Jake,

Very good!

On the Contact page, change the submit button's text from "Submit Query"
to "Send Comment".  Also, you should provide an email address.

On the Search page, my query returned 103 rows.  The first page displayed
16, and the "Next" link says "Next 15".  Why 16 and then 15?  Also, show
the row number at the left of each row, for easy reference.

The top nav links include "Search" but when I click on it, the breadcrumb
nav calls it "Power Search".  The "Quick Search" link brings up "Search".
 The names should agree.

The SuperiorHosts logo is very different on the home page than on the
Message Board.

Bad grammar in Showcases: "Check them out if your looking" -- should be
"you're"

Spotlight on Kablosion: "This company has 0 comments.  Click HERE to read
them."  Umm, maybe if there are 0 comments you shouldn't write "Click
HERE..."

-David

On Wed, 4 Oct 2000 21:33:10 -0400 "Jake Hileman" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
writes:
> Okay guys, with your help, I finally launched
> http://www.SuperiorHosts.com v2.0
> 
> Took me 5 weeks and a lot of testing and more testing.. and some 
> more
> testing. :P
> It's written in CF and uses mySQL as the database on Windows 2000 
> Server.
> 
> I added features like articles, host comments, article comments and 
> a
> forum/message board... and more. :-)
> 
> I was constantly asking questions in here and I wanted to show my
> appreciation by showing you the site.  Please feel free to visit and 
> check
> it out!  If you find any errors (i'm sure you will.. I can only 
> check so
> much.) please let me know!
> 
> I designed, "lay'ed out", programmed and configured the server.. it 
> sucks
> doing everything by yourself.
> 
> This is my first real CF site, since I'm only 19, I'm sure I have 
> plenty of
> time to make some more sites!
> 
> Everyone email me or reply to the list and let me know what you 
> think.. ALL
> COMMENTS are appreciated--especially from you guys!
> 
> cf rockz,
> 
> 
> jake
> 
> 
>
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