Hi Megan, all, Please see inline.
Cheers, Med > -----Message d'origine----- > De : Megan Ferguson <[email protected]> > Envoyé : mardi 3 février 2026 19:23 > À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET <[email protected]>; > [email protected]; [email protected] > Cc : [email protected]; [email protected]; > [email protected]; [email protected]; [email protected]; > [email protected]; [email protected] > Objet : Re: [AD] [IANA] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9907 <draft-ietf-netmod- > rfc8407bis-28> for your review > > > Med, IANA (Amanda), and *Mahesh, > > Thank you for your careful reviews and replies. We have > incorporated the changes submitted by Med (on 2 Feb). We have > some further queries based on the reply from Mahesh below: > > *Mahesh - Thank you for raising the three issues. > > 1) We believe the items you highlighted from the diff between the > document template and the text in the wiki > (https://fra01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2 > Fwiki.ietf.org%2Fgroup%2Fops%2Fyang-security- > guidelines&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40orange.com%7C4003241 > 532a245aa2fe508de63513e45%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7 > C0%7C639057397788495631%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOn > RydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoy > fQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=6ov6NImXuhDnlxEMuwFjEcmu2LV7oJ2%2BBvz9 > eEn3%2FsI%3D&reserved=0?) require no change to the document (i.e., > the document uses RFC 9907 while the wiki page uses [RFCAAAA]). > The wiki will need to be updated upon the publication of the > document with the RFC number. > > 2) Section 4.30.3: Thank you for pointing out the missing > sentence! And apologies - we don't think we understood the update > the first time around. We have now incorporated the missing > sentence into the document as we *believe* was intended. A > related note below: > > **AUTHORS** please review this update as well as the list > formation (indentation) we created (we believe this was a new > list, not a further embedded list). Having it appear this way may > clear Mahesh's concern about the MAY/SHALL switch(?). If this > does not appear as desired, please let us know how to update. If > we have it right currently, please let Mahesh know to re-review > how it now appears. [Med] This would work for me. > > 3) Section 4.30.3.1: We will await further guidance from the > authors on what updates are needed to address Mahesh's comments. > (Please also see related mail from Amanda dated 3 February.) [Med] I suggest we make this change in 5.3.1: OLD: In particular, the following instructions should apply to all modules: * When an underlying registration is deprecated or obsoleted, a corresponding "status" substatement should be added to the "identity" or "enum" statement. NEW: In particular, the following instructions should apply to all modules: * When a YANG module is updated, a new "revision" statement with a unique revision date must be added in front of the existing revision statements. The "revision" statement MUST contain both "description" and "reference" substatements as described in Section 5.3.2. * When an underlying registration is deprecated or obsoleted, a corresponding "status" substatement should be added to the "identity" or "enum" statement. + indent this text as follows (same level as the bullet text): OLD: * In a "revision" statement, the "description" substatement captures what changed in the revised version. Typically, the "description" enumerates changes such as updates to existing entries (e.g., update a "description" or a "reference") or notes which identities were added or had their status changed (e.g., deprecated, discouraged, or obsoleted). When such a description is not feasible, the description varies in accordance with the trigger for the update. If the update is triggered by an RFC, the "description" substatement should include or consist of this text: Applied updates as specified by RFC XXXX. If the registration policy for the registry does not require RFC publication (Section 4 of [RFC8126]), insert this text: Applied updates as specified by the registration policy <Some_IANA_policy>. NEW: * In a "revision" statement, the "description" substatement captures what changed in the revised version. Typically, the "description" enumerates changes such as updates to existing entries (e.g., update a "description" or a "reference") or notes which identities were added or had their status changed (e.g., deprecated, discouraged, or obsoleted). When such a description is not feasible, the description varies in accordance with the trigger for the update. If the update is triggered by an RFC, the "description" substatement should include or consist of this text: Applied updates as specified by RFC XXXX. If the registration policy for the registry does not require RFC