On Thursday 22 July 2010 19:42, Sigrid Carrera wrote:

> could you have a look at the first chapter before I continue? Do I
> need to do something different, or is the result ok?

Sigrid, 

here a few comments after a quick glance:

1) maybe you could name the images more descriptive than just 
"Title.png" or "A1.png" ? My personal preference would be something 
like "Doc-dg3c01-DescriptiveName.png" so the image can be clearly 
identified later. 

2) Authors list in the copyright section looked somewhat ugly. I changed 
it myself already for testing, but it still can be improved. 

3) References to other chapters could/should be clickable links (can be 
done later, if doing it now, take care to use relative links like 
[[../LinkToSiblingPage|SiblingPageTitle]])

4) For me it would make sense to categorize every new created page with 
[[Category: Draw Guide (Documentation)]] like the other Guides. 

Nino

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