Author: dnicholson
Date: 2006-04-20 17:56:22 -0600 (Thu, 20 Apr 2006)
New Revision: 5896

Modified:
   trunk/BOOK/basicnet/mailnews/tin.xml
Log:
Fixed typos and wordings in tin

Modified: trunk/BOOK/basicnet/mailnews/tin.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/basicnet/mailnews/tin.xml        2006-04-20 19:04:06 UTC (rev 
5895)
+++ trunk/BOOK/basicnet/mailnews/tin.xml        2006-04-20 23:56:22 UTC (rev 
5896)
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@
     <title>Introduction to TIN</title>
 
     <para><application>TIN</application> is a threaded NNTP and spool based
-    console console-mode UseNet newsreader. It supports threading, scoring,
+    console-mode UseNet newsreader. It supports threading, scoring,
     different charsets, and many other useful things. It has also support for
     different languages.</para>
 
@@ -114,12 +114,12 @@
     and Asian languages support).</para>
 
     <para><parameter>--enable-nntp-only</parameter>: Reading news from a local
-    spool is disabled with this switch.  Don't use this is you have installed
-    INN and want to use its' spool.</para>
+    spool is disabled with this switch.  Don't use this if you have installed
+    INN and want to use its spool.</para>
 
     <para><parameter>--disable-printing</parameter>: This switch disables
-    printing since <application>TIN</application> cant send non-ASCII text to
-    the printer correctly. Remove this switch if you can tolerate this
+    printing since <application>TIN</application> cannot send non-ASCII text
+    to the printer correctly. Remove this switch if you can tolerate this
     limitation.</para>
 
   </sect2>
@@ -162,8 +162,8 @@
 translit=ON
 EOF</userinput></screen>
 
-      <para>Now, as a normal user, subscribe to some newsgroups, specify the
-      news server, and run <command>tin</command>:</para>
+      <para>Now, as an unprivileged user, subscribe to some newsgroups,
+      specify the news server, and run <command>tin</command>:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>cat &gt;&gt; ~/.newsrc &lt;&lt; "EOF"
 gmane.linux.lfs.devel:
@@ -182,7 +182,7 @@
     <segmentedlist>
       <segtitle>Installed Programs</segtitle>
       <segtitle>Installed Libraries</segtitle>
-      <segtitle>Installed Directories</segtitle>
+      <segtitle>Installed Directory</segtitle>
 
       <seglistitem>
         <seg>tin, rtin, tinews.pl, metamutt, opt-case.pl, w2r.pl,

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