publication (Section 4 of [RFC8126]), insert this text: Applied updates as specified by the registration policy <Some_IANA_policy>. > > The files have been posted here (please refresh): [Med] seems this one was missed: OLD: The "yanglint" program is also freely available from GitHub NEW: The 'yanglint' program is also freely available from GitHub Thank you. > > https://fra01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2F > www.rfc- > editor.org%2Fauthors%2Frfc9907.txt&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.boucadai > r%40orange.com%7C4003241532a245aa2fe508de63513e45%7C90c7a20af34b40 > bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C639057397788606505%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbG > Zsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIs > IkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=MStcWMbHJcaITx > Ngi5HKuml%2BCHUQuKqO%2BGX7DE1K%2B4c%3D&reserved=0 > > https://fra01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2F > www.rfc- > 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Please find below > some few comments: > > > > # Section 3.9: delete an extra } > > > > OLD: > > } > > > > 3.10. Validation Tools > > > > NEW: > > > > 3.10. Validation Tools > > > > # Section 3.10/3.11 > > > > There is inconsistency formatting about how tools are listed, > e.g., 'pyang' vs "yanglint" > > > > Please change "yangson" / "yanglint" to 'yangson' / 'yanglint' > to adhere to the formatting used in 8407. > > > > # Please revert back these changes through the document > > > > "definition" statement > > "definition" statements > > > > to > > > > definition statement > > definition statements > > > > # Section 4.20: revert this change > > > > OLD: "yang-data" "extension" statement > > > > NEW: OLD: "yang-data" extension statement > > > > Assuming these changes are implemented, I approve the > publication of the document. > > > > Cheers, > > Med > > > >> -----Message d'origine----- > >> De : Megan Ferguson <[email protected]> > >> Envoyé : vendredi 30 janvier 2026 19:53 > >> À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET <[email protected]>; > >> [email protected]; [email protected] > >> Cc : [email protected]; [email protected]; > >> [email protected]; [email protected]; > [email protected]; > >> [email protected]; [email protected] > >> Objet : Re: [AD] [IANA] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9907 <draft-ietf- > netmod- > >> rfc8407bis-28> for your review > >> > >> > >> Hi Med and Amanda (and *Mahesh), > >> > >> [*Mahesh - please see our mail sent 26 January regarding AD > >> actions.] > >> > >> We have updated per your replies. We believe Med's reply > >> addressed all of our concerns from our previous mail (and have > >> recorded this fact in the notes on the AUTH48 status page > linked > >> below). 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For your > convenience, > >> we have included links to the current versions of files in > >> multiple places in this mail (but all point to the same files). > >>> > >>> Please review all updates carefully and let us know if further > >> changes are necessary. 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Calling out here for > >> author awareness. > >>> > >>> > >>> For the update to the instructions below: > >>> > >>> NEW1: > >>> > >>> // RFC Ed: replace 'date-revision' with the module > >> publication date <- Moved "RFC Ed: here > >>> // the format is (YYYY-MM-DD) > >>> > >>> // replace XXXX with actual RFC number and remove > >>> // this note > >>> > >>> revision date-revision { > >>> description > >>> "What changed in this revision."; > >>> reference > >>> "RFC XXXX: <Replace With Document Title>"; > >>> } > >>> > >>> // Authors: Replace RFC IIIII with the RFC number and title. > >> <- Made the text similar to the note to the RFC Editor. > >>> // of the RFC that defined the initial version of > >>> // the module and remove this note > >>> > >>> revision date-initial { > >>> description > >>> "Initial version"; version."; > >>> reference > >>> "RFC IIII: <Replace With Document Title>"; > >>> } > >>> > >>> > >>> Please review our update to this text and let us know if any > >> further 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Please review and let us know > if > >> this change should be reverted. > >>> [Med] ACK > >>> > >>> > >>> 5) 28(e) and 28(f) ask about quotation around terms: > >>> > >>> > >>> e) We note that there may be some inconsistency in the double > >> quotes > >>> > >>> around statement names. For example, these terms are not > quoted > >> at > >>> > >>> places in the text: > >>> > >>> import statement > >>> include statement > >>> normative reference statement > >>> XPath statement > >>> extension statement > >>> YANG statement > >>> YANG extension statement > >>> YANG conditional statement > >>> reference statement > >>> length statement > >>> module tag extension statement > >>> > >>> [Med] Please