Author: randy
Date: 2012-08-22 16:30:35 -0600 (Wed, 22 Aug 2012)
New Revision: 10541

Modified:
   trunk/BOOK/general/genlib/pth.xml
   trunk/BOOK/general/prog/git.xml
   trunk/BOOK/general/prog/guile.xml
   trunk/BOOK/general/prog/other-tools.xml
   trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/autofs.xml
   trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/lm_sensors.xml
   trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/udev-extras.xml
   trunk/BOOK/gnome/core/at-spi2-core.xml
   trunk/BOOK/gnome/core/gnome-bluetooth.xml
   trunk/BOOK/gnome/core/gnome-desktop.xml
   trunk/BOOK/gnome/core/gnome-doc-utils.xml
   trunk/BOOK/gnome/core/libgweather.xml
   trunk/BOOK/gnome/core/libpeas.xml
   trunk/BOOK/gnome/core/libwacom.xml
   trunk/BOOK/gnome/core/polkit-gnome.xml
   trunk/BOOK/introduction/important/beyond.xml
   trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/changelog.xml
   trunk/BOOK/multimedia/videoutils/ffmpeg.xml
   trunk/BOOK/networking/connect/ppp.xml
   trunk/BOOK/networking/netutils/networkmanager.xml
   trunk/BOOK/postlfs/filesystems/fuse.xml
   trunk/BOOK/postlfs/security/mitkrb.xml
   trunk/BOOK/pst/typesetting/texlive.xml
   trunk/BOOK/server/major/proftpd.xml
   trunk/BOOK/x/lib/gtk+2.xml
   trunk/BOOK/xsoft/office/libreoffice.xml
Log:
Fixed typos and added missing XML tags

Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/genlib/pth.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/genlib/pth.xml   2012-08-22 21:34:48 UTC (rev 10540)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/genlib/pth.xml   2012-08-22 22:30:35 UTC (rev 10541)
@@ -80,7 +80,9 @@
     following commands:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>sed -i 's#$(LOBJS): Makefile#$(LOBJS): pth_p.h Makefile#' 
Makefile.in &amp;&amp;
-./configure --prefix=/usr --disable-static --mandir=/usr/share/man &amp;&amp;
+./configure --prefix=/usr           \
+            --disable-static        \
+            --mandir=/usr/share/man &amp;&amp;
 make</userinput></screen>
 
     <para>To test the results, issue: <command>make test</command>.</para>
@@ -97,16 +99,18 @@
   <sect2 role="commands">
     <title>Command Explanations</title>
 
-    <para><command>sed -i 's#$(LOBJS) ...</command>: This sed fixes a race
-    condition in the Makefile. It allows you to run <command>make</command> 
with
-    multiple jobs (eg, <command>make -j4</command>) <!-- how ironic that a
-    package for using multiple threads has this bug in its Makefile-->.</para>
+    <para><command>sed -i 's#$(LOBJS) ...</command>: This 
<command>sed</command>
+    fixes a race condition in the <filename>Makefile</filename>. It allows you
+    to run <command>make</command> with multiple jobs (e.g., <command>make 
-j4</command>)
+    <!-- how ironic that a package for using multiple threads has this bug in
+    its Makefile -->.</para>
 
     <para><option>--disable-static</option>: This option stops it compiling a
     static version of the library.</para>
 
     <para><option>--mandir=/usr/share/man</option>: This option puts the man
-    pages in /usr/share/man and not /usr/man.</para>
+    pages in <filename class="directory">/usr/share/man</filename> and not
+    <filename class="directory">/usr/man</filename>.</para>
   </sect2>
 
   <sect2 role="content">

Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/prog/git.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/prog/git.xml     2012-08-22 21:34:48 UTC (rev 10540)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/prog/git.xml     2012-08-22 22:30:35 UTC (rev 10541)
@@ -233,7 +233,7 @@
     <sect3><title>Configuration Information</title>
 
       <para>If you want to use <command>git svn</command> you will need to
-      install <xref linkend="subversion"/> and its perl bindings.</para>
+      install <xref linkend="subversion"/> and its Perl bindings.</para>
 
