These changes all look great to me (some really nice catches in here too, 
fwiw). Thank you all for working on this draft!

> On Jan 21, 2026, at 8:32 AM, Sean Turner <[email protected]> wrote:
> 
> Okay on to the detailed review - co-authors please double check:
> 
> 1) s3.1.1: There is no “RequestList” it’s “requestList”
> 
> OLD:
> OCSPRequest.RequestList
> NEW:
> OCSPRequest.requestList
> 2) s3.2.1: bump dash
> OLD:
>    ... the id-
>    pkix-ocsp-basic OID.
> NEW:
>    ... the
>    id-pkix-ocsp-basic OID.
> 
> 3) s3.2.1: use elements instead of SingleResponses
> OLD:
> two SingleResponses in a BasicOCSPResponse
> NEW:
> two SingleResponse elements in a BasicOCSPResponse
> OLD:
> the CertID of one of the SingleResponses uses
> NEW:
> the CertID of one of the SingleResponse structures uses
> 4) s3.2.1: Refer to correct extension structure
> OLD:
>   The responder MAY include the singleResponse.singleResponse
>    extensions structure.
> NEW:
>   The responder MAY include the SingleResponse.SingleExtensions
>    extensions structure.
> 5) s3.2.3: Do we still extend the definition of unauthorized?
> 
> In 5019, the definition of unauthorized was extended. RFC 6960 was updated to 
> match the definitions in RFC 5019. So can we drop this bit of text:
>   As such, this profile extends
>    the [RFC6960] definition of "unauthorized" as follows:
> 
>    The response "unauthorized" is returned in cases where the client is
>    not authorized to make this query to this responder or the responder
>    is not capable of responding authoritatively.
> 6) s8.2: rename title
> 
> OLD:
> 
> 8.2.  Man-in-the-Middle Attacks
> NEW:
> 8.2.  On-Path Attacks
> 
> Cheers,
> spt
> 
>> On Jan 21, 2026, at 10:48, Alanna Paloma <[email protected]> 
>> wrote:
>> 
>> Hi Sean and Clint,
>> 
>> Thank you for confirming those two remaining questions. We have updated the 
>> document accordingly.
>> 
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>> 
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>> 
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>> 
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>> 
>> Thank you,
>> Alanna Paloma
>> RFC Production Center
>> 
>>> On Jan 21, 2026, at 5:40 AM, Sean Turner <[email protected]> wrote:
>>> 
>>> Clint,
>>> 
>>> Thanks for confirming!
>>> 
>>> spt
>>> 
>>>> On Jan 20, 2026, at 17:39, Clint Wilson <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>> 
>>>> The proposed update for #9 seems correct to me. I don’t think it’s likely 
>>>> for the direct document link to become outdated in the foreseeable future 
>>>> (it appears to have been stable for at least several years).
>>>> 
>>>> Thank you!
>>>> -Clint
>>>> 
>>>>> On Jan 20, 2026, at 1:51 PM, Sean Turner <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>>> On Jan 20, 2026, at 14:58, Alanna Paloma <[email protected]> 
>>>>>> wrote:
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Hi Sean,
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Thank you for your reply.  We have updated as requested.
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Please note that we are awaiting for these two queries to be confirmed:
>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 9) <!-- [rfced]  We were unable to find a document directly matching 
>>>>>>>> the
>>>>>>>> title provided in the original reference. The URL provided goes to the
>>>>>>>> homepage for the Open Mobile Alliance. We did find the following URL,
>>>>>>>> which points to the OCSP Mobile Profile:
>>>>>>>> https://www.openmobilealliance.org/release/OCSP/V1_0-20040127-C/OMA-WAP-OCSP-V1_0-20040127-C.pdf
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> May we update this reference as follows?
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>>>> [OCSPMP]   Open Mobile Alliance, "OCSP Mobile Profile V1.0",
>>>>>>>>           www.openmobilealliance.org .
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>>>>> [OCSPMP] Open Mobile Alliance, "Online Certificate Status Protocol
>>>>>>>> Mobile Profile", Candidate Version V1.0, 27 January 2004,
>>>>>>>> <https://www.openmobilealliance.org/release/OCSP/V1_0-20040127-C/OMA-WAP-OCSP-V1_0-20040127-C.pdf>.
