Looks good and probably ticks all their boxes - good luck :) On Mon, Nov 16, 2009 at 7:52 PM, Taco Fleur <taco.fl...@clickfind.com.au>wrote:
> Excellent, thanks for that. > > > Kind regards, Taco Fleur (CIO/CEO/Founder) > ------------------------------ > > *Advertise your business, products and services on **www.clickfind.com.au Get > more business!* > > > > This email (which includes any attachments) has been sent on behalf of > Commerce Engine Pty Ltd or its Associated Entities (hereinafter called > “clickfind”). The information contained in this communication may be > privileged and confidential. If you are not the intended recipient, any > use, disclosure or copying of this communication is expressly prohibited. > If you have received this E-mail in error, please delete it immediately. > Clickfind does not warrant or represent that this E-mail (including any > attached files) is free from electronic viruses, faults or defects. > Confidentiality > and legal privilege are not waived or lost by reason of mistaken delivery to > you. For more information about use, disclosure and access see our privacy > policy at http://www.clickfind.com.au/privacy-policy.cfm > > > > P* *please consider the environment before printing this e-mail > > > ------------------------------ > *From:* christophe.albr...@gmail.com [mailto:christophe.albr...@gmail.com] > *On Behalf Of *Christophe Albrech > *Sent:* Monday, 16 November 2009 6:06 PM > > *To:* cfaussie@googlegroups.com > *Subject:* Re: [cfaussie] Fire Up The Barbie - mate! > > Not that it's got anything to do with cf, but you might want to correct the > application description. > > "Fire Up The Barbie is an all Aussie app that let’s us Aussie’s do what we > do best – organize and cook up a barbie! > The application let’s you search for a bbq in ACT (more data to come, as we > have mined data for all states) and organize an event for it on facebook, > all details are passed to facebook where you can create the event and invite > your friends." > > > - it's not "let's", it's "lets". > - it's not "Aussie's" it's "Aussies" > - "organise" not "organized". the latter is a valid american English > alternative, but hey, you are, after all, selling a true blue, fair dinkum > Aussie app. > > Not trying to be a prick or a smartass (although I very much am both of > them), but bad grammar or spelling always reflect badly on the app and the > developer. > > Cheers, > > Tof > > > On Thu, Nov 12, 2009 at 4:20 PM, Taco Fleur > <taco.fl...@clickfind.com.au>wrote: > >> Hey guys, >> >> I just submitted an app written in CF and JS, just wondering if you could >> spare a moment and cast your vote (5 stars of course ;-) here >> http://mashupaustralia.org/mashups/fire-up-the-barbie/ >> >> Ooh, and its a facebook app as well so you can add it to your profile and >> whenever you feel like a barbie with your mates, just Fire Up The Barbie, >> crack open a tinnie and cook some snags! >> >> -- >> Kind regards, >> Taco Fleur >> clickfind™ - The new Australian Online Marketing Platform (OMP) >> http://www.onlinemarketingplatform.com.au >> http://www.clickfind.com.au >> >> -- >> You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups >> "cfaussie" group. >> To post to this group, send email to cfaus...@googlegroups.com. >> For more options, visit this group at >> http://groups.google.com/group/cfaussie?hl=. >> > > -- > You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups > "cfaussie" group. > To post to this group, send email to cfaus...@googlegroups.com. > For more options, visit this group at > http://groups.google.com/group/cfaussie?hl=. > > -- > You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups > "cfaussie" group. > To post to this group, send email to cfaus...@googlegroups.com. > For more options, visit this group at > http://groups.google.com/group/cfaussie?hl=. > -- You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "cfaussie" group. To post to this group, send email to cfaus...@googlegroups.com. For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/cfaussie?hl=.