       <para>To be able to use git to pull from a https source you need first
       install the <xref linkend="cacerts"/> and then configure git to know 
where

Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/prog/guile.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/prog/guile.xml   2012-08-22 21:34:48 UTC (rev 10540)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/prog/guile.xml   2012-08-22 22:30:35 UTC (rev 10541)
@@ -232,7 +232,7 @@
         <term><command>guild</command></term>
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            is a wrapper program installed along with <command>guile</command>
+            is a wrapper program installed along with <command>guile</command>,
             which knows where a particular module is installed and calls it,
             passing its arguments to the program.
           </para>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/prog/other-tools.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/prog/other-tools.xml     2012-08-22 21:34:48 UTC (rev 
10540)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/prog/other-tools.xml     2012-08-22 22:30:35 UTC (rev 
10541)
@@ -1939,10 +1939,10 @@
         <title>gtk2-perl</title>
 
         <para><application>gtk2-perl</application> is the collective name for
-        a set of perl bindings for <application>GTK+</application> 2.x and
+        a set of Perl bindings for <application>GTK+</application> 2.x and
         various related libraries. These modules make it easy to write
         <application>GTK</application> and <application>GNOME</application>
-        applications using a natural, perlish, object-oriented syntax.</para>
+        applications using a natural, Perlish, object-oriented syntax.</para>
 
         <itemizedlist spacing="compact">
           <listitem>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/autofs.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/autofs.xml      2012-08-22 21:34:48 UTC (rev 
10540)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/autofs.xml      2012-08-22 22:30:35 UTC (rev 
10541)
@@ -250,7 +250,7 @@
     <sect3  id="autofs-init">
       <title>Boot Script</title>
 
-      <para> <application>autofs</application> installs it's own boot script,
+      <para> <application>autofs</application> installs its own boot script,
       but it has no capability for logging or visual conformance with other
       BLFS scripts.</para>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/lm_sensors.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/lm_sensors.xml  2012-08-22 21:34:48 UTC (rev 
10540)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/lm_sensors.xml  2012-08-22 22:30:35 UTC (rev 
10541)
@@ -309,7 +309,7 @@
         <term><command>sensors-conf-convert</command></term>
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            is a perl script to convert lm-sensors version 2 configuration 
files
+            is a Perl script to convert lm-sensors version 2 configuration 
files
             to work with version 3.
           </para>
           <indexterm zone="lm_sensors sensors-conf-convert">
@@ -322,7 +322,7 @@
         <term><command>sensors-detect</command></term>
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            is a perl script that will walk you through the process of scanning
+            is a Perl script that will walk you through the process of scanning
             your system for various hardware monitoring chips, or sensors,
             supported by libsensors(3), or more generally by the lm_sensors
             tool suite.

Modified: trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/udev-extras.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/udev-extras.xml 2012-08-22 21:34:48 UTC (rev 
10540)
+++ trunk/BOOK/general/sysutils/udev-extras.xml 2012-08-22 22:30:35 UTC (rev 
10541)
@@ -118,8 +118,9 @@
 
 <screen><userinput>make -f udev-lfs-186/Makefile.lfs 
keymap</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>To install <command>keymap</command> and it's assiciated files, 
-    run, as the <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user:</para>
+    <para>To install <command>keymap</command> and its associated files, 
+    issue the following command as the
+    <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>make -f udev-lfs-186/Makefile.lfs 
install-keymap</userinput></screen>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/gnome/core/at-spi2-core.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/gnome/core/at-spi2-core.xml      2012-08-22 21:34:48 UTC (rev 
10540)
+++ trunk/BOOK/gnome/core/at-spi2-core.xml      2012-08-22 22:30:35 UTC (rev 
10541)
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@
 
     <para>
       The <application>At-Spi2 Core</application> package is a part of the 
GNOME
-      Accessibility Project. It provides a Service Provider Interface for the 
Assisstive
+      Accessibility Project. It provides a Service Provider Interface for the 
Assistive
       Technologies available on the <application>GNOME</application> platform 
and a
       library against which applications can be linked.
     </para>
@@ -128,8 +128,8 @@
 
