, Gunter Van de Velde
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