Hi all,

not sure if this is the right place but I found a few typos
and wanted to tell the world about them;-)


index:          1
where:          ix, paragraph 2, line 2
found:          an CLFS system
suggested:      a CLFS system

index:          2
where:          ix, paragraph 4, line 3
found:          an CLFS system
suggested:      a CLFS system

index:          3
where:          xiii, paragraph '5.5. Part V - Building the CLFS System', last 
line
found:          all of the programs
suggested:      of all the programs

index:          4
where:          xiii, Headline
found:          5.6. Appendices
suggested:      5.6. Part VI Appendices

index:          5
where:          xiii, paragraph '5.6. Appendices', next to last line
found:          the the build order
suggested:      the build order

index:          6
where:          4, last paragraph, first line
found:          if you building
suggested:      if you are building

index:          7
where:          25, first line
found:          changes specifics
suggested:      changes specific (or specific changes)

index:          8
where:          26, paragraph '1.5.3. News Server'
found:          find the game search
suggested:      find the gmane search

index:          9
where:          32, first paragraph, line 3
found:          if your building
suggested:      if you are building

index:          10
where:          44, paragraph 1, line 3
found:          a CLFS system
suggested:      an CLFS system

index:          11
where:          65, --with-__thread
found:          to use use the
suggested:      to use the


then I found some lines where text is missing at the end of the line:
(in fact text is there in the pdf (because after a pdftops I can see it)
but maybe it's just some rendering problem):


where:          58, highlighted line between paragraph 1 and 2
found:          text missing at end of line, last chars I see: 's/-pc-/-c

where:          66, highlighted line around end of page
found:          text missing at end of line, last chars I see: >configur

where:          69, highlighted line around end of page
found:          text missing at end of line, last chars I see: --hos


Now with these important 'errors' fixed, the final release will surely come 
soon...


Rudolf

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