     <para>
       <parameter>--libexecdir=/usr/lib/at-spi2-core</parameter>: This
-      parameter ensures that programs will be installed into
-      given directory instead of the
+      parameter ensures that programs will be installed into the
+      given directory instead of
       <filename class="directory">/usr/libexec</filename>.
     </para>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/gnome/core/gnome-bluetooth.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/gnome/core/gnome-bluetooth.xml   2012-08-22 21:34:48 UTC (rev 
10540)
+++ trunk/BOOK/gnome/core/gnome-bluetooth.xml   2012-08-22 22:30:35 UTC (rev 
10541)
@@ -130,8 +130,8 @@
 
     <para>
       For <application>GNOME Bluetooth</application> to work
-      as expected, user needs to be allowed to write to
-      <filename>/dev/rfkill</filename>. Create
+      as expected, users needs to be allowed to write to
+      <filename>/dev/rfkill</filename>. Create a
       <application>Udev</application> rule that will allow
       normal users to write to <filename>/dev/rfkill</filename>
       with the following command as the

Modified: trunk/BOOK/gnome/core/gnome-desktop.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/gnome/core/gnome-desktop.xml     2012-08-22 21:34:48 UTC (rev 
10540)
+++ trunk/BOOK/gnome/core/gnome-desktop.xml     2012-08-22 22:30:35 UTC (rev 
10541)
@@ -32,8 +32,8 @@
     <title>Introduction to GNOME Desktop</title>
 
     <para>
-      The <application>GNOME Desktop</application> package contains library
-      which provides API shared by several applications on the 
+      The <application>GNOME Desktop</application> package contains a library
+      that provides an API shared by several applications on the 
       <application>GNOME</application> Desktop.
     </para>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/gnome/core/gnome-doc-utils.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/gnome/core/gnome-doc-utils.xml   2012-08-22 21:34:48 UTC (rev 
10540)
+++ trunk/BOOK/gnome/core/gnome-doc-utils.xml   2012-08-22 22:30:35 UTC (rev 
10541)
@@ -93,12 +93,12 @@
     </para>
 
     <para>
-      The packages are listed as recommended even though
-      <application>GNOME Doc Utils</application> will build fine without them.
-      If you don't install the recommended packages (and you pass the 
appropriate
-      flags to the <command>configure</command> command so that it will build
-      without them), functionality will be missing that is expected later in
-      other <application>GNOME</application> packages.
+      <application>Rarian</application> is listed as recommended even though
+      <application>GNOME Doc Utils</application> will build fine without it.
+      If you don't install <application>Rarian</application> (and you pass the
+      the appropriate flag to the <command>configure</command> command so that
+      it will build without it), functionality will be missing that is expected
+      later in other <application>GNOME</application> packages.
     </para>
 
     <para condition="html" role="usernotes">User Notes:

Modified: trunk/BOOK/gnome/core/libgweather.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/gnome/core/libgweather.xml       2012-08-22 21:34:48 UTC (rev 
10540)
+++ trunk/BOOK/gnome/core/libgweather.xml       2012-08-22 22:30:35 UTC (rev 
10541)
@@ -126,8 +126,8 @@
     <title>Command Explanations</title>
 
     <para>
-      <option>--enable-locations-compression</option>: This
-      parameter enables compression of Locations.xml files.
+      <option>--enable-locations-compression</option>: This parameter enables
+      compression of <filename>Locations.xml</filename> files.
     </para>
 
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude";

Modified: trunk/BOOK/gnome/core/libpeas.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/gnome/core/libpeas.xml   2012-08-22 21:34:48 UTC (rev 10540)
+++ trunk/BOOK/gnome/core/libpeas.xml   2012-08-22 22:30:35 UTC (rev 10541)
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@
 
     <para>
       <application>libpeas</application> is a GObject based plugins engine,
-      and is targetted at giving every application the chance to assume its own
+      and is targeted at giving every application the chance to assume its own
       extensibility.
     </para>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/gnome/core/libwacom.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/gnome/core/libwacom.xml  2012-08-22 21:34:48 UTC (rev 10540)
+++ trunk/BOOK/gnome/core/libwacom.xml  2012-08-22 22:30:35 UTC (rev 10541)
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
     <title>Introduction to libWacom</title>
 
