Hello,
I reviewed draft-ietf-csi-proxy-send-01 and have the following
comments/remarks:
- In section 4.1, "figure 1: Proxy ND operations", in the first message,
I think the "SLLAO = B_LL" should be "SLLAO = A_LL"
- Small typo in section 6, "(PSO.)" should be "(PSO)."
- I have a concern about the content of the Security Considerations
(Section 8).
It would be nice to have a warning text such as: "Note that if a Secure
Proxy ND is corrupted, it can impersonate all the node in the subnet
in which it is authorized to act as a proxy."
- The section 10 (normative references) contains a reference to
[I-D.ietf-netlmm-proxymip6] that is now RFC 5213
As you can see, I have only minor comments. The document is in a good
shape.
Hope it helps.
Regards,
Tony Cheneau
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