Hi Alice,

You are correct: "updates" has a very specific meaning in RFC (especially in 
the meta-data/header).

Rather than "alter" what about "extend" ?

-éric

From: Alice Russo <[email protected]>
Date: Wednesday, 28 January 2026 at 20:58
To: Eric Vyncke (evyncke) <[email protected]>
Cc: Pascal Thubert <[email protected]>, [email protected] 
<[email protected]>, [email protected] <[email protected]>, Shwetha 
<[email protected]>, auth48archive <[email protected]>, RFC 
Editor <[email protected]>
Subject: [AD] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9926 
<draft-ietf-6lo-prefix-registration-18> for your review

Hi Éric,

Re: https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9926.html

>From discussion with Pascal, we're seeking your guidance on this topic: As you 
>know, in the RFC series, the words "updates" and "updated by" are used for 
>specific relationships between RFCs (even though the labels have been applied 
>with various criteria over the years). So these two statements seem 
>inaccurate. Would "alters" and "altered by" or other options be possible?

Original:
  Section 5.5 of [RFC8505] updates [RFC4861] to signal the Registered
  Address in the Target Address field.

[...]

  [RFC7400] was already updated by [RFC8505] for use in IPv6 ND
  messages.

[Of note: RFC 8505 updates RFC 6775, not RFC 4861 or RFC 7400.]


Perhaps:
  Section 5.5 of [RFC8505] alters [RFC4861] to signal the Registered
  Address in the Target Address field.

[...]

  [RFC7400] was already altered by [RFC8505] for use in IPv6 ND
  messages.

Thank you.

Alice Russo
RFC Production Center

On Jan 27, 2026, I wrote:

> - Re: #13 and 14, in the RFC series, "updates" and "updated by" have a 
> specific meaning when referring to relationships between RFCs, so these two 
> statements are inaccurate. For the second statement, we see that "extended 
> by" was used in version 12 of the draft and it was changed to "updated by". 
> Would "alters" and "altered by" or other options be possible?
>
>> Original:
>>   Section 5.5 of [RFC8505] updates [RFC4861] to signal the Registered
>>   Address in the Target Address field.
>>
>> Original:
>>   [RFC7400] was already updated by [RFC8505] for use in IPv6 ND
>>   messages.
>


On Jan 26, 2026, [email protected] wrote:

> 13) <!-- [rfced] Please review whether this sentence is accurate
> and let us know if any changes are needed.
> We note that Section 5.5 of [RFC8505] does not mention [RFC4861].
> Also, regarding the "Updates" relationship between RFCs,
> RFC 8505 updates RFC 6775, not RFC 4861.
>
> Original:
>  Section 5.5 of [RFC8505] updates [RFC4861] to signal the Registered
>  Address in the Target Address field.
> -->
>
>
> 14) <!-- [rfced] How should the second sentence be updated for accuracy?
> The original is not accurate because RFC 8505 does not update RFC 7400.
> (RFC 8505 updates RFC 6775.)
>
> Original:
>   This specification updates "6LoWPAN-GHC: Generic Header Compression
>   for IPv6 over Low-Power Wireless Personal Area Networks (6LoWPANs)"
>   [RFC7400] by defining a new capability bit for use in the 6CIO.
>   [RFC7400] was already updated by [RFC8505] for use in IPv6 ND
>   messages.
> -->
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