     <para>
-      The <application>libWacom</application> is a library used 
+      The <application>libWacom</application> package contains a library used 
       to identify wacom tablets and their model-specific features.
     </para>
 

Modified: trunk/BOOK/gnome/core/polkit-gnome.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/gnome/core/polkit-gnome.xml      2012-08-22 21:34:48 UTC (rev 
10540)
+++ trunk/BOOK/gnome/core/polkit-gnome.xml      2012-08-22 22:30:35 UTC (rev 
10541)
@@ -121,14 +121,14 @@
         For the authentification framework to work,
         <command>polkit-gnome-authentification-agent-1</command> needs to be
         started. However, <command>make install</command> did not 
-        install startup file for the <application>Polkit GNOME</application> 
+        install a startup file for the <application>Polkit GNOME</application> 
         so you have to create it by yourself.
       </para>
 
       <para>
         Issue the following commands as the 
         <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user to create 
-        startup file for <application>Polkit GNOME</application>:
+        a startup file for <application>Polkit GNOME</application>:
      </para>
 
 <screen role="root"><userinput>mkdir -p /etc/xdg/autostart &amp;&amp;

Modified: trunk/BOOK/introduction/important/beyond.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/introduction/important/beyond.xml        2012-08-22 21:34:48 UTC 
(rev 10540)
+++ trunk/BOOK/introduction/important/beyond.xml        2012-08-22 22:30:35 UTC 
(rev 10541)
@@ -203,7 +203,7 @@
     <ulink url="&downloads-project;/deb2targz.tar.bz2"/> and
     <ulink url="&downloads-project;/rpm2targz.tar.bz2"/> to convert the 
archives
     into a simple <filename>tar.gz</filename> format.</para>
-    <para>You may also find an rpm2cpio script useful.  The perl version in the
+    <para>You may also find an rpm2cpio script useful.  The Perl version in the
     linux kernel archives at <ulink
     
url="http://lkml.indiana.edu/hypermail/linux/kernel/0210.2/att-0093/01-rpm2cpio"/>
     works for most source rpms.  The rpm2targz script will use an rpm2cpio 
script

Modified: trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/changelog.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/changelog.xml       2012-08-22 21:34:48 UTC 
(rev 10540)
+++ trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/changelog.xml       2012-08-22 22:30:35 UTC 
(rev 10541)
@@ -2824,7 +2824,7 @@
       <itemizedlist>
         <listitem>
           <para>[bdubbs] - Rename a lesstif man page to prevent
-          overwriting a perl man page with the same name. Fixes
+          overwriting a Perl man page with the same name. Fixes
           <ulink url="&blfs-ticket-root;3059">#3059</ulink>.</para>
         </listitem>
       </itemizedlist>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/multimedia/videoutils/ffmpeg.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/multimedia/videoutils/ffmpeg.xml 2012-08-22 21:34:48 UTC (rev 
10540)
+++ trunk/BOOK/multimedia/videoutils/ffmpeg.xml 2012-08-22 22:30:35 UTC (rev 
10541)
@@ -106,8 +106,8 @@
       <ulink 
url="http://sourceforge.net/projects/libdc1394/";>libdc1394</ulink>,
       <ulink url="http://linuxtv.org/downloads/v4l-utils/";>libv4l2</ulink>,
       <xref linkend="openjpeg"/>
-        (<application>FFmpeg</application> includes code for it's own jpeg2000
-        encoder and decoder which is enabled by default),
+        (<application>FFmpeg</application> includes code for its own jpeg2000
+        encoder and decoder, which is enabled by default),
       <xref linkend="speex"/>,
       <xref linkend="gnutls"/>,
       <xref linkend="openssl"/>,

Modified: trunk/BOOK/networking/connect/ppp.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/networking/connect/ppp.xml       2012-08-22 21:34:48 UTC (rev 
10540)
+++ trunk/BOOK/networking/connect/ppp.xml       2012-08-22 22:30:35 UTC (rev 
10541)
@@ -114,12 +114,16 @@
   <sect2 role="commands">
     <title>Command Explanations</title>
 
