On Fri, 1 Sep 2023 12:26:26 GMT, Andrey Turbanov <[email protected]> wrote:

>> Found many typos in java.desktop by IDEA's inspection `Proofreading | Typo`
>
> Andrey Turbanov has updated the pull request incrementally with one 
> additional commit since the last revision:
> 
>   8312165: Fix typos in java.desktop Swing
>   
>   apply suggestions from review

Looks good to me except for the minor comment.

src/java.desktop/share/classes/javax/swing/text/DefaultCaret.java line 1295:

> 1293:         // ab[B. I'd actually prefer abB]. But, if I implement that
> 1294:         // a delete at abBA] would result in aBA] vs a[BA which I
> 1295:         // think is totally wrong. To get this right we need to know 
> what

Suggestion:

        // ab[B. I'd actually prefer abB]. But, if I implement that,
        // a delete at abBA] would result in aBA] vs a[BA which, I
        // think, is totally wrong. To get this right we need to know what

Let's drop some more commas to separate the complex sentences. Especially, the 
one on the first line where “that” could be interpreted as a conjunction 
otherwise.

I've been looking over all the changes, and again I struggled to parse the 
comment.

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Changes requested by aivanov (Reviewer).

PR Review: https://git.openjdk.org/jdk/pull/14847#pullrequestreview-1606891522
PR Review Comment: https://git.openjdk.org/jdk/pull/14847#discussion_r1312989311

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