On Tue, Jan 13, 2009 at 05:40:25PM -0600, Randy McMurchy wrote:
> [email protected] wrote:
> > Author: ken
> > Date: 2009-01-13 13:30:09 -0700 (Tue, 13 Jan 2009)
> > New Revision: 7726
> > 
> > Added:
> >    trunk/BOOK/general/graphlib/jasper.xml
> 
> Some nitpicks follow.
> 
 Thanks. I'll look at them later. Comments on a couple now
> 
> > +]>
> 
> What's this?
 Search me.  Didn't seem to break the rendering :) It will go.
> 
> 
> 
> > +    <bridgehead renderas="sect3">Libjasper Dependencies</bridgehead>
> 
> Please keep the titles consistent. So far everything was just "Jasper"
Sorry, i missed that one when I decided it wasn't just a library.
> 
> 
> > +    <title>Installation of jasper</title>
> 
> Capitalization (JasPer)
> 
> 
> > +
> > +<note>
> > +  <para>The package source is distributed in <filename>zip</filename>
> 
> Would be better as <filename class="extension">.zip</filename>
> 
> 
> > +    <para>If you wish to install the pdf files for the Reference Manual 
> > and a
> > +    tutorial on the JPEG-2000 standard, run the following commands:</para>
> 
> pdf should be all caps as PDF. Additionally, it has been customary to
> include something similar to "as the <systemitem...>root</sys...> user.
 I'll query why you think PDF is better than pdf here ?

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