-    <para><command>rm include/linux/if_pppol2tp.h</command>: ppp-2.4.5 contains
-    an out of date copy of the kernel header linux/if_pppol2tp.h. This needs to
+    <para><command>rm include/linux/if_pppol2tp.h</command>:
+    <application>PPP-&ppp-version;</application> contains an out of date copy
+    of the kernel header <filename>linux/if_pppol2tp.h</filename>. This needs 
to
     be removed to <emphasis>force</emphasis> it to use the one installed in
-    /usr. If you don't remove this file the build will still succeed (thanks to
-    a poorly written Makefile) but it will fail to compile the openl2tp.so,
-    pppol2tp.so and rp-pppoe.so plugins:</para>
+    <filename class="directory">/usr</filename>. If you don't remove this file
+    the build will still succeed (thanks to a poorly written
+    <filename>Makefile</filename>) but it will fail to compile the
+    <filename class="libraryfile">openl2tp.so</filename>,
+    <filename class="libraryfile">pppol2tp.so</filename>,
+    and <filename class="libraryfile">rp-pppoe.so</filename> plugins:</para>
 
     <para><command>install -d /etc/ppp/peers</command>: This command creates
     a directory for PPP peer configuration files.</para>
@@ -193,9 +197,9 @@
       <title>DNS Server Configuration</title>
 
       <para>If you don't run your own caching DNS server (like
-      <xref linkend="bind"/>) pppd can ask your ISP for its domain name
-      servers and put them in /etc/ppp/resolv.conf. If you want to use their
-      domain name servers:</para>
+      <xref linkend="bind"/>) <command>pppd</command> can ask your ISP for its
+      domain name servers and put them in 
<filename>/etc/ppp/resolv.conf</filename>.
+      If you want to use their domain name servers:</para>
 
 <screen role="root"><userinput>mv /etc/resolv.conf{,.orig}
 ln -s ppp/resolv.conf /etc</userinput></screen>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/networking/netutils/networkmanager.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/networking/netutils/networkmanager.xml   2012-08-22 21:34:48 UTC 
(rev 10540)
+++ trunk/BOOK/networking/netutils/networkmanager.xml   2012-08-22 22:30:35 UTC 
(rev 10541)
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@
       tools that make networking simple and straightforward. Whether WiFi, 
wired,
       3G, or Bluetooth, NetworkManager allows you to quickly move from one 
network
       to another: once a network has been configured and joined once, it can be
-      detected and re-joined automatically the next time its available.
+      detected and re-joined automatically the next time it's available.
     </para>
 
     &lfs71_checked;

Modified: trunk/BOOK/postlfs/filesystems/fuse.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/postlfs/filesystems/fuse.xml     2012-08-22 21:34:48 UTC (rev 
10540)
+++ trunk/BOOK/postlfs/filesystems/fuse.xml     2012-08-22 22:30:35 UTC (rev 
10541)
@@ -127,7 +127,7 @@
 
     <para>
       <parameter>INIT_D_PATH=/tmp/init.d</parameter>: This parameter makes it
-      install its bootscript into /tmp/init.d.
+      install its bootscript into <filename>/tmp/init.d</filename>.
     </para>
 
     <para>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/postlfs/security/mitkrb.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/postlfs/security/mitkrb.xml      2012-08-22 21:34:48 UTC (rev 
10540)
+++ trunk/BOOK/postlfs/security/mitkrb.xml      2012-08-22 22:30:35 UTC (rev 
10541)
@@ -333,7 +333,7 @@
 <screen role="root"><userinput>kdb5_util create -r 
<replaceable>&lt;LFS.ORG&gt;</replaceable> -s</userinput></screen>
 
         <para>
-          Now you should populate the database with principles
+          Now you should populate the database with principals
           (users). For now, just use your regular login name or
           <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem>.
         </para>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/pst/typesetting/texlive.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/pst/typesetting/texlive.xml      2012-08-22 21:34:48 UTC (rev 
10540)
+++ trunk/BOOK/pst/typesetting/texlive.xml      2012-08-22 22:30:35 UTC (rev 
10541)
@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@
   <sect2 role="installation">
     <title>Installation of TeX Live</title>
 
