Besides Jason's comments, I also list what I found for snap upgrade:

1. Page 12:
How to Destroy an Existing Boot Environment
In this example, ...
which or what example?

2. Page 12:
How to Destroy an Existing Boot Environment
Note - ...
"-f" should be "-F"

3. Page 13:
How to Display Information About Your Boot
Environments, Snapshots, and Datasets
"Become superuser or assume an equivalent role." is not needed.

4. Page 14:
Example 1?4
The output of "beadm list -s BE2" should only list snapshots of BE2.
Also should with the latest format. See
# beadm list -s newbe
BE/Snapshot Space Policy Created
----------- ----- ------ -------
newbe
newbe at install 106.53M static 2008-10-07 15:23
newbe at newbe 83.0K static 2008-10-17 14:09

5. Page 18:
beadm create
-p zpool: It is not support in current opensolaris release, though beadm 
usage will display this.

6. Page 19:
beadm destroy
Syntax: beadm destroy [-fF] beName | beName at snapshot
-f
-F

7. Page 19:
beadm list
Syntax: beadm list [-a | -ds] [-H] [beName]

8. Page 19:
beadm mount
The mount point could be a directory not existing

9. Page 20:
beadm unmount
Syntax: beadm unmount [-f] beName
-f Forcefully unmount the boot environment
even if its currently busy.

Cheers,
Angela

Jason Zhao ??:
> Hi, Barbara,
>
> Following is my ideas about snap upgrade, please see in line.
>
> Barbara.Lundquist at Sun.COM wrote:
>   
>> Install gang, 
>>
>> Please review the 1st batch of installation documentation for 
>> the 2008.11 release ASAP this week. 
>>
>> 1) Getting Started With OpenSolaris 2008.11 at
>> http://www.opensolaris.org/os/project/caiman/files/getstart.pdf
>>
>> Changes in Getting Started With OpenSolaris 2008.11:
>> - Please check blog links to see if any are outdated.
>> - I added a New Features section with Auto Install and Distro 
>>   Constructor descriptions.  
>> - I moved the Upgrade section into this book.
>> - The IPS sections are moved to a separate book that will be reviewed
>>   next week.
>> - The Snap Upgrade section was moved to a separate book per below.
>> - Rearranged some sections and rewrote for clarity.
>> - Basic installation procedures are largely unchanged.
>> - Some of the doc cross-references still point to 2008.05 docs.
>>
>> 2) Managing Multiple Boot Environments in OpenSolaris 2008.11 at
>> http://www.opensolaris.org/os/project/caiman/files/snapupgrade.pdf
>>   
>>     
> For snap upgrade
> 1.
> page 7:How to Create a New Boot Environment
> 3. Note ? The mount point must be an already existing directory that is 
> empty.
>
> Actually, the mount point could be a directory not existing. If the 
> mount point
> is not existing, the beadm utility will create a directory then mount 
> the Boot
> Environment on it.
>
>
> 2. The same point as #1 in Page 11: How to Mount a Boot Environment.
>
> 3.
> page 14: Example 1-3.
> The example is using a old beadm utility, right now the current beadm 
> should be looked like
> # beadm list -a opensolaris
> BE/Dataset/Snapshot Active Mountpoint Space Policy Created
> ------------------- ------ ---------- ----- ------ -------
> opensolaris
> rpool/ROOT/opensolaris NR / 3.61G static 2008-10-06 18:53
> rpool/ROOT/opensolaris at newbe - - 15.89M static 2008-10-16 13:37
>
> 4. the same cases for other beadm list examples.
>
> 5.
> Page 12. How to Destroy an Existing Boot Environment
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------------
> Note ? The beadm destroy command asks for confirmation before destroying 
> the boot
> environment. Add the -f option to the beadm destroy command to destroy 
> the boot
> environment without this confirmation request.
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------------
> The description for -f is really old here.
> Right now, it supports -f as well as -F.
> -f: if the BE is mounted, using -f to force destroy it, but it still pop 
> up confirmation request!
> -F: as the description above, the beadm destroy command to destroy the 
> boot environment without this confirmation request.
>
> Page 18. beadm Command Reference
> Also mention ?beadm destroy? here.
>
>
> Thanks
> Jason
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