Clay Baenziger wrote:
> Hi all,
>       I don't think I've seen a code review request for the AI HTML 
> files in the caiman-docs gate ever before, however, Sundar pointed out 
> these files are getting a bunch more eyes (and I failed to do enough due 
> diligence in a recent update missing a few key points). So, let's do 
> code-review for these, starting, well now...
>       Could I get a a set of eyes or two to tell me if everything looks 
> good and accurate, or what doesn't read right in the files at:
>
> Original:
> http://www.opensolaris.org/os/project/caiman/auto_install/AI_install_server_setup.html
> Webrev:
> http://cr.opensolaris.org/~clayb/6420/webrev/
> Bug:
> http://defect.opensolaris.org/bz/show_bug.cgi?id=6420
>
>                                                       Thank you,
>                                                       Clay
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Clay,

    Why do you have to combine the X86 and SPARC setup instructions in 
to one set of instructions? Is there any request that there should be 
only one section that contains both X86 and SPARC setup? Even though the 
setup instructions are similar, the output is different. Putting them in 
the same section will be more confusing.  I want documentation to be 
clear even if involves duplication of steps.

Thanks,
Sundar

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