Hi :) Seems reasonable :) There is something about the grammar of the last line that mildly irritates me. Making it "I will ..." rather than using the contraction helps a little but there is something odd about "best-effort". I'm sure there is a better word but i'm never able to remember it. My memory is going, maybe that's what is irritating. "Best-effort" is good enough. It's certainly unambiguous enough and clear enough. Regards from Tom :)
________________________________ From: Thorsten Behrens <t...@documentfoundation.org> To: Michael Meeks <michael.me...@novell.com> Cc: steering-discuss@documentfoundation.org Sent: Wed, 15 June, 2011 9:36:08 Subject: Re: [steering-discuss] proposed bylaws changes Michael Meeks wrote: > Counting votes we had: Florian, Charles, Andre, Olivier, Italo and > Sophie voting in favour; so I've made all of the edits in the wiki. > If there are no objections by tonight, I'll also change the text on the membership application page (http://www.documentfoundation.org/foundation/application-for-tdf-community-membership/) to read: Bylaws and commitment Please read the Foundation's Charter (its Bylaws and The Next Decade Manifesto), and confirm that you support the principle of an independent foundation. You should make a best-effort commitment to at least six (6) months activity within our projects. I've read the Foundation's Bylaws and The Next Decade Manifesto, and confirm that I support the principle of an independent foundation.* I'll make a best-effort commitment to contribute to the projects of TDF for at least six (6) months.* Cheers, -- Thorsten -- Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to steering-discuss+h...@documentfoundation.org Posting guidelines + more: http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette List archive: http://listarchives.documentfoundation.org/www/steering-discuss/ All messages sent to this list will be publicly archived and cannot be deleted -- Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to steering-discuss+h...@documentfoundation.org Posting guidelines + more: http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette List archive: http://listarchives.documentfoundation.org/www/steering-discuss/ All messages sent to this list will be publicly archived and cannot be deleted