>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> I will defer to my co-authors on this one.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 10) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "type" attribute of each sourcecode 
>>>>>>>> element
>>>>>>>> in the XML file to ensure correctness. If the current list of preferred
>>>>>>>> values for "type"
>>>>>>>> (https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=sourcecode-types)
>>>>>>>> does not contain an applicable type, then feel free to let us know.
>>>>>>>> Also, it is acceptable to leave the "type" attribute not set.  
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> In addition, review each artwork element. Specifically,
>>>>>>>> should any artwork element be tagged as sourcecode or another
>>>>>>>> element? 
>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> I will put this on my to do list ;)
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> I was being sooo slow. I pulled the xml and the three ASN.1 code blocks 
>>>>> include the correct tag:
>>>>> 
>>>>> <sourcecode type="asn.1”>
>>>>> 
>>>>> I believe then we are awaiting my co-auhors response on #9!
>>>>> 
>>>>> spt
>>>>> 
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>>>>>> RFC Production Center
>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> On Jan 20, 2026, at 7:39 AM, Sean Turner <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Hi!
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> On Jan 16, 2026, at 13:46, [email protected] wrote:
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Authors,
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as 
>>>>>>>> necessary) the following questions, which are also in the source file.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 1) <!--[rfced] Please note the title of the document has been updated 
>>>>>>>> as
>>>>>>>> follows. Abbreviations have been expanded per Section 3.6 of RFC 7322
>>>>>>>> ("RFC Style Guide"). Please review.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>>>> Updates to Lightweight OCSP Profile for High Volume Environments
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Current:
>>>>>>>> Updates to the Lightweight Online Certificate Status Protocol (OCSP)
>>>>>>>> Profile for High Volume Environments
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Because this document will obsolete RFC 5019 (rather than update it), 
>>>>>>>> we 
>>>>>>>> suggest changing the title and abbreviated title as follows. Is this 
>>>>>>>> acceptable?
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>>>> Updates to Lightweight OCSP Profile for High Volume Environments
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Perhaps (same title as RFC 5019):
>>>>>>>> The Lightweight Online Certificate Status Protocol (OCSP) Profile
>>>>>>>> for High-Volume Environments
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Similarly, may the abbreviated title (which appears in the running 
>>>>>>>> header 
>>>>>>>> of the PDF) be updated as follows?
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>>>> Lightweight OCSP Profile Update
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>>>>> Lightweight OCSP Profile
>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Yes, since we’re obsoleting it there’s no need for the “Updates to” / 
>>>>>>> “Update” words.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 2) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that appear in
>>>>>>>> the title) for use on https://www.rfc-editor.org/search. -->
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Revocation
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 3) <!--[rfced] FYI, we changed "RECOMMENDS" to "is RECOMMENDED by" (2 
>>>>>>>> instances),
>>>>>>>> as "RECOMMENDED" is the defined keyword from BCP 14. This update 
>>>>>>>> allows using 
>>>>>>>> the <bcp14> element without warnings. We realize the original text 
>>>>>>>> matches 
>>>>>>>> RFC 5019. For example:                                               
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Original:                                                        
>>>>>>>> Clients SHOULD NOT include the requestExtensions structure. If a       
>>>>>>>>                     
>>>>>>>> requestExtensions structure is included, this profile RECOMMENDS that  
>>>>>>>>                        
>>>>>>>> it contain only the nonce extension (id-pkix-ocsp-nonce).              
>>>>>>>>                  
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Current:                                                         
>>>>>>>> Clients SHOULD NOT include the requestExtensions structure. If a       
>>>>>>>>                     
>>>>>>>> requestExtensions structure is included, it is RECOMMENDED by this     
>>>>>>>>                      
>>>>>>>> profile that the structure contain only the nonce extension (id-pkix-  
>>>>>>>>                        
>>>>>>>> ocsp-nonce).  
>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> WFM
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 4) <!--[rfced] Is this line within the sourcecode in Section 3.2.1
>>>>>>>> intended to be a comment within the sourcecode, or should it be
>>>>>>>> taken out of the sourcecode? (Note: This line exceeded the 72-character
>>>>>>>> limit so we included a line break within the sourcecode.)
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>>>> The value for response SHALL be the DER encoding of BasicOCSPResponse.
