Author: randy Date: 2012-08-22 07:45:43 -0600 (Wed, 22 Aug 2012) New Revision: 10534
Modified: trunk/BOOK/book/foreword.xml trunk/BOOK/book/whoread.xml trunk/BOOK/general.ent Log: Reworded Forward page Modified: trunk/BOOK/book/foreword.xml =================================================================== --- trunk/BOOK/book/foreword.xml 2012-08-21 18:15:22 UTC (rev 10533) +++ trunk/BOOK/book/foreword.xml 2012-08-22 13:45:43 UTC (rev 10534) @@ -116,11 +116,11 @@ <para>This is the development version of the BLFS book. This version of the book is intended to be used when building on top of a system built using the - LFS Development book. Though this version of the book is development in - nature, every effort has been made to ensure accuracy and reliability of the - instructions. Many people find that using the instructions in this book after - building the development version of LFS provides a stable and very modern - Linux system.</para> + LFS development book as well as the current stable version of LFS. Though this + version of the book is development in nature, every effort has been made to + ensure accuracy and reliability of the instructions. Many people find that + using the instructions in this book after building the current stable or + development version of LFS provides a stable and very modern Linux system.</para> <!-- <para>If you have built LFS using a released version (the most recent being Modified: trunk/BOOK/book/whoread.xml =================================================================== --- trunk/BOOK/book/whoread.xml 2012-08-21 18:15:22 UTC (rev 10533) +++ trunk/BOOK/book/whoread.xml 2012-08-22 13:45:43 UTC (rev 10534) @@ -26,8 +26,8 @@ probably nearly as wide as that of the LFS book. If you found LFS useful, you should also like this!</para> - <para>Since Release 5.0, the BLFS book version matches the LFS book version. + <!-- <para>Since Release 5.0, the BLFS book version matches the LFS book version. This book may be incompatible with a previous or later release of the LFS - book.</para> + book.</para> --> </sect1> Modified: trunk/BOOK/general.ent =================================================================== --- trunk/BOOK/general.ent 2012-08-21 18:15:22 UTC (rev 10533) +++ trunk/BOOK/general.ent 2012-08-22 13:45:43 UTC (rev 10534) @@ -3,13 +3,13 @@ $Date$ --> -<!ENTITY day "21"> <!-- Always 2 digits --> +<!ENTITY day "22"> <!-- Always 2 digits --> <!ENTITY month "08"> <!-- Always 2 digits --> <!ENTITY year "2012"> <!ENTITY copyrightdate "2001-&year;"> <!ENTITY copyholder "The BLFS Development Team"> <!ENTITY version "&year;-&month;-&day;"> -<!ENTITY releasedate "August 21st, &year;"> +<!ENTITY releasedate "August 22nd, &year;"> <!-- <!ENTITY releasedate "November &day;st, &year;"> --> <!ENTITY pubdate "&year;-&month;-&day;"> <!-- metadata req. by TLDP --> <!ENTITY blfs-version "svn"> <!-- svn|[release #] --> -- http://linuxfromscratch.org/mailman/listinfo/blfs-book FAQ: http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/blfs/faq.html Unsubscribe: See the above information page
