Bruno Haible <br...@clisp.org> writes:

> The doc looks good, except there's no point in showing the bodies of the
> three ChangeLog entries.
>
> I like in particular that you start the description with
>   "If you wish to output the @file{ChangeLog} with dates respecting the
>    time zone each individual commit was made in you can use ..."
> This is exactly right:
>   * First, show *what* the user can achieve with a certain feature / why
>     they should use it.
>   * Second, show *how* the user can achieve it.
> Because it allows the user to stop reading once they know that is not
> their goal / their use-case.

Thanks for the feedback and improvements.

Collin

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