>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> This sentence should be taken out of the source code, so I guess that 
>>>>>>> means there’s two blocks of source code.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 5) <!--[rfced] May we update this sentence as follows to clarify that 
>>>>>>>> the 
>>>>>>>> protocol in [RFC5019] is backward compatible, rather than the RFC 
>>>>>>>> itself?
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>>>> Older responders which provide backward compatibility with [RFC5019]
>>>>>>>> MAY use the byName field to represent the ResponderID, but should
>>>>>>>> transition to using the byKey field as soon as practical.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>>>>> Older responders that provide backward compatibility with the protocol
>>>>>>>> defined in [RFC5019] MAY use the byName field to represent the 
>>>>>>>> ResponderID
>>>>>>>> but should transition to using the byKey field as soon as practical.
>>>>>>>> -->   
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Yes
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 6) <!--[rfced] We are having some trouble understanding how "server 
>>>>>>>> name and
>>>>>>>> base64-encoded OCSPRequest structure" fits into the sentence below. 
>>>>>>>> Please
>>>>>>>> review and let us know the sentence may be updated for clarity.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>>>> When sending requests that are less than or
>>>>>>>> equal to 255 bytes in total (after encoding) including the scheme and
>>>>>>>> delimiters (http://), server name and base64-encoded OCSPRequest
>>>>>>>> structure, clients MUST use the GET method (to enable OCSP response
>>>>>>>> caching). 
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>>>>> When sending requests that are less than or
>>>>>>>> equal to 255 bytes in total (after encoding), including the scheme and
>>>>>>>> delimiters (http://), server name, and base64-encoded OCSPRequest
>>>>>>>> structure, clients MUST use the GET method (to enable OCSP response
>>>>>>>> caching). 
>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> I think that’s right. The 255 bytes needs to include everything that is 
>>>>>>> listed there.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 7) <!--[rfced] Should "productedAt" be "producedAt" (no 't')?
>>>>>>>> Even though RFC 5019 contains one instance of "productedAt",
>>>>>>>> it contains seven instances of "producedAt". We note that other
>>>>>>>> RFCs also use "producedAt" (e.g., RFCs 9654, 6960, 5912).
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>>>> productedAt = March 19, 2023 01:00:00 GMT 
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Suggested:
>>>>>>>> producedAt = March 19, 2023 01:00:00 GMT 
>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> GREAT CATCH! 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Definitely needs to be “producedAt”!
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 8) <!--[rfced] May this sentence be updated as follows to avoid citing
>>>>>>>> RFC 9846 twice?
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>>>> This functionality has been specified as an extension to the TLS
>>>>>>>> [I-D.ietf-tls-rfc8446bis] protocol in Section 4.4.2 of
>>>>>>>> [I-D.ietf-tls-rfc8446bis], but can be applied to any client-server
>>>>>>>> protocol.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Current:
>>>>>>>> This functionality has been specified as an extension to the TLS
>>>>>>>> protocol [RFC9846] in Section 4.4.2 of [RFC9846] but can be applied
>>>>>>>> to any client-server protocol.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Option A:
>>>>>>>> This functionality has been specified as an extension to the TLS
>>>>>>>> protocol in Section 4.4.2 of [RFC9846] but can be applied
>>>>>>>> to any client-server protocol.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Option B:
>>>>>>>> In Section 4.4.2 of [RFC9846], this functionality has been specified 
>>>>>>>> as an extension to the TLS protocol, but it can be applied to any
>>>>>>>> client-server protocol.
>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> I prefer option A.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 9) <!-- [rfced]  We were unable to find a document directly matching 
>>>>>>>> the
>>>>>>>> title provided in the original reference. The URL provided goes to the
>>>>>>>> homepage for the Open Mobile Alliance. We did find the following URL,
>>>>>>>> which points to the OCSP Mobile Profile:
>>>>>>>> https://www.openmobilealliance.org/release/OCSP/V1_0-20040127-C/OMA-WAP-OCSP-V1_0-20040127-C.pdf
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> May we update this reference as follows?
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>>>> [OCSPMP]   Open Mobile Alliance, "OCSP Mobile Profile V1.0",
>>>>>>>>           www.openmobilealliance.org .
