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Dennis Sosnoski commented on AXIS2-1630:
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I'm a little concerned by these documentation changes. Many are strictly 
stylistic and debatable as to correctness (replacing contractions such as 
"doesn't" with "does not", putting a </p> on a separate line, and unnecessarily 
replacing '>' with '&gt;'). In the case of this particular page, at least one 
change is incorrect (replaced "lets", as in "allows", with "let's", meaning 
"let us").

Stylistic changes are unnecessary and should probably be avoided, especially 
since they create the potential for errors (as in substituting "let's" for 
"lets").

> Editorial Review
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>
>                 Key: AXIS2-1630
>                 URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/AXIS2-1630
>             Project: Apache Axis 2.0 (Axis2)
>          Issue Type: Improvement
>          Components: documentation
>    Affects Versions: 1.1
>         Environment: Ubuntu,Mozilla, Bluefish
>            Reporter: Karthiga Rajeevani Ratnam
>             Fix For: 1.1
>
>         Attachments: jibx-codegen-integration
>
>
> Editorial Review

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