I have uploaded "What is OOo?" for review...this version is a major
rewrite from what I originally received.  Off-list mail suggested a few
things and now it is 21 pages.  The text is dense, which is good because
it is easier to edit out than edit in...for me at least. 

Don't try to do much grammar or spell checking, as I know some of this
is rough from my cutting and pasting. I am looking for guidance on the
heading (or document) structure, and whether any text should be
shortened, simplified, moved or deleted.  Also the Feature comparison
tables have extra rows for you to add features you may think I
overlooked.  There are several Notes so watch for them. The images of
the components should probably not stay???

I added sections on Getting the software, system requirements and tech
support. I know these are covered elsewhere in detail, but they seem to
fit here...the context and content is very different.

***Please, let me know of any factual or technical errors!!!

After some initial feed back I can edit this to a near final state
quickly. Unfortunately I work best from chaos ;-)


-- 
Regards,

Rick Barnes
www.nostabo.net

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