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>>>>> [OCSPMP] Open Mobile Alliance, "Online Certificate Status Protocol
>>>>>>>> Mobile Profile", Candidate Version V1.0, 27 January 2004,
>>>>>>>> <https://www.openmobilealliance.org/release/OCSP/V1_0-20040127-C/OMA-WAP-OCSP-V1_0-20040127-C.pdf>.
>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> I will defer to my co-authors on this one.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 10) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "type" attribute of each sourcecode 
>>>>>>>> element
>>>>>>>> in the XML file to ensure correctness. If the current list of preferred
>>>>>>>> values for "type"
>>>>>>>> (https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=sourcecode-types)
>>>>>>>> does not contain an applicable type, then feel free to let us know.
>>>>>>>> Also, it is acceptable to leave the "type" attribute not set.  
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> In addition, review each artwork element. Specifically,
>>>>>>>> should any artwork element be tagged as sourcecode or another
>>>>>>>> element? 
>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> I will put this on my to do list ;)
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 11) <!--[rfced] Should instances of "OCSP protocol" be updated to 
>>>>>>>> simply
>>>>>>>> "OCSP" to avoid redundancy (if expanded, "OCSP protocol" would read
>>>>>>>> "Online Certificate Status Protocol protocol")? Please review and let 
>>>>>>>> us
>>>>>>>> know if any updates are needed.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>>>> Future versions of the OCSP protocol may provide a way for the client
>>>>>>>> to know whether the responder supports nonces or does not support
>>>>>>>> nonces.
>>>>>>>> ...
>>>>>>>> The authors of this version of the document wish to thank Alex Deacon
>>>>>>>> and Ryan Hurst for their work to produce the original version of the
>>>>>>>> lightweight profile for the OCSP protocol.   
>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Yes please drop the extra “protocol” where appropriate.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 12) <!--[rfced] Abbreviations
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> a) Both the expansion and the acronym for the following term are used
>>>>>>>> throughout the document. Would you like to update to using the 
>>>>>>>> expansion upon
>>>>>>>> first usage and the acronym for the rest of the document?
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> certification authority (CA)
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> I am happy with that.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> b) We note that "AIA" has been expanded two different ways in the 
>>>>>>>> document.
>>>>>>>> Please review and let us know which version should be used for 
>>>>>>>> consistency.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> authorityInfoAccess (AIA) vs. authorityInformationAccess (AIA)
>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> So this is a bit weird maybe:
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> s3.2.2:
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> OLD:
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> authorityInfoAccess
>>>>>>> (AIA) extension nor cRLDistributionPoints (CRLDP) extension
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> NEW:
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> Authority Information Access
>>>>>>> (AIA) extension nor CRL Distribution Points (CRLDP) extension
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> S4.1:
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> OLD:
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> authorityInfoAccess extension
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> NEW:
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> AIA extension
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> OLD:
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> authorityInformationAccess (AIA) extension
>>>>>>> cRLDistributionPoints extension
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> NEW:
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> AIA extension
>>>>>>> CRLDP extension
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 13) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the 
>>>>>>>> online
>>>>>>>> Style Guide 
>>>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language>
>>>>>>>> and let us know if any changes are needed.  Updates of this nature 
>>>>>>>> typically
>>>>>>>> result in more precise language, which is helpful for readers.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> For example, please consider whether "man-in-the-middle" should be 
>>>>>>>> updated.
>>>>>>>> -->
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> I am fine with changing it to on-path if my co-authors are.
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>> spt
>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Thank you.
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Alanna Paloma and Alice Russo
>>>>>>>> RFC Production Center
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> On Jan 16, 2026, at 10:45 AM, [email protected] wrote:
>>>>>>>> 
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>>>>>>>> 
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>>>>>>>> 
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>>>>>>>> --------------------------------------
>>>>>>>> RFC9919 (draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5019bis-12)
>>>>>>>> 
>>>>>>>> Title            : Updates to Lightweight OCSP Profile for High Volume 
>>>>>>>> Environments
>>>>>>>> Author(s)        : T. Ito, C. Wilson, C. Bonnell, S. Turner
>>>>>>>> WG Chair(s)      : Russ Housley, Tim Hollebeek
>>>>>>>> Area Director(s) : Deb Cooley, Paul Wouters
>>>> 
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