On Thu, Mar 06, 2008 at 09:35:58AM -0600, Randy McMurchy wrote:
> Thomas Trepl wrote these words on 03/04/08 16:27 CST:
> 
[...]
> 
> A couple of things. Try to avoid using "we" in the book, there's
> really few times it is necessary. For example, instead of the above
> you could say "This uid is only configurable at compile time and is
> used as the default".
> 
> Also, instead of the "run" at the end it may be preferable to use
> "issue". This is just a personal preference of mine, and is not
> cut in stone.
> 
> 
> > +    <para>If you want portman run with another uid/gid, then pass the 
> > options
> > +    DAEMON_UID=x and DAEMON_GID=y to the above make:
> 
> A bit smoother may be: "If you want the portman daemon to use a
> uid/gid other than the defaults, pass DAEMON_UID=x and DAEMON_GID=y
> as shown below:"

 I'll take a look at these in a little while (built a fresh LFS-6.3
yesterday, didn't have a graphical browser in the evening).  NFS,
and portmap, both seem fine.  For the future, I'll try to remember
to use the singular pronoun in BLFS.

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