follow the same convention as in RFC8407 for > these. > >>> > >>> Unfortunately, RFC 8407 has some inconsistencies here. A > number > >> of > >>> the items in the list above appear in both quotes and > unquoted, > >> with > >>> the latter being more prevalent. Other statement names like > >>> "description" and "revision" statement are majority quoted. > >>> Please let us know if one of the following options should be > >>> implemented: > >>> a) double quote all statement (and substatement?) names > >>> > >>> [Med] We can double quote all statements for internal > >> consistency then and also with RFC7950. > >>> > >>> Here is my proposal: > >>> > >>> "import" statement > >>> "include" statement > >>> normative "reference" statement > >>> "XPath" statement > >>> "extension" statement > >>> YANG statement > >>> YANG "extension" statement > >>> YANG conditional statement > >>> "reference" statement > >>> "length" statement > >>> module-tag "extension" statement > >>> > >>> [rfced] In implementing these suggestions, we had these follow > >> up queries: > >>> > >>> -Should anydata be quoted here? > >>> "Added anydata to the list of statements with mandatory". > >>> [Med] Yes, please. > >>> > >>> -Should any quotes be added here? > >>> "YANG module namespace statement" (see also namespace > statement > >> without YANG module before). > >>> [Med] This should be changed to "YANG module "namespace" > >> statement" to be consistent with 7950. All similar namespace > >> statements should be changed (except for templates). > >>> > >>> -Should "definition" be double-quoted in the following or > other > >> instances of "data definition statement"? > >>> "...all top-level data definition statements." > >>> [Med] No. Please revert these changes. > >>> Also, please revert "ordered list or leaf-list" to "ordered > >> "list" or "leaf-list"" (Section 4.6.2). > >>> > >>> -We see this use of "extensions statement"; should double > quotes > >> be used? > >>> ".or a "nacm:default-deny-all" extensions statement, then > >> those." > >>> [Med] We can leave this one unchanged as this will overload > the > >> template. > >>> > >>> -We assume these should not be single-quoted in the YANG > >> example, please confirm. > >>> "Several description and pattern statements have been > >> improved.";" > >>> Pattern statements; range statement; max-elements statement; > >> list statement; YANG constraint statments, and YANG deviation > >> statement? > >>> [Med] I confirm. > >>> > >>> -Please advise on how quoting should appear in the following > >> titles (i.e., should any of these be double quoted as well?): > >>> 4.8. Module Header, Meta, and Revision Statement (quotes only > >> on > >>> Revision, correct?) 4.19.1. Conditional Augment Statements > >> 4.19.2. > >>> Conditionally Mandatory Data Definition Statements 4.20. > >> Deviation > >>> Statements 4.21. Extension Statements [Med] We can leave > these > >>> unchanges. > >>> > >>> -We added quotes to "extension" statement, but that makes for > >> back-to-back quotes as seen in this example (see Section 4.29 > for > >> more examples): > >>> "...the use of the "structure" "extension" statement..." > >>> [Med] For those we can use ""structure" extension" to be > >> consistent with rfc8791. > >>> > >>> > >>> f) Further, there are some similar terms that may benefit from > >>> quotation review. We see: > >>> > >>> when expression vs. "when" expression must expression vs. > >>> "must" > >>> > >>> expression > >>> > >>> [rfced] Note also that we see "when" statement and "must" > >>> statement. Should these be updated to expression? > >>> > >>> [Med] statement is actually more compliant with RFC7950. > >>> > >>> [rfced] We have updated from "expression" to "statement" per > >> this guidance. Please review and let us know if this is in > error. > >>> [Med] ACK > >>> > >>> "deprecated" vs. "status deprecated" > >>> > >>> [rfced] We have added quotation marks where these appears to > be > >> a > >>> setting. Please advise if any changes from simply "deprecated" > >> to > >>> instead say "status deprecated" are desired. > >>> > >>> [Med] The 2 uses in the doc are OK. However, when re-reading: > >>> > >>> CURRENT: > >>> The "/interfaces-state" hierarchy has > >>> been marked "status deprecated". Models that mark their > >> "/foo- > >>> state" hierarchy with "status deprecated" will allow > >> NMDA- > >>> > >>> I wonder whether: > >>> > >>> OLD: been marked "status deprecated". > >>> > >>> NEW: been marked with "status deprecated". > >>> [rfced] We have made this update as requested. As this was > >> marked "I wonder", please confirm this appears as desired. > >>> [Med] OK > >>> > >>> 6) We did not see a reply to questions 29(b) and 29(c). > Please > >> let us > >>> know if any action is necessary on these items: > >>> > >>> > >>> b) Please review the use of quotation marks (both single > quotes > >> and > >>> > >>> double quotes) with these terms; specifically, should they be > >> moved > >>> > >>> to outside the <tt> tag? > >>> > >>> For example, we see both: > >>> > >>> <tt>"<CODE BEGINS>"</tt> tag > >>> > >>> and > >>> > >>> <tt><CODE BEGINS></tt> convention > >>> > >>> c) Please review to ensure the usage of <tt> is consistent. > It > >>> appears that there may be varying treatment of these terms. > >>> > >>> > >>> [Med] Please use a consistent approach for all similar > matters. > >>> [rfced] We have updated to include double quotes outside the > >> <tt> tags for CODE BEGINS and CODE ENDS throughout. We have > added > >> <tt> tags and quotation marks around BEGIN TEMPLATE TEXT and > END > >> TEMPLATE TEXT as well. 