Install Gang,
Can you review Jeff's comments below and advise me whether or not
to apply his edits to the Getting Started installation instructions?
Barbara


On 10/19/08 15:02, Barbara Lundquist wrote:
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> Subject:
> Re: [caiman-discuss] REVIEW installation docs 1st batch for 2008.11
> From:
> jeffrey huang <Jeffrey.Huang at Sun.COM>
> Date:
> Fri, 17 Oct 2008 15:55:50 +0800
> To:
> Barbara.Lundquist at Sun.COM
>
> To:
> Barbara.Lundquist at Sun.COM
> CC:
> caiman-discuss at opensolaris.org
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>
> Hi, Barbara
>
> I have few feedbacks on the Getting Started doc.
>
> Barbara.Lundquist at Sun.COM ??:
>> Install gang, 
>>
>> Please review the 1st batch of installation documentation for 
>> the 2008.11 release ASAP this week. 
>>
>> 1) Getting Started With OpenSolaris 2008.11 at
>> http://www.opensolaris.org/os/project/caiman/files/getstart.pdf
>>   
> Some comments for above docs:
>
> Page 5: Installation Options
> Option 4 can not apply to LiveCD. (Dave also pointed out).
>
> Page 14:
> Table 1-2
> Linux, or Windows and Linux
> Note...
> "the Solaris partition must precede the Linux swap partition."
>
> I think this request is not practical, unless delete Linux swap 
> partition, seems
> can't create a partition precede it. Maybe we need some other workaround.
>
> Page 14: Partitioning a Multiboot System
>
> "Prior to installing, you need to create a partition for installing
> the OpenSolaris software."
>
> Slim GUI installer can also create Solaris partition, so create partition
> before install is not mandatory.
>
> P16: Howto Install OpenSolaris 2008.11
>
> "The installation uses a previously created Solaris fdisk partition..."
>
> Maybe the better is:
> The installation uses an existing partition or new created Solaris 
> fdisk partition
>
> Page 36:
> Blank page
>
>> Changes in Getting Started With OpenSolaris 2008.11:
>> - Please check blog links to see if any are outdated.
>> - I added a New Features section with Auto Install and Distro 
>>   Constructor descriptions.  
>> - I moved the Upgrade section into this book.
>> - The IPS sections are moved to a separate book that will be reviewed
>>   next week.
>> - The Snap Upgrade section was moved to a separate book per below.
>> - Rearranged some sections and rewrote for clarity.
>> - Basic installation procedures are largely unchanged.
>> - Some of the doc cross-references still point to 2008.05 docs.
>>
>> 2) Managing Multiple Boot Environments in OpenSolaris 2008.11 at
>> http://www.opensolaris.org/os/project/caiman/files/snapupgrade.pdf
>>
>> Changes in Managing Multiple Boot Environments in OpenSolaris 2008.11:
>> - This is the former Snap Upgrade chapter with new section
>>   added for zones support. 
>> - Upgrade section was moved out of here and into the
>>   Getting Started Guide.
>> - Minimal changes except for new zones support section.
>>
>>
>> Review docs for Auto Installer and Distro Constructor
>> will be routed for review later this week.
>>
>> Barbara
>>
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