Author: randy
Date: 2005-07-27 12:05:59 -0600 (Wed, 27 Jul 2005)
New Revision: 4803
Modified:
trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/cpio.xml
trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/fcron.xml
trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/hdparm.xml
trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/mc.xml
trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/which.xml
trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/zip.xml
Log:
Fixed typos in various Chapter 11 package instructions
Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/cpio.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/cpio.xml 2005-07-27 17:27:47 UTC (rev
4802)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/cpio.xml 2005-07-27 18:05:59 UTC (rev
4803)
@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@
<title>Command Explanations</title>
<para><command>sed -i -e "s/invalid_arg/argmatch_invalid/"
src/mt.c</command>:
- This command fixes a build problem in the <command>mt</command>
program.</para>
+ This command fixes a build problem with the <command>mt</command>
program.</para>
<para><parameter>CPIO_MT_PROG=mt</parameter>: This parameter forces the
building and installation of the <command>mt</command> program.</para>
@@ -97,7 +97,7 @@
<para><parameter>--with-rmt=/usr/sbin/rmt</parameter>: This parameter
inhibits
building the <command>rmt</command> program as it is already installed by
the
- <application>tar</application> package in LFS.</para>
+ <application>Tar</application> package in LFS.</para>
<para><command>echo "#define HAVE_SETLOCALE 1" >> config.h</command>:
This command specifies that the system <application>Libc</application>
implements the
@@ -154,4 +154,3 @@
</sect2>
</sect1>
-
Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/fcron.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/fcron.xml 2005-07-27 17:27:47 UTC (rev
4802)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/fcron.xml 2005-07-27 18:05:59 UTC (rev
4803)
@@ -75,7 +75,8 @@
does not set up this facility in <filename>/etc/syslog.conf</filename>, it
needs to be done prior to installing <application>Fcron</application>. This
command will append the necessary line to the current
- <filename>/etc/syslog.conf</filename>:</para>
+ <filename>/etc/syslog.conf</filename> (perform as the
+ <systemitem class='username'>root</systemitem> user):</para>
<indexterm zone="fcron fcron-syslog">
<primary sortas="e-etc-syslog.conf">/etc/syslog.conf</primary>
@@ -90,12 +91,14 @@
EOF</userinput></screen>
<para>The configuration file has been modified, so reloading the
- <command>sysklogd</command> daemon will activate the changes.</para>
+ <command>sysklogd</command> daemon will activate the changes (again as the
+ <systemitem class='username'>root</systemitem> user).</para>
<screen role="root"><userinput>/etc/rc.d/init.d/sysklogd
reload</userinput></screen>
<para>For security reasons, an unprivileged user and group for
- <application>Fcron</application> should be created:</para>
+ <application>Fcron</application> should be created (perform as the
+ <systemitem class='username'>root</systemitem> user):</para>
<screen role="root"><userinput>groupadd -g 22 fcron &&
useradd -d /dev/null -c "Fcron User" -g fcron -s /bin/false -u 22
fcron</userinput></screen>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/hdparm.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/hdparm.xml 2005-07-27 17:27:47 UTC (rev
4802)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/hdparm.xml 2005-07-27 18:05:59 UTC (rev
4803)
@@ -37,8 +37,8 @@
<para>As well as being useful, incorrect usage of
<application>hdparm</application> can destroy your information and in
rare cases, drives. Use with caution and make sure you know what you are
- doing. If in doubt, we recommend you leave the default kernel parameters
- alone.</para>
+ doing. If in doubt, it is recommended that you leave the default kernel
+ parameters alone.</para>
</warning>
<bridgehead renderas="sect3">Package Information</bridgehead>
@@ -126,4 +126,3 @@
</sect2>
</sect1>
-
Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/mc.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/mc.xml 2005-07-27 17:27:47 UTC (rev 4802)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/mc.xml 2005-07-27 18:05:59 UTC (rev 4803)
@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@
<screen><userinput>./configure --prefix=/usr &&
make</userinput></screen>
- <para>This package does not come with a testsuite.</para>
+ <para>This package does not come with a test suite.</para>
<para>Now, as the <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem>
user:</para>
@@ -128,7 +128,7 @@
<seglistitem>
<seg>mc, mcedit, mcmfmt, and mcview</seg>
<seg>None</seg>
- <seg>/usr/share/mc, /usr/lib/mc</seg>
+ <seg>/usr/share/mc and /usr/lib/mc</seg>
</seglistitem>
</segmentedlist>
Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/which.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/which.xml 2005-07-27 17:27:47 UTC (rev
4802)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/which.xml 2005-07-27 18:05:59 UTC (rev
4803)
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
<!ENTITY which-md5sum "830b83af48347a9a3520f561e47cbc9b">
<!ENTITY which-size "123 KB">
<!ENTITY which-buildsize "940 KB">
- <!ENTITY which-time "0.03 SBU">
+ <!ENTITY which-time "less than 0.1 SBU">
]>
<sect1 id="which" xreflabel="which-&which-version;">
@@ -33,8 +33,8 @@
your system with <command>which</command>. The question of which
<quote><command>which</command></quote> is for you to decide.</para>
- <para>The first option is to install the actual GNU program
- <application>which</application>.</para>
+ <para>The first option is to install the actual GNU
+ <application>which</application> package.</para>
<sect2 role="package">
<title>Introduction to Which</title>
@@ -118,7 +118,7 @@
<sect2 role="installation">
<title>The 'which' Script</title>
- <para>The second option (for those who don't want to install the program)
+ <para>The second option (for those who don't want to install the package)
is to create a simple script (execute as the
<systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user):</para>
@@ -135,4 +135,3 @@
</sect2>
</sect1>
-
Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/zip.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/zip.xml 2005-07-27 17:27:47 UTC (rev 4802)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/zip.xml 2005-07-27 18:05:59 UTC (rev 4803)
@@ -86,7 +86,7 @@
command overrides the <varname>prefix</varname> variable that is set to
<filename class='directory'>/usr/local</filename> in the
<filename>unix/Makefile</filename> which is used as a
- <command>Makefile</command> and builds the executables for a Linux system.
The
+ <filename>Makefile</filename> and builds the executables for a Linux
system. The
alternatives to <option>generic_gcc</option> can be seen with a
<command>make -f unix/Makefile list</command> command.</para>
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