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Med has asked us to coordinate four sets of changes to > >> draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis with you. He approved the proposed > >> text for 4.30.3.1, 4.30.3.2, and 5.3 this morning, with a > change > >> that's been applied below (s/5.3/5.3.2/), and he provided the > >> updated 4.30.3 text in a message from January 17th. > >>> > >>> thanks, > >>> Amanda > >>> > >>> ========================================== > >>> > >>> 1) Make this change to 4.30.3: > >>> > >>> OLD: > >>> > >>> * A note that unassigned or reserved values must not be > present > >> in the IANA-maintained module. > >>> > >>> * An instruction whether experimental values should be > included > >> in the IANA-maintained module. If no instruction is provided, > >> experimental values MUST NOT be listed in the IANA-maintained > >> module. > >>> > >>> * An instruction about how to generate the "revision" > statement. > >>> > >>> NEW: > >>> > >>> The IANA Considerations Section MAY also provide the following > >>> information if a default action is expected: > >>> > >>> * A note whether unassigned or reserved values should be > >> present in > >>> the IANA-maintained module. If no instruction is provided, > >>> unassigned or reserved values must not be present in > >>> the IANA-maintained module. > >>> > >>> * An instruction whether experimental values should be > included > >> in > >>> the IANA-maintained module. If no instruction is provided, > >>> experimental values MUST NOT be listed in the IANA-maintained > >>> module. > >>> > >>> * An instruction about how to generate the "revision" > >> statement. > >>> If not present, default actions provided in Section 5.3 will > >> be followed. > >>> > >>> [rfced] Note that we updated the last bullet point to read as > >> "If no instruction is provided" instead of "If not present" to > be > >> consistent with the two previous points. Please let us know > any > >> objections. > >>> [Med] Works for me. I see that the reference in the last > bullet > >> was > >>> changed to 4.30 > >>> > >>> CURRENT: > >>> * An instruction about how to generate the "revision" > >> statement. If > >>> no instruction is provided, default actions provided in > >>> Section 4.30 will be followed. > >>> > >>> While this should be Section 5.3. Can we please fix that? > >>> > >>> ========================================== > >>> > >>> 2) Update Section 4.30.3.1 to read as follows: > >>> > >>> 4.30.3.1. Template for IANA-Maintained Modules with Identities > >>> > >>> This template ends with a section labeled "OPTIONAL." Any text > >> in this section that needs to be customized should be included > in > >> the template. Text that does not require customization should > be > >> omitted. > >>> > >>> <CODE BEGINS> > >>> > >>> This document defines the initial version of the IANA- > maintained > >>> "iana-foo" YANG module. The most recent version of the YANG > >> module is > >>> available from the "YANG Parameters" registry group > >>> [IANA-YANG-PARAMETERS]. > >>> > >>> IANA is requested to add this note to the registry: > >>> > >>> New values must not be directly added to the "iana-foo" YANG > >> module. > >>> They must instead be added to the "foo" registry. > >>> > >>> IANA is requested to add this note to [reference-to-the-iana- > >> foo- > >>> registry]: > >>> > >>> When this registry is modified, the YANG module "iana-foo" > >>> [IANA_FOO_URL] must be updated as defined in RFC IIII. > >>> > >>> When a value is added to the "foo" registry, a new "identity" > >>> statement needs to be added to the "iana-foo" YANG module. The > >> name of > >>> the "identity" MUST be the name as provided in the registry. > >>> The "identity" statement should have the following sub- > >> statements > >>> defined: > >>> > >>> "base": Contains 'name-base-identity-defined-in-foo'. > >>> > >>> "status": Include only if a registration has been > >> deprecated or > >>> obsoleted. IANA "deprecated" maps to YANG > status > >>> "deprecated", and IANA "obsolete" maps to YANG > >> status > >>> "obsolete". > >>> > >>> "description": Replicates the description from the registry. > >>> > >>> "reference": Replicates the reference(s) from the registry. > >>> References to documents should also