On Wed, May 27, 2009 at 4:09 PM, Dave Miner <dminer at opensolaris.org> wrote: > Karen Tung wrote: >> >> Thanks you for everybody's input so far. I have updated the slide >> with everybody's suggestions. In addition to the previous comments, >> I added a new section for "future projects". >> >> Here's the latest version: >> >> >> http://www.opensolaris.org/os/project/caiman/files/caiman-description-0509.pdf > > As Ethan noted, do not use the term "Flash". Replication and recovery are > the terms we're using. If you need more space, then just take the first > bullet off, it seems redundant in this context.
If you need more space, then use more than 1 slide - that's no problem for me as long as the slides are self-contained. Maybe one or more of the caiman sub-projects could have their own page. I wanted the single page to be a guide, not something that causes pain and worry. -- -Peter Tribble http://www.petertribble.co.uk/ - http://ptribble.blogspot.com/
