On 07/21/2012 08:12 PM, rthom...@linuxfromscratch.org wrote: > Author: rthomsen > Date: 2012-07-21 12:12:47 -0600 (Sat, 21 Jul 2012) > New Revision: 10439 > > Added: > trunk/BOOK/kde4/core/polkit-kde-agent.xml > Modified: > trunk/BOOK/general.ent > trunk/BOOK/introduction/welcome/changelog.xml > trunk/BOOK/kde4/core/core.xml > trunk/BOOK/postlfs/security/consolekit.xml > Log: > Added polkit-kde-agent and ConsoleKit grammatical corrections. >
> > <para> > - You will also need a helper script that will create a file in > + You will also need a helper script that creates a file in > <filename class="directory">/var/run/console</filename> > - named as username that is logged in that contains > + named as the currently logged in user and that contains the > <application>D-Bus</application> address of the session. Create > - such script by running the following commands as the > + such a script by running the following commands as the > <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user: > </para> > From my English knowledge I don't think that "Create such a script" is correct. I guess "Create the script by running ... " would be more suitable. Also, thanks for other corrections, they look good to me. -- http://linuxfromscratch.org/mailman/listinfo/blfs-dev FAQ: http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/blfs/faq.html Unsubscribe: See the above information page
