David, you can see the comments and changes now in the prezi. Thanks. On Fri, Jan 7, 2011 at 2:36 PM, Alex Vachon <[email protected]>wrote:
> Ok, wont be long David. :-) > > > On Fri, Jan 7, 2011 at 2:29 PM, david blanchard <[email protected]>wrote: > >> of course ! >> And if they can tell you (or directly here on the ml) what they thought of >> it, even better ! >> >> For them to try, best is to wait for a clean version we should have >> tonight - the one we'll use for tonight's playtest. I'll let you know when >> it's live. >> >> >> On 07/01/2011 19:50, Alex Vachon wrote: >> >>> Can I invite people to try it? >>> >>> On Fri, Jan 7, 2011 at 1:49 PM, Alex Vachon >>> <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>> >>> wrote: >>> >>> I just played the game, I liked it. I like Bill too, great >>> personality! :-) >>> >>> >>> On Fri, Jan 7, 2011 at 9:21 AM, Alex Vachon >>> <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>> >>> wrote: >>> >>> Thanks David, and I'm looking forward to see what players say. >>> >>> Alex >>> >>> >>> On Fri, Jan 7, 2011 at 8:38 AM, david blanchard >>> <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote: >>> >>> Thanks for the hard work Alex - the structural glory now >>> looks quite impressive ! >>> >>> I updated the script accordingly, and I think it's starting >>> to work well. The only doubt I still have is the length of >>> some of the texts. The players might find it too long and >>> then we'll need to see what can be reduced, but i might be >>> wrong - we'll see what the players say about it. >>> >>> I have a few other last comments/questions that I added in >>> your document, but they're really few and localized now. >>> >>> The big step now is going to be the playtest where we'll see >>> what the players think... I look forward to it. >>> >>> Good job :) >>> >>> D >>> >>> PS : I'll upload the new version of the mission some time >>> today, I'll let you know. >>> >>> >>> >>> On 07/01/2011 02:38, Alex Vachon wrote: >>> >>> Hi folks, >>> >>> Please go to >>> http://prezi.com/presentation/[email protected]/j2iqs4e/ for >>> the >>> complete mission 1 in all its structural glory. I just >>> hope that it's >>> all there. >>> >>> Alex >>> >>> On Thu, Jan 6, 2011 at 12:37 PM, Alex Vachon >>> <[email protected] >>> <mailto:[email protected]> >>> <mailto:[email protected] >>> >>> <mailto:[email protected]>>> wrote: >>> >>> Is anyone familiar with Prezis? >>> >>> >>> It is an online presentation tool. It's like Power >>> Point, but 100 >>> times more dynamic. Here is an example of one Prezi >>> I did to >>> promote my business. >>> >>> http://prezi.com/q0wtsha1lcqc/about-cartouche/ >>> >>> I find it to be very useful when building an >>> interactive structure. >>> >>> Here is what I am building now for our first >>> mission. You can move >>> around the "canvas" with your mouse, zoom in and >>> out, and create a path. >>> >>> http://prezi.com/presentation/[email protected]/j2iqs4e/ >>> >>> Let me know what you think. >>> >>> Alex >>> >>> On Thu, Jan 6, 2011 at 11:46 AM, Alex Vachon >>> <[email protected] >>> <mailto:[email protected]> >>> <mailto:[email protected] >>> >>> <mailto:[email protected]>>> >>> >>> wrote: >>> >>> Okay, I'm working on it. >>> >>> >>> On Thu, Jan 6, 2011 at 6:40 AM, david blanchard >>> <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]> >>> <mailto:[email protected] >>> <mailto:[email protected]>>> wrote: >>> >>> Thx for the new version. >>> >>> I've uploaded the mission on >>> http://humanityprojectonline.com/?skipintro have a look ! >>> >>> Alex there are still some differences >>> between the actual >>> mission and what you wrote => I tried to >>> explain why in the >>> google doc, and state what remains to be >>> done. I think a >>> good first step for you would be to play 2 >>> or 3 times the >>> mission, then it'll be a lot easier to work >>> on the doc. >>> >>> I also added on the document some numbers >>> for the steps of >>> the conversation, and letters when multiple >>> possible >>> answers. And at the end of a step, I wrote >>> to what step it >>> leads when it's ambiguous. >>> I hope it'll be easier to use the document >>> now. In the >>> future, we can make all of this a lot easier >>> by organizing >>> the document like a tree where we'll input >>> the text, I can >>> do that when I find a little time. >>> >>> Alex I can imagine that it's a pretty big >>> step for you to >>> take to get used to the way missions are >>> written (with the >>> tree concept and the constraints of our >>> mission engine) ! >>> sorry for that I had not realized and thanks >>> for your >>> patience - I'm confident that we're not so >>> far anymore from >>> something that works. >>> >>> I'll be available today if you want to >>> discuss the comments >>> I added on the google doc. >>> >>> D >>> >>> >>> On 05/01/2011 21:55, Alex Vchon wrote: >>> >>> Hi folks, here are the corrections for >>> the text of the >>> first mission, >>> hope it covers everything. Looking >>> forward to seeing >>> how the test goes. >>> >>> >>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uuCmQQL0e7RGteSbVT20PR-hKl7VuBUrF0e6pIf_U8o/edit?hl=en&authkey=CMGtwskE >>> < >>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uuCmQQL0e7RGteSbVT20PR-hKl7VuBUrF0e6pIf_U8o/edit?hl=en&authkey=CMGtwskE >>> > >>> < >>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uuCmQQL0e7RGteSbVT20PR-hKl7VuBUrF0e6pIf_U8o/edit?hl=en&authkey=CMGtwskE >>> < >>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uuCmQQL0e7RGteSbVT20PR-hKl7VuBUrF0e6pIf_U8o/edit?hl=en&authkey=CMGtwskE >>> >> >>> < >>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uuCmQQL0e7RGteSbVT20PR-hKl7VuBUrF0e6pIf_U8o/edit?hl=en&authkey=CMGtwskE >>> < >>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uuCmQQL0e7RGteSbVT20PR-hKl7VuBUrF0e6pIf_U8o/edit?hl=en&authkey=CMGtwskE >>> > >>> < >>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uuCmQQL0e7RGteSbVT20PR-hKl7VuBUrF0e6pIf_U8o/edit?hl=en&authkey=CMGtwskE >>> < >>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uuCmQQL0e7RGteSbVT20PR-hKl7VuBUrF0e6pIf_U8o/edit?hl=en&authkey=CMGtwskE >>> >>> >>> >>> Alex >>> >>> On Wed, Jan 5, 2011 at 9:43 AM, david >>> blanchard >>> <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]> >>> <mailto:[email protected] <mailto:[email protected] >>> >> >>> <mailto:[email protected] <mailto:[email protected] >>> > >>> >>> <mailto:[email protected] >>> <mailto:[email protected]>>>> wrote: >>> >>> >>> >>> On 05/01/2011 15:34, Alex Vachon >>> wrote: >>> >>> .php should I be opening this? >>> How? >>> >>> >>> good question ! >>> >>> If you're under windows (if you have >>> a mac I'll need >>> to check) : >>> >>> Best option (will keep the format of >>> the file, >>> easier for you) : >>> Notepad++ >>> (http://notepad-plus-plus.org/) >>> >>> Else : Notepad >>> >>> Let me know how it goes. 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