include > >> titles. > >>> > >>> -- OPTIONAL: > >>> > >>> -- Include only text that needs to be customized for the > module. > >>> -- Text that does not require customization should be > >>> -- omitted. > >>> > >>> -- Notes tagged with "--" include instructions for authors. > >> These > >>> notes > >>> -- must not be copied. > >>> > >>> Unassigned and Reserved Values: > >>> > >>> -- To be completed only if unassigned and/or reserved values > >>> -- (which may include experimental values) should be included > >>> -- in the module. These values are typically not included. > >>> > >>> Description Substatements: > >>> > >>> -- To be completed only if the default actions described in > >>> -- Section 5.3.2 are to be overridden. > >>> -- Specify whether instructions apply to "revision" > statements, > >> "identity" statements, or both. > >>> > >>> Reference Substatements: > >>> > >>> -- To be completed only if the default actions described in > >>> -- Section 5.3.2 are to be overridden. > >>> -- Specify whether instructions apply to "revision" > statements, > >> "identity" statements, or both. > >>> > >>> Naming Considerations: > >>> > >>> -- If a name in the IANA registry does not comply with the > >>> -- YANG naming conventions, add details how IANA can generate > >>> -- legal identifiers. For example, if the name begins with > >>> -- a number, indicate a preference to spell out the number > when > >>> -- used as an identifier. > >>> > >>> <CODE ENDS> > >>> > >>> [rfced] We made a slight further update to use "Section 5.3.2 > of > >> RFC 9907" in the text under both "Description Substatements" > and > >> "Reference Substatements". We also updated the introductory > text > >> to more closely match the text proposed for Section 4.30.3.2 > >> (below). Please review and let us know any concerns. > >>> [Med] ACK. Thank you > >>> > >>> ========================================== > >>> > >>> 3) Update Section 4.30.3.2 to read as follows (same text as > >> above, aside from references to enums instead of identities): > >>> > >>> 4.30.3.2. Template for IANA-Maintained Modules with > Enumerations > >>> > >>> This template ends with a section labeled "OPTIONAL." Any text > >> in this section that needs to be customized should be included > in > >> the template. Text that does not require customization should > be > >> omitted from the IANA Considerations. > >>> > >>> <CODE BEGINS> > >>> > >>> This document defines the initial version of the IANA- > maintained > >>> "iana-foo" YANG module. The most recent version of the YANG > >> module is > >>> available from the "YANG Parameters" registry group > >>> [IANA-YANG-PARAMETERS]. > >>> > >>> IANA is requested to add this note to the registry: > >>> > >>> New values must not be directly added to the "iana-foo" YANG > >> module. > >>> They must instead be added to the "foo" registry. > >>> > >>> IANA is requested to add this note to [reference-to-the-iana- > >> foo- > >>> registry]: > >>> > >>> When this registry is modified, the YANG module "iana-foo" > >>> [IANA_FOO_URL] must be updated as defined in RFC IIII. > >>> > >>> When a value is added to the "foo" registry, a new "enum" > >> statement > >>> must be added to the "iana-foo" YANG module. The "enum" > >> statement, and > >>> sub-statements thereof, should be defined: > >>> > >>> "enum": Replicates a name from the registry. > >>> > >>> "value": Contains the decimal value of the IANA-assigned > value. > >>> > >>> "status": Is included only if a registration has been > deprecated > >> or > >>> obsoleted. IANA "deprecated" maps to YANG status "deprecated", > >> and > >>> IANA "obsolete" > >>> maps to YANG status "obsolete". > >>> > >>> "description": Replicates the description from the registry. > >>> > >>> "reference": Replicates the reference(s) from the registry. > >> References to documents should also include titles. > >>> > >>> -- OPTIONAL: > >>> > >>> -- Include only text that needs to be customized for the > module. > >>> -- Text that does not require customization should be > >>> -- omitted. > >>> > >>> -- Notes tagged with "--" include instructions for authors. > >> These > >>> notes > >>> -- must not be copied. > >>> > >>> Unassigned and Reserved Values: > >>> > >>> -- To be completed only if unassigned and/or reserved values > >>> -- (which may include experimental values) should be included > >>> -- in the module. These values are typically not included. > >>> > >>> Description Substatements: > >>> > >>> -- To be completed only if the default actions described in > >>> -- Section 5.3.2 are to be overridden. > >>> -- Specify whether instructions apply to "revision" > statements, > >> "enum" statements, or both. > >>> > >>> Reference Substatements: > >>> > >>> -- To be completed only if the default actions described in > >>> -- Section 5.3.2 are to be overridden. > >>> -- Specify whether instructions apply to "revision" > statements, > >> "enum" statements, or both. > >>> > >>> Naming