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-------- Original Message -------- Subject: Re: rxvt-unicode. Date: Thu, 02 Aug 2007 15:31:27 -0500 From: Randy McMurchy <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> To: BLFS Development List <[email protected]> References: <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> Ag. D. Hatzimanikas wrote these words on 08/02/07 14:51 CST: > Randy, > I tried to correct some things, but I suck in English (I know my > sentences make sense to me, but I am never sure if they do make sense for > others > too), so some input is needed here (thats why I posted my patch anyway), > from all with better knowledge in English than me, that means pretty much > everyone. Don't worry about that Ag. I mean it. The content is what is important. We can always go in and fix grammar/spelling/sentence structure mistakes after you commit something. > About capitalizing the Unicode. It's a convention I see it often, I can > still change it if desired. I don't know. That's why I mentioned it. Let's hope someone who knows chimes in. > + <para><application>rxvt-unicode</application> is a clone of the terminal > + emulator <application>rxvt</application>, an X Window System terminal > emulator > + wich includes support for XFT and Unicode.</para> s/wich/which/ The following are just suggestions. Feel free to use them or not, or change them to suit your taste. > + <para>The <application>rxvt-unicode</application> terminal emulator > + uses the resource class <classname>URxvt</classname> and the resource > name > + <classname>urxvt</classname>. You can add X resource definitions to the > user's > + <filename>~/.Xresources</filename> file, or you can add them to the > system-wide > + <filename>$XORG_PREFIX/share/X11/app-defaults/URxvt</filename> file. s/or you can add them to/or to/ > + The following example provides a way, to load the > <classname>matcher</classname> s/,// > + <application>Perl</application> extension (assuming > <application>Perl</application> > + support wasn't disabled), so to be able by middle clicking the underline > URL, > + to open it with the specified browser. Might be smoother by: Perl extension (assuming Perl support wasn't disabled) which enables a middle button click to open an underlined URL in the specified browser. It also sets a backgroung and a foreground s/backgroung/background/ > + color and loads an Xft font. In order to do that, add the following > definitions as > + the <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user:</para> s/In order to do that, add/Accomplish this by adding/ > + <para>The <application>rxvt-unicode</application> application, can also > run in > + a daemon mode, which make possible to open multiple terminal windows > within the > + same process. The <command>urxvtc</command> client connects then to > + <command>urxvtd</command> daemon and requests a new terminal > window.</para> Remove the first comma in the first sentence. Then: s/which make/which makes it/ Additionally, you can probably remove the whole last sentence as that information is implied in the previous sentence about the daemon. Your call. > + <note> > + <para>Use that option with caution. If the daemon crashes, all the > + running processes in the terminal windows are terminated.</para> > + </note> I am getting to where I use fewer and fewer of the note/warning/caution boxes. They do draw attention, however, the readers shouldn't need a gaudy box so that they will read something. Again, your call. > + <para> > + You can start the <command>urxvtd</command> daemon in your system or How do you know the reader will be working on his own system? :-) s/your/the/ > + personal startup <command>X</command> session scripts (eg. s/eg./e.g.,/ > + <filename>~/.xinitrc</filename>), by adding the following lines near the > top of s/,// > + your script:</para> s/your/the/ BTW, ag, this is very good work! -- Randy rmlscsi: [bogomips 1003.26] [GNU ld version 2.16.1] [gcc (GCC) 4.0.3] [GNU C Library stable release version 2.3.6] [Linux 2.6.14.3 i686] 15:55:01 up 15:46, 1 user, load average: 0.68, 0.22, 0.09 -- http://linuxfromscratch.org/mailman/listinfo/blfs-dev FAQ: http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/blfs/faq.html Unsubscribe: See the above information page
