Hi Jean -

Here is some feedback on the doc:

Section 2. Assumptions and Dependencies

What about including dependencies on other technologies, like IPS?


3.3 Interface Tables

Under IPSTransfer, set_type is listed twice.


3.4.1.3.8 9 - 11
Is the _args attribute  cpio_args?


3.4.2 IPS Functionality
There is no explanation of the functionality like you have for the
Media functionality. That would make things more explicit.

3.4.2.3.2
typo - performthe/perform the



3.4.3. SVR4 Functionality
There is no explanation of the functionality like you have for the
Media functionality.  That would make things more explicit.


4 Use Case/Diagrams
The first use case implies that the transfer module is engaged, but it's 
not clearly called out.

Second use case:
typo: the esystem / the system

General question:
There is  duplicate methods in all of the Classes. Is there a way to 
combine that commonality into
a class that the other classes could then be sub-classes of?

thanks,

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        Ginnie 
    
    

  
                
      

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