Considerations: > >>> > >>> -- If a name in the IANA registry does not comply with the > >>> -- YANG naming conventions, add details how IANA can generate > >>> -- legal identifiers. For example, if the name begins with > >>> -- a number, indicate a preference to spell out the number > when > >>> -- used as an identifier. > >>> > >>> <CODE ENDS> > >>> [rfced] We have made similar updates as mentioned above (added > >> RFC 9907 to section mentions). > >>> [Med] ACK > >>> > >>> ========================================== > >>> > >>> 4) Replace Section 5.3 with the following: > >>> > >>> 5.3. IANA-Maintained Modules > >>> > >>> IANA should refer to Section 4.30.3 for information necessary > to > >> populate "revision" statements and "identity" and "enum" > >> substatements in IANA-maintained modules. > >>> > >>> These considerations cover both the creation and maintenance > of > >> an IANA-maintained module, and they include both instructions > >> applicable to all IANA-maintained modules and instructions that > >> can be customized by module creators. > >>> > >>> 5.3.1. Requirements for All Modules > >>> > >>> In particular, the following instructions should apply to all > >> modules: > >>> > >>> * When an underlying registration is deprecated or obsoleted, > a > >> corresponding "status" substatement should be added to the > >> identity or enumeration statement. > >>> > >>> * The "reference" substatement in the revision statement > should > >> point specifically to the published module (i.e., > >> IANA_FOO_URL_With_REV). When the registration is triggered by > an > >> RFC, that RFC must also be included in the "reference" > >> substatement. It may also point to an authoritative event > >> triggering the update to the YANG module. In all cases, the > event > >> is cited from the underlying IANA registry. > >>> > >>> * References to documents should include titles. > >>> > >>> In addition, when the module is published, IANA must add the > >> following notes to: > >>> > >>> The YANG Module Names registry: > >>> New values must not be directly added to the "iana-foo" YANG > >> module. They must instead be added to the "foo" registry. > >>> > >>> The underlying registry: > >>> When this registry is modified, the YANG module "iana-foo" > >> [IANA_FOO_URL] must be updated as defined in RFC IIII. > >>> > >>> 5.3.2. Requirements Subject to Customization > >>> > >>> Unless the creators of an IANA-maintained module specify > >> otherwise in their document's IANA Considerations section, the > >> following instructions will apply: > >>> > >>> * Unassigned and reserved values (including experimental > values) > >> will be omitted from the module. > >>> > >>> * The "reference" statement in an "identity" or "enum" > >> substatement should mirror the underlying registry. It may > point > >> to contact names as well as documents. > >>> > >>> * In a revision statement, the "description" substatement > >> captures > >>> what changed in the revised version. Typically, the > description > >>> enumerates changes such as updates to existing entries (e.g., > >> update a > >>> description or a reference) or notes which identities were > added > >> or > >>> had their status changed (e.g., deprecated, discouraged, or > >> obsoleted). > >>> > >>> When such a description is not feasible, the description > varies > >> in accordance with the trigger for the update. > >>> > >>> If the update is triggered by an RFC, the "description" > >> substatement should include or consist of this text: > >>> "Applied updates as specified by RFC XXXX." > >>> > >>> If the registration policy for the registry does not require > RFC > >> publication (Section 4 of [RFC8126]), insert this text: > >>> > >>> "Applied updates as specified by the registration policy > >>> <Some_IANA_policy>". > >>> > >>> [rfced] A few points: > >>> > >>> 1) Please review the following text: > >>> > >>> * When an underlying registration is deprecated or obsoleted, > a > >> corresponding "status" substatement should be added to the > >> identity or enumeration statement. > >>> > >>> Should double quotes be added to make this "identity" or > >> "enumeration" statements (double quotes and plural statement)? > We > >> also note that "identity" and "enum" substatements used in the > >> text preceding this. Please confirm that these should not > match > >> (i.e., the lead in text is about substatements and the text > above > >> is about statements). > >>> [Med] Please update to: > >>> > >>> NEW: > >>> "identity" or "enum" statement. > >>> > >>> 2) We have updated to use "revision" statement (in quotes) or > >> "description" etc. Please review any addition of quotation > marks > >> and let us know if these were general uses instead of statement > >> names and we can revert if necessary. > >>> [Med] ACK. > >>> > >>> 3) Should the following text be in double quotes in the > >> template? 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