-    <para>The <application>TeX Live</application> set of programs with it's
+    <para>The <application>TeX Live</application> set of programs with its
     supporting documents, fonts, and utilities is very large.  The upstream
     maintainers recommend placing all files in a single directory structure.
     BLFS recommends <filename class='directory'>/opt/texlive</filename>.</para>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/server/major/proftpd.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/server/major/proftpd.xml 2012-08-22 21:34:48 UTC (rev 10540)
+++ trunk/BOOK/server/major/proftpd.xml 2012-08-22 22:30:35 UTC (rev 10541)
@@ -92,7 +92,7 @@
 make</userinput></screen>
 
     <para>The tests for this package require a very old (2001) version of the
-    perl module Test::Unit.  Using the lastest version of this Test::Unit
+    Perl Module Test::Unit.  Using the lastest version of this Test::Unit
     results in many failures (34/1089) although the program appears to run
     well.  The tests take a long time (38 minutes, not CPU dependent) and are
     not recommended.  To test the results anyway, issue: <command>make
@@ -288,7 +288,7 @@
       <varlistentry id="ftpasswd">
         <term><command>ftpasswd</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>is a perl script designed to create and manage 
+          <para>is a Perl script designed to create and manage 
           AuthUserFiles and AuthGroupFiles of the correct format for 
proftpd.</para>
           <indexterm zone="proftpd ftpasswd">
             <primary sortas="b-ftpasswd">ftpasswd</primary>
@@ -299,7 +299,7 @@
       <varlistentry id="ftpmail">
         <term><command>ftpmail</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>is a perl script for sending email based on the proftpd 
TransferLog.
+          <para>is a Perl script for sending email based on the proftpd 
TransferLog.
           </para>
           <indexterm zone="proftpd ftpmail">
             <primary sortas="b-ftpmail">ftpmail</primary>

Modified: trunk/BOOK/x/lib/gtk+2.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/x/lib/gtk+2.xml  2012-08-22 21:34:48 UTC (rev 10540)
+++ trunk/BOOK/x/lib/gtk+2.xml  2012-08-22 22:30:35 UTC (rev 10541)
@@ -150,16 +150,18 @@
       <command>sed -i 's#l \(gtk-.*\).sgml#&amp; -o \1#'
       docs/{faq,tutorial}/Makefile.in</command>: If you have
       <xref linkend="docbook-utils"/> installed (specifically, if configure
-      finds db2html) then it will try to use it to rebuild some of it's html
-      documentation and fail due to bugs in some of the Makefiles. This sed
-      fixes the Makefiles.
+      finds <command>db2html</command>) then it will try to use it to rebuild
+      some of its HTML documentation and fail due to bugs in some of the
+      <filename>Makefile</filename>s. This <command>sed</command> fixes the
+      <filename>Makefile</filename>s.
     </para>
 
     <para>
       <command>sed -i 's#.*@man_#man_#' 
docs/reference/gtk/Makefile.in</command>:
-      This sed fixes one of the <filename>Makefile</filename>s so it installs 
the
-      man pages for gtk-builder-convert, gtk-query-immodules-2.0 and
-      gtk-update-icon-cache.
+      This <command>sed</command> fixes one of the 
<filename>Makefile</filename>s
+      so it installs the man pages for <command>gtk-builder-convert</command>,
+      <command>gtk-query-immodules-2.0</command>, and
+      <command>gtk-update-icon-cache</command>.
     </para>
 
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude";

Modified: trunk/BOOK/xsoft/office/libreoffice.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/xsoft/office/libreoffice.xml     2012-08-22 21:34:48 UTC (rev 
10540)
+++ trunk/BOOK/xsoft/office/libreoffice.xml     2012-08-22 22:30:35 UTC (rev 
10541)
@@ -99,9 +99,9 @@
     <bridgehead renderas="sect4">Recommended</bridgehead>
     <note>
       <para>
-        Most of these packages are recommend because if they're not installed
+        Most of these packages are recommended because if they're not 
installed,
         the build process will compile and install its own (often older)
-        version. If you're using <application>GCC 4.7</application> some of
+        version. If you're using <application>GCC 4.7</application>, some of
         those older packages will fail to compile.
